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Filthy McNasty
Yung_J
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TradeMark
Check, ill post links after.
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Your are Filthy, and your flows are nasty
Ima have you breaking out with a case of bad acne
Your a sad excuse for a rb emcee
Your used to being treated like a ho, like bobby did whitney
You get it? Ha, You could never be that clever
Cuz my flow changes so fast like Michigan's weather
And your flow stays dry like the Nevada desert
And I be banging ya moms, making her wetter and wetter
I got this dude scared, he's shook
I bet he gets all his rhymes from a nursery book
And i hate to end it, but that's all i got to say
So ill end with sayin you a bitch, and have a nice day
TradeMark
TradeMark
My bad both links same this is other link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...803/index.html
TradeMark
Before this battle started I had to throw the book at him for contradictions
But since you lie, bury him and shelve his writtens like Yung adult fiction
This kid's too yung to drive, so I'm not talking valet when I spark him one
1 head shot'll have his head nodding like the kid was diagnosed with parking-sons
I'll punch him in his chest, snatch his Yung Money, leave his lungs a Lil Weezy
Make him play the background like an ad-lib after I kill Yung J-easy (Jeezy)
These 'Final Four' bars are easy, this Wolverine never rhymes with clout
He's just chokes under pressure like when C. Webb called that timeout
I thought his name was a typo, but its all starting to make sense though
Yung is not well hung; he sticks dick to his chick, but she's never seen an 'O'
This kid's too yung to drive, so I'm not talking valet when I spark him one
1 head shot'll have his head nodding like the kid was diagnosed with parking-sons
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nada.
J, u were just rhyming, no punches no anything. FM your punches were blah, you had one okay one but you got enuff for a win. No hate. vote: F.McNasty
N.Santana vs A.T
RTF - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...742/index.html
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This kid's too yung to drive, so I'm not talking valet when I spark him one
1 head shot'll have his head nodding like the kid was diagnosed with parking-sons
Cool line.
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Nothing...
This battle was ehhh.... either of you came hard. Need to step it up!
Gotta come with more punches & be more creative guys! gosh ahah
My last two bars got cut off...
This is not a competiton... I'm major league, straight killing him Pronto
J couldn't get on my level if his favorite color was blue & he repped Toronto
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...768/index.html
hit that, please
Filthy: the parkinsons line was decent, J-easy wasn't bad. Seen better from you, but you did what you needed to do to take this.
Yung J, you gotta up the level of complexity and creativity you're working with. Read battles from vets and see how they write their verses and try model it off that. Keep elevating, man.
Vote: Filthy
This kid's too yung to drive, so I'm not talking valet when I spark him one
1 head shot'll have his head nodding like the kid was diagnosed with parking-sons
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too basic
young j needds to beef up his creativity and think outside the box. very basic from him.
thought i'd get more outta FM but he obviously didnt care. drop hard no matter who you
battlin fam. this was lame from you.
v. Fil
This kid's too yung to drive, so I'm not talking valet when I spark him one
1 head shot'll have his head nodding like the kid was diagnosed with parking-sons
I'll punch him in his chest, snatch his Yung Money, leave his lungs a Lil Weezy
Make him play the background like an ad-lib after I kill Yung J-easy (Jeezy)
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I like the creativity
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Just some rhyming words.
V.Filthy
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