LLL SEASON 13 FIGHT FOR UR SPOT
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GOODLUCK
Last edited by Alyse Miller; September 26th, 2010 at 05:58 PM
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Originally Posted by GodOfWar
pfff!
na dawg, i seen ya battle. a mis match is fact
if the old me, gow predicts landslide-ironically underground ware ya musics at
you twat. i get rid of basic verses w/ bars of trife
your wackness & bad skill are married women, its stuck wit you for life
ya styles ass. Ur in dope? ur a fluke in that crew
if i did drop a stiff bar, u'd bend over & take it hard like bad news
you bastard. im the top chick my verses bury shit
its a thin-line between bein ass & shit, an ur verses the thong between it
ur shit faggot. ur a mommas boy with out clout
he was stuck in-the-closet, but his daddy still manage to beat the bitch out
never the popular one. ur the nerdiest at text
if hes in the in-crowd, he'd be laid out broken & stomped to death
i been across rivers. Floatin w/ sights in front of me
you been across rivers. Swimmin the borders w/ a group of mexicans illigally
im hot ur stuffed ass. kid ur in no position to talk
you got 0 chance of winnin like a person born 100% crippled hopin to walk
Last edited by Alyse Miller; September 20th, 2010 at 10:23 PM
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Check, This loser will only lose like The Binghamton Mets again..
at least Alyse metts admits hes named after a team that will never win
ima white boy with A game you can call me a yankie
Yankies agesnt the metts? not possible, the mets are receaving a spanking,
face facts you cant rap, your raps are doo,
i battled my fuckin grandmother and i coulda swore it was you
this dude tryed to fuck with Dope, but can only stick to sniffin glue
he couldent handle the buzz, hence why he never made it into the crew
im heated, hes less than noon, im blistering hott
fuck suspention, i get it interestin like a thickening plot
yes, Alyse is winning this, but hes winnin a lose
and i leave him in red water like the rehab track and swimming with jaws,
Alyse metts? all your verses are full of senceless threts
this Tko is a home run hit, im elfuago, his avitar his spanish its only right to call him a spick,
im rolling blunts, while this fag works at taco bell rolling barettos
and his bitch his free to lay (FritoLay) like a bag of toastitos
Last edited by Dekken; September 23rd, 2010 at 06:57 AM
if i did drop a stiff bar, u'd bend over & take it hard like bad news
you bastard. im the top chick my verses bury shit
its a thin-line between bein ass & shit, an ur verses the thong between it
ur shit faggot. ur a mommas boy with out clout
he was stuck in-the-closet, but his daddy still manage to beat the bitch out
never the popular one. ur the nerdiest at text
if hes in the in-crowd, he'd be laid out broken & stomped to death
i been across rivers. Floatin w/ sights in front of me
vs.
nada
Kadis, i dont know what happen here but ya verse was all over the place. Alyse is girl so any chance of personals failed and nothing really was direct. Alyse had funny punchlines, she took this one fam. Vote: A.Metts
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Check My Museq
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freepost sway sway freepost freepost no vote...
IM Dq'd
anywho, i guess i can vote on the actual battle now
Alyse
na dawg, i seen ya battle. a mis match is fact
if the old me, gow predicts landslide-ironically underground ware ya musics at
-played
you twat. i get rid of basic verses w/ bars of trife
your wackness & bad skill are married women, its stuck wit you for life
-wow @ the wording... ok punch
ya styles ass. Ur in dope? ur a fluke in that crew
if i did drop a stiff bar, u'd bend over & take it hard like bad news
-ehhh... cool i guess
you bastard. im the top chick my verses bury shit
its a thin-line between bein ass & shit, an ur verses the thong between it
i dont like multies when u rhyme the same words like 3 times... bad bar imo
ur shit faggot. ur a mommas boy with out clout
he was stuck in-the-closet, but his daddy still manage to beat the bitch out
-ummm...
never the popular one. ur the nerdiest at text
if hes in the in-crowd, he'd be laid out broken & stomped to death
-not feeling this
i been across rivers. Floatin w/ sights in front of me
you been across rivers. Swimmin the borders w/ a group of mexicans illigally
-what were u going for with this..? punch lacked sting
im hot ur stuffed ass. kid ur in no position to talk
you got 0 chance of winnin like a person born 100% crippled hopin to walk
-no
-Kad-
Check, This loser will only lose like The Binghamton Mets again..
at least Alyse metts admits hes named after a team that will never win
-not directed at her... btw metts is a her
ima white boy with A game you can call me a yankie
Yankies agesnt the metts? not possible, the mets are receaving a spanking,
-lame'sh
face facts you cant rap, your raps are doo,
i battled my fuckin grandmother and i coulda swore it was you
-lol... too simple
this dude tryed to fuck with Dope, but can only stick to sniffin glue
he couldent handle the buzz, hence why he never made it into the crew
-played, cool flip
im heated, hes less than noon, im blistering hott
fuck suspention, i get it interestin like a thickening plot
-n0
yes, Alyse is winning this, but hes winnin a lose
and i leave him in red water like the rehab track and swimming with jaws,
-wording lost u this bars potent
Alyse metts? all your verses are full of senceless threts
this Tko is a home run hit, im elfuago, his avitar his spanish its only right to call him a spick,
-not feeling this
im rolling blunts, while this fag works at taco bell rolling barettos
and his bitch his free to lay (FritoLay) like a bag of toastitos
-ehh.. cool
vote Alyse
Last edited by God 0f War; September 23rd, 2010 at 07:11 PM
keep that shit out the thread stylized
uppin
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na dawg, i seen ya battle. a mis match is fact
if the old me, gow predicts landslide-ironically underground ware ya musics at
Ehh, naw.
you twat. i get rid of basic verses w/ bars of trife
your wackness & bad skill are married women, its stuck wit you for life
Blah..
ya styles ass. Ur in dope? ur a fluke in that crew
if i did drop a stiff bar, u'd bend over & take it hard like bad news
Alright.
you bastard. im the top chick my verses bury shit
its a thin-line between bein ass & shit, an ur verses the thong between it
Nope.
ur shit faggot. ur a mommas boy with out clout
he was stuck in-the-closet, but his daddy still manage to beat the bitch out
Nahh
never the popular one. ur the nerdiest at text
if hes in the in-crowd, he'd be laid out broken & stomped to death
Nope.
i been across rivers. Floatin w/ sights in front of me
you been across rivers. Swimmin the borders w/ a group of mexicans illigally
Nope.
im hot ur stuffed ass. kid ur in no position to talk
you got 0 chance of winnin like a person born 100% crippled hopin to walk
Naw, weak closer.
All in all pretty weak verse.
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Check, This loser will only lose like The Binghamton Mets again..
at least Alyse metts admits hes named after a team that will never win
He? It's a girl. But yeah, this sucked.
ima white boy with A game you can call me a yankie
Yankies agesnt the metts? not possible, the mets are receaving a spanking,
Lol @ spanking. That made me laugh how gay it was. Naaw.
face facts you cant rap, your raps are doo,
i battled my fuckin grandmother and i coulda swore it was you
Nope.
this dude tryed to fuck with Dope, but can only stick to sniffin glue
he couldent handle the buzz, hence why he never made it into the crew
naww
im heated, hes less than noon, im blistering hott
fuck suspention, i get it interestin like a thickening plot
Blahh
yes, Alyse is winning this, but hes winnin a lose
and i leave him in red water like the rehab track and swimming with jaws,
...
Alyse metts? all your verses are full of senceless threts
this Tko is a home run hit, im elfuago, his avitar his spanish its only right to call him a spick,
...
im rolling blunts, while this fag works at taco bell rolling barettos
and his bitch his free to lay (FritoLay) like a bag of toastitos
blah wack closer.
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Honestly, this battle was garbage. Both need help with wording and coming up with better concepts that aren't so played. I almost didn't even wanna keep breaking down these verses. Anyway, Alyse takes this with ONE alright punch in this match.
V/ - Alyse
sorry for the short expo but im mad tired
my vote goes to alyse
reasons being:
more actual punches
better structure
both were kinda subpar but keep it up and keep improving
v. Alyse
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