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goin 14..you cool with that?
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we know u gay Skillz, but ask him he'll try and play dumb
till u say it's strange that .Sandman. always makes Dreams cum
you gonna stay a virgin, bitches laugh when they get u hard
reminds me of sony cameras how they refuse to take SD's Card
u dont even matter i make it look EZ-defeating this bastard
this could be a game of luck how skill isnt even a factor
face it mod or not u can't control this L im handing u right here
your gonna lose-it (lucid) Dreams like u fell into a nightmare
think u gonna free skate? till u you get smacked like free-base
if i go to dreams state my mean str8 will leave Dream in a dream state
quit rap put ya bars on a shelf or pardon ya health
or change ya name to mc Lupus....
...inside you know u just destroying yaself
like old folk, stop breathing durin the night u can rest in peace
but dont mistake it 4 apnea imma suffocate dreams in his sleep
Last edited by Leonidas; November 1st, 2010 at 04:31 PM
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After this i wont be battling in RB for a min, so i can focus on just modding and somethin else gow and I have in the works
GL
So its 11:07P.M. and i'm online playin pool
and i have no motivation...but its all i need to body this fool
Listen i'll never be seen taking an L from somebody who's...
..as horrible at rappin as dude, <--unless i'm bitting from you
and i'm just sayin the complete truth....
that you should stay 150k away from any rap booth
man i'm getting bored writting this verse, yaaawwwn
i can't help it, this guy is Quit Pitiful... and i'm soul khan
why'd you go 14 lines.. who u tryin to impress
this aint the 1st time u get "sonned by a brother".....incest
I'm willing to keep this nobody in the league
roflmao.. just to watch 17 other ppl body this geek
kids the type to get red bumps and just call'em zits
so ur girlfriend wont touch u..but she lets u watch as i cum on her tits
we know u gay Skillz, but ask him he'll try and play dumb
till u say it's strange that .Sandman. always makes Dreams cum
ok opener
hints all the colorful stats n charts wen we see u leave feed
you gonna stay a virgin, bitches laugh when they get u hard
reminds me of sony cameras how they refuse to take SD's Card
lol...
u dont even matter i make it look EZ-defeating this bastard
this could be a game of luck how skill isnt even a factor
meh
face it mod or not u can't control this L im handing u right here
your gonna lose-it (lucid) Dreams like u fell into a nightmare
meh
think u gonna free skate? till u you get smacked like free-base
if i go to dreams state my mean str8 will leave Dream in a dream state
forced
quit rap put ya bars on a shelf or pardon ya health
or change ya name to mc Lupus....
...inside you know u just destroying yaself
good
like old folk, stop breathing durin the night u can rest in peace
but dont mistake it 4 apnea imma suffocate dreams in his sleep
good concept, missed punch
vs.
So its 11:07P.M. and i'm online playin pool
and i have no motivation...but its all i need to body this fool
meh
Listen i'll never be seen taking an L from somebody who's...
..as horrible at rappin as dude, <--unless i'm bitting from you
good
and i'm just sayin the complete truth....
that you should stay 150k away from any rap booth
seems forced, missed
man i'm getting bored writting this verse, yaaawwwn
i can't help it, this guy is Quit Pitiful... and i'm soul khan
decent
why'd you go 14 lines.. who u tryin to impress
this aint the 1st time u get "sonned by a brother".....incest
oh, good punch
I'm willing to keep this nobody in the league
roflmao.. just to watch 17 other ppl body this geek
decent, could be worded better
kids the type to get red bumps and just call'em zits
so ur girlfriend wont touch u..but she lets u watch as i cum on her tits
eh, ok
close battle, I think vario barely edge this one out
vote- vario
Last edited by A.T.; November 1st, 2010 at 02:34 AM
DayumNation
You missed one of my bars A.T.
Originally Posted by A.T.
that's 2 bars there not 1 way long one lol
my bad dawg... lol
DayumNation
Disregard line 3 "hints all the colorful stats n charts wen we see u leave feed"
it was supposed to be erased
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we know u gay Skillz, but ask him he'll try and play dumb
till u say it's strange that .Sandman. always makes Dreams cum
this was cool for a cum line
you gonna stay a virgin, bitches laugh when they get u hard
reminds me of sony cameras how they refuse to take SD's Card
good
u dont even matter i make it look EZ-defeating this bastard
this could be a game of luck how skill isnt even a factor
lol, nice
face it mod or not u can't control this L im handing u right here
your gonna lose-it (lucid) Dreams like u fell into a nightmare
decent, could have been worded better
think u gonna free skate? till u you get smacked like free-base
if i go to dreams state my mean str8 will leave Dream in a dream state
wording was cool, actual punch was decent
quit rap put ya bars on a shelf or pardon ya health
or change ya name to mc Lupus....
...inside you know u just destroying yaself
pretty good
like old folk, stop breathing durin the night u can rest in peace
but dont mistake it 4 apnea imma suffocate dreams in his sleep
good closer
Skillful:
So its 11:07P.M. and i'm online playin pool
and i have no motivation...but its all i need to body this fool
plain
Listen i'll never be seen taking an L from somebody who's...
..as horrible at rappin as dude, <--unless i'm bitting from you
not feeling this
and i'm just sayin the complete truth....
that you should stay 150k away from any rap booth
whoa, looks like you're not even trying anymore, way simple
man i'm getting bored writting this verse, yaaawwwn
i can't help it, this guy is Quit Pitiful... and i'm soul khan
not to get too picky, but improper spelling of words can really take away from your verse. Other than that, this punch was ok.
why'd you go 14 lines.. who u tryin to impress
this aint the 1st time u get "sonned by a brother".....incest
lol, funny
I'm willing to keep this nobody in the league
roflmao.. just to watch 17 other ppl body this geek
eh
kids the type to get red bumps and just call'em zits
so ur girlfriend wont touch u..but she lets u watch as i cum on her tits
too simple
Vote: Vario took this one easy. Skill, can definitely see you didn't spend much time on this one.
Interesting...
M-vario...Verse Was Straight...Ok Opener...The One That Folloed Was Eh...But After That It Picked Up...The Free-Base/State To Me Was Off A Lil...Liked The Lupus And The Ending Was Straight...Not A Bad Overall...
Skill...You Said It All In Ya Opening...Not That It Was A Bad...But Showed...
The First 4 Bars Were Plain...And There Wasn't Too Much After That Until The Incest Bar...Then Had A Plain Ending...
Decent Battle...
V/M-vaio...More Consstant...Better Overall...
I Have Spoke...
Ya Basic Raps Will Leave You Basically Wrapped...
It Is What It Is...
The Specialist: \ thu spe-sul-ist\ n 1. One You Don't Want To See In A Battle 2. adj. Deadly 3. Lyrically Combative Beyond Lethalness 4. Also Known As TS / sent: "For Health Reasons, It Is Not Wise To Mess With The Specialist."
M-vario
we know u gay Skillz, but ask him he'll try and play dumb
till u say it's strange that .Sandman. always makes Dreams cum
ok opener
you gonna stay a virgin, bitches laugh when they get u hard
reminds me of sony cameras how they refuse to take SD's Card
lol
u dont even matter i make it look EZ-defeating this bastard
this could be a game of luck how skill isnt even a factor
ok
face it mod or not u can't control this L im handing u right here
your gonna lose-it (lucid) Dreams like u fell into a nightmare
meh forced
think u gonna free skate? till u you get smacked like free-base
if i go to dreams state my mean str8 will leave Dream in a dream state
meh, but multies were there
quit rap put ya bars on a shelf or pardon ya health
or change ya name to mc Lupus....
...inside you know u just destroying yaself
not diggin this
like old folk, stop breathing durin the night u can rest in peace
but dont mistake it 4 apnea imma suffocate dreams in his sleep
ok
vs.
SKILL
So its 11:07P.M. and i'm online playin pool
and i have no motivation...but its all i need to body this fool
ok
Listen i'll never be seen taking an L from somebody who's...
..as horrible at rappin as dude, <--unless i'm bitting from you
worded funny
and i'm just sayin the complete truth....
that you should stay 150k away from any rap booth
nah
man i'm getting bored writting this verse, yaaawwwn
i can't help it, this guy is Quit Pitiful... and i'm soul khan
meh
why'd you go 14 lines.. who u tryin to impress
this aint the 1st time u get "sonned by a brother".....incest
lol
I'm willing to keep this nobody in the league
roflmao.. just to watch 17 other ppl body this geek
nah
kids the type to get red bumps and just call'em zits
so ur girlfriend wont touch u..but she lets u watch as i cum on her tits
no
Vote: M-vario
Overral mvario came with a more harder consitent verse his misses wernt as bad as skill and i can tell skill had rushed/keyed his verse im dissappointed but vario gets this by more polished verse.
OKC
you gonna stay a virgin, bitches laugh when they get u hard
reminds me of sony cameras how they refuse to take SD's Card
vs
why'd you go 14 lines.. who u tryin to impress
this aint the 1st time u get "sonned by a brother".....incest
a few misses but M-V's misses were harder and M-V's quotable was a very nice line imo
v/MV
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