User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Buried Down Below

  1. October 2nd, 2010, 05:47 AM #1
    Linus
    Linus is offline
    Im High as Fuck Linus's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2010
    Age
    31
    Posts
    240
    Battle Record
    3-13

    Buried Down Below

    an old freestyle i turned into a song.
    PLEASE RATE! i need critical feedback!



    Beat by Total feat.notorious big
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. October 4th, 2010, 01:49 AM #2
    Eko Ren
    Eko Ren is offline
    Hungry for Meter
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Posts
    100

    Re: Buried Down Below

    Listening...

    Right, the beat is cool, sounds like some nineties shit...

    Your delivery is pretty good, you're holding the beat well. Alternately, I'm not sure the subject matter syncs with that kind of instrumental, which sounds like some kind of slow jam or a smooth club bump. Just my personal opinion. You have a bit of an abstract flow, too, which throws it off a little bit.

    The content is meh.

    7/10.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Buried
    By Rishi P in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 22
    Last Post: June 10th, 2011, 04:42 PM
  2. ...Between The Buried And Me.
    By Moniker in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: January 7th, 2009, 11:46 PM
  3. ...Buried Alive...(H'n'R)
    By Uben. Sonned in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: August 13th, 2008, 03:01 PM
  4. Between The Buried And Me
    By Incin. in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: August 26th, 2007, 09:43 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules