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    Life Is Music

    Life.
    Begins with a single beat.
    Life.Starts with 2 beats.Life.Ends with no beats.
    If life is music then what is death?
    I come outside and see life everywhere.Children laughing, cars moving, people talking.
    Life is the flute that calms the beast inside you.
    Life is the Riddle that keeps you thinking.
    Life is the rhythm that plays the violin.
    One lost chord and your music is at a stop.
    If life is the organism that lives in your body then is tones the cells?
    Life is the fortissimo,thats loud enough to knock sense into you.
    Life is the piano that gives you kindness.
    Music is a eternal slumber, even the cold hearted person trembles into its gaze.
    Life is the Da Vinci of its era. Music is beautiful, creative, brilliant.Yet so simple.
    If we came across a river is that a sound?Or is it music.
    Life is the eyes to your dream.Nightmares when the key isn't right.
    Let me see notes when I see birds and strings when I see worms, predators are the forte and prey is the piano.
    Life is the whole of the book and living is the note.Make sure you write down your accomplishments.

    Well this is my first time writing in the poetic section.I love making written scriptures when I'm hearing to instrumental music and violins.Calms the nerves.Hope you enjoy.Thank you
    Last edited by 3rdstreet; October 9th, 2010 at 10:12 PM

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    Re: Life Is Music

    Idk why this was sleeped on... This is where its at.. Love the comparison of music and life.. After all these years I never thought of that..

    Music is a eternal slumber, even the cold hearted person trembles into its gaze.
    Life is the Da Vinci of its era. Music is beautiful, creative, brilliant.Yet so simple.

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    Re: Life Is Music

    Quote Originally Posted by ReiGn.XL View Post
    Idk why this was sleeped on... This is where its at.. Love the comparison of music and life.. After all these years I never thought of that..

    Music is a eternal slumber, even the cold hearted person trembles into its gaze.
    Life is the Da Vinci of its era. Music is beautiful, creative, brilliant.Yet so simple.

    WURK!!!!
    Thank you very much.Appreciate it.

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    Re: Life Is Music

    Life.Starts with 2 beats.Life.Ends with no beats.

    ^^
    i thought this line was pretty decent but overral you and this piece got mad potential you just need a better grasp of the poetic machanics. grammar is a major problem with beginning pieces but dont worry just keep expanding your craft an reading other poetry to get the feel of it good try thoe keep at it.

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