Old times=Good times

[MCdodne]

Think about back in the days
cold drinks graff and a chop to blaze
when everyday didnt seem the same
creating mayhem with my mates
runnin a muck man it was all great
thats where i wanna be today
i know most of you can relate



Back in the days no worries no stress
cept maybe how you gonna get durries and a sesh
go down the skate park for a shred
do an all nighter no time for bed
no violence and no threats
go for a swim at the beach to feel fresh
get maccas in the morning bacon and eggs
go sit back down the park half dead
that high and over tired just laugh-in
why cant i got back in time why can't we?

[MCdodne]

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[Tool]

ayo...try and write more? maybe, for one thing. Don't make it stupidly long though.

what are you...sixteen, seen, bit young to be talking bout 'back in the day' but...I'll say there's times I see potential with what you're doing, like the rhymes ain't half bad, content is a little iffy at times, & a likkle simple but if shit is real to you -- keep running with that

just keep it moving, & keep wordsmithing. Pay more attention to your favourite emcee(s), it'll prolly help you grow.

Nothing more to add.