Good Evening

[Studda]

Good Evening
[SOUNDCLICK]9752295[/SOUNDCLICK]

i dig this beat so hard.... so i had to make my own version of it. lookin for a little feed

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Lyrics:
i been chillin on this blunt feeling sideways
i been steady on the hunt you know that this grind pays
but theres more meant for me take it to the top incredibly
you know im on to the next one call me jay z
but i dont fuck with the mainstream
hear a hot beat and i turn it to amazing
cause i hear things with a wide open hearshot
inspiration floatin in yeah i got a thought dock
just to store my plans and my memories people never tend to see
how much is in their grasp so i take it like a burglary
and ima see it till the end binge till they cringe
hate on every fuckin soul that couldnt get it in
maybe im just being cocky jock me
im just striving for the best like rocky
so while i pop them bars i serve the hottest bars
im the illest shit since the chinese sars


yeah i had a good day roll it over to the night
like some roll over minutes i be sprintin through the sky
my minds in the back playin back seat driver
my wants overcome guess im just a subscriber
and while my days seem to go and im ponderin
i know my destiny is clear im conquerin
i aint stressin im a miracle waitin to happen
not a blessin somethin far from the public attraction
ima do it my way no other
ima spit it in your face just like a big brother
im comin with intended consistence im in it to win it
i kill it with this fuckin mic i stay with the deadly precision
so ima keep tellin these hoes
i got the best flow and game behind closed doors
watch me get it how i get it takin down the competition
with my skill set dont ya feel that

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[LivenLearn23]

I liked the lines, they were pretty creative, but the flow needs a lil work. The beat was on point, and Im looking forward to hearing more from you

[Dan Da Don]

yeah man the beat is nice..
like LivenLearn said, flow does need a bit of work.
content was nice still..
overall this song was on point pretty much.
tighten up the flow and delivery and your blessed.

[Studda]

good looks on the feed...

upn'

[Studda]

good looks on the feed...

upn'

[Studda]

i feel like such a fag for upn' a second time...... with no feed inbetween.... fuck it

feed me feed me feed me

[Genesis631]

feelin the beat as soon at it started..came in aiite ,flow is good ,delivery is ok ...emotion is ok .. punchlines are aiite ,swagg is cool ,confidence is good ,ad libs are ok ,second verse came in better than the first ,keep doing your thing and improving

[RobbieAnthem]

I feel your energy doesnt fit the track. The beat is mad laid back I felt you shoulda been calm and more smooth on it. Good lyrics and flow on the track. 2nd verse is the best verse to me. Track needs a hook instead of talking on it the hook. Overall cool track