Week 8: FV vs N Santana

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 13

Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.

verses due thursday 11:59 est

Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines

[FrankV]

check

[Prince S.Tana]

Check.

[Prince S.Tana]

I don't intentionally sleep on ya F, I just notice ya dont wake up shit..
i expect ya Personals to be fraudulent....since yall share the same make-up kit..
You claim that you're homo negative but this gay parade around like Alan Ross..
judged ya last drop and that lettuce to believe you constantly get ya salad toss..
Ya skill is a joke and getting such a prize's bogus..
..that match ya needs (knees) to manifest
leaving it bent down with ya mouth wide open..
Get served raw unlike ya blind dates, you'd get cut..direct meat..
the last bitches who wanted to FV just pronounced the alphabet incorrectly..
RB was whack but i quickly made change and critiqued u bitches n fags..
Then you came along wanting to make change.....with ya ass cheeks split in half..
Verse of hidden whackness, blind drops?.. no wonder ya flow sucks..
My punch lands leaves tear ducts (ducks) inlined, but his dont EVER show up..

[FrankV]

lol.. this dick.. little does he know i beat wyte on netcees under my alias.. lol @ this cheesecake.

Clock.. plz stfu before i merk you again! cause i clearly KO'd you on netcess under my alias,

im starting not to believe her..you know lying's a sin?
cuz it seems to me, your alias is the only one here collecting a win
& she bites most-likey! so im gonna leave this fraud canned
or hopefully GOW'll treat her like comcast, n get this broad banned
think u can top me? plz this bitch is playing games like yahtzee
voters think your a skinhead, ................cause a win you will nazi
& bitch your gross.. no lie, saying u cute? thats misleading boo
so ugly, your mom had to get drunk before breast feeding you
made it top ten, but after comp came, u were no longer abuzz
now you see how quick san is sinking, after all thats what it does
as a kid she played cards, but saying she stripped would make her a joker
cuz this bitch is sooo nasty, the boys talked her into playing get dressed poker

[Prince S.Tana]

Let's get some votes

[Wise Ways]

Get served raw unlike ya blind dates, you'd get cut..direct meat..
the last bitches who wanted to FV just pronounced the alphabet incorrectly..
RB was whack but i quickly made change and critiqued u bitches n fags..
Then you came along wanting to make change.....with ya ass cheeks split in half..

vs.

& she bites most-likey! so im gonna leave this fraud canned
or hopefully GOW'll treat her like comcast, n get this broad banned
& bitch your gross.. no lie, saying u cute? thats misleading boo
so ugly, your mom had to get drunk before breast feeding you
made it top ten, but after comp came, u were no longer abuzz
now you see how quick san is sinking, after all thats what it does

`` pretty cool little battle here thats being snoozed on.. i think most of santana's verse had potential but wording ran its toll on it.. FV had some pretty funny punches.. but you shouldn't change the font of the verse at all, theres no point for it. i got fv taking this with a good showing from both..

v(fv

[Malice]

sorry for the short expo but im mad tired and just need to get some votes in before they close

basically i got this going to FV

reasons:
he was more consistent overall
structure was more appealing
had a more comedic appeal to it

both did pretty well, again, FV was just more consistent

v. FV