Animosity .vs. The Written Catastrophic
Only LLL heads NOT in either crew are permitted to vote.
Alyse (whos in both crews is allowed to vote, if agreed upon by both battlers)
10-14 lines
Battles set on Wed.
Verses Due on Sun.
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Animosity .vs. The Written Catastrophic
Only LLL heads NOT in either crew are permitted to vote.
Alyse (whos in both crews is allowed to vote, if agreed upon by both battlers)
10-14 lines
Battles set on Wed.
Verses Due on Sun.
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Last edited by Jynx; September 22nd, 2010 at 03:24 PM
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yup
mmhmm
Im like if a tornado was forcefully fuckin a hurricane, Im the unwanted storm,
look animosity is morphing to wack, fags this isn't transformers,
FV is scared, ill I leave him runnin like I'm his grandfather pullin the belt
couse in LLL hes up a little bit, then goes back down like a welt,
Catastrophic'll murder animosity, and this dick FV is abolished to quick,
like after i buy home from the market liquidated and demolish the shit,
his lyrics are all a glitch, hes like only a dry-heave, ima vomit on ya bitch,
if he was to meet serial killer, honest, you know he wouldent be bit by dohmar,
and hoe "Its MY dick in YOUR mouth to correct your details,
see this dudes cool with both crews, hes on boths sides like a she-male
ill end this pathetic nut rag, just repeat it, youll fail,
do not pass go, you collect no doe, you go directly to jail,
ill lay a 1-2 punch thatll win the belt without tourney
and he'll drop like fatest man alive arriving on a plastic gurney.
*Been edited for mis-spellings*
Last edited by Dekken; September 26th, 2010 at 08:19 AM
you kill me everytime you fuckin write lmfao
^i agree with you, shit wait for me in the hearse
cuz i feel the same way, he kills my high after every verse
so with blades..i'll go for ur top to bruise his brain
grab ya face and slash you on both sides like ur username
jam ur vocal chord so far down ur throat he'll beg for the tec
till your talking out the ass like ........eddie murphy in sherk
someone get help..im pulling on ur head till its weak
so when i twist it off, im eating ur insides like oreo cookie technique
he claims to be on the rise in the rankings..LAUGH? dont make me
cuz you'd think he was on broken escalator, how his come-up's shaky
your to sloppy with ur hits. so on the ground is where this mess'll lay
you could pack ur punches in cereal, and still lack something special K
when im in a cypher everyone bobbing there heads sayin "u the man fam"
but when he's rapping it makes everyone go home like a grand-slam
Nice verse, Uppin even though theres only 3 battle links in the forum lol
upp
Last edited by Dekken; September 29th, 2010 at 10:12 PM
FV is scared, ill I leave him runnin like I'm his grandfather pullin the belt
couse in LLL hes up a little bit, then goes back down like a welt,
lol ok
and hoe "Its MY dick in YOUR mouth to correct your details,
see this dudes cool with both crews, hes on boths sides like a she-male
lmfao! Nice one..
ill end this pathetic nut rag, just repeat it, youll fail,
do not pass go, you collect no doe, you go directly to jail,
no hit, but a lil chuckle
vs
^i agree with you, shit wait for me in the hearse
cuz i feel the same way, he kills my high after every verse
jam ur vocal chord so far down ur throat he'll beg for the tec
till your talking out the ass like ........eddie murphy in sherk
your to sloppy with ur hits. so on the ground is where this mess'll lay
you could pack ur punches in cereal, and still lack something special K
I like this word play here
when im in a cypher everyone bobbing there heads sayin "u the man fam"
but when he's rapping it makes everyone go home like a grand-slam
ok at best
I got Animosity takin this battle with more consistant harder hitting punches, not bad. Idk wat i expected from Kadis, but that wasnt it.
Im so new to text battling its not funny, i still have alot to learn.
FV
^i agree with you, shit wait for me in the hearse
cuz i feel the same way, he kills my high after every verse
Good opener
so with blades..i'll go for ur top to bruise his brain
grab ya face and slash you on both sides like ur username
descent
jam ur vocal chord so far down ur throat he'll beg for the tec
till your talking out the ass like ........eddie murphy in sherk
descent
someone get help..im pulling on ur head till its weak
so when i twist it off, im eating ur insides like oreo cookie technique
good
he claims to be on the rise in the rankings..LAUGH? dont make me
cuz you'd think he was on broken escalator, how his come-up's shaky
descent
your to sloppy with ur hits. so on the ground is where this mess'll lay
you could pack ur punches in cereal, and still lack something special K
barely descent
when im in a cypher everyone bobbing there heads sayin "u the man fam"
but when he's rapping it makes everyone go home like a grand-slam
descent closer
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kadis
Im like if a tornado was forcefully fuckin a hurricane, Im the unwanted storm,
look animosity is morphing to wack, fags this isn't transformers,
descent
FV is scared, ill I leave him runnin like I'm his grandfather pullin the belt
couse in LLL hes up a little bit, then goes back down like a welt,
good
Catastrophic'll murder animosity, and this dick FV is abolished to quick,
like after i buy home from the market liquidated and demolish the shit,
barely descent
his lyrics are all a glitch, hes like only a dry-heave, ima vomit on ya bitch,
if he was to meet serial killer, honest, you know he wouldent be bit by dohmar,
barely descent
and hoe "Its MY dick in YOUR mouth to correct your details,
see this dudes cool with both crews, hes on boths sides like a she-male
good
ill end this pathetic nut rag, just repeat it, youll fail,
do not pass go, you collect no doe, you go directly to jail,
Nah
ill lay a 1-2 punch thatll win the belt without tourney
and he'll drop like fatest man alive arriving on a plastic gurney.
Nah
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Vote - FV, for more consistency with the punches
Kadis is in my crew so this is only feed back so you guys can get votes on this
Kadis man i couldn't quote anything from you fam.. you had some attempts, but they mostly all missed
Fv had 1 not the best by anymeans but goodish
I really can't say too much other then it shows so much that you both are audio heads
Your wording and type of punches are diff, somethings work in audio battles just because of they way you can say them, and voice inflections
But anyway FV got this
Animosity wins