Week 8: Josh S vs Con-science

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 13

Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.

verses due thursday 11:59 est

Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines

[Sting3r]

I'ma prove it, these voters don't respect & it's a nuisance
My sub-conscience is telling me that Gow Should fucking do it.
how you s'posed to be gud? You should be fighting for ya spot
cause your hidden content votes have a lot in common with ur drops
I rob opponents of their dignity. my stamina is certainly displayed
If you ever robbed me it's in the same context of arch earlier today
Treat this like a race you'd lose, least I'm giving you that chance
and when ya girl is all over me just consider that the victory lap dance
drop before the mag is up, hit a blunt order a feast
Bag beat this fag to a fat lip, I'm just here to make it morbid obese
Ya rhymes are just whack fucker, plz go catch some aids
or stay here & suffer from a case of.. Heavy shit to better impact ya face

[NRH]

lmao ill drop soon..

[NRH]

Text takes beautiful english smarts, so u've implied to the class that your worth is..
...simply to be well-versed in your personal art of writing the wackest verses.
but you'll get credit.. for being a sickly bitch coz I didn't mean you could work the best,
When your WeakLiness is apparent conceptually, you just prolly think i slur in text.
Fuck it tho, abuse ya style. Yours has a dick to be sucked when faggots enter
Dudes callin' you sick in text are only wishin' ur weak ass would just get better.
Josh, you made a confused move to wear make up and call twin,
coz any bitch who openly says it's okay to let Josh In is only Josh, In.
I'll toss him.. drop ya gritty mess, then go drink your concepts away you farce fool
I told him to give up the bar stools..instead he made shitty concepts a starred tool
Yo who's harmed u ? s'obvious how directness is a game ya've lost,
So u'll play the foul.. blamin' the league and everyone else for your lame ass loss.

[Syaw Esiw]

I'ma prove it, these voters don't respect & it's a nuisance
My sub-conscience is telling me that Gow Should fucking do it.
--wack as hell
how you s'posed to be gud? You should be fighting for ya spot
cause your hidden content votes have a lot in common with ur drops
--didn't connect, almost had it though..
I rob opponents of their dignity. my stamina is certainly displayed
If you ever robbed me it's in the same context of arch earlier today
--yawn.. boring, also false but do you.
Treat this like a race you'd lose, least I'm giving you that chance
and when ya girl is all over me just consider that the victory lap dance
--there ya go. good.
drop before the mag is up, hit a blunt order a feast
Bag beat this fag to a fat lip, I'm just here to make it morbid obese
--wording was off.. shoulda said morbidly but its coo
Ya rhymes are just whack fucker, plz go catch some aids
or stay here & suffer from a case of.. Heavy shit to better impact ya face
--ehh.. kinda off on this one.

vs.

Text takes beautiful english smarts, so u've implied to the class that your worth is..
...simply to be well-versed in your personal art of writing the wackest verses.
--not too good.
but you'll get credit.. for being a sickly bitch coz I didn't mean you could work the best,
When your WeakLiness is apparent conceptually, you just prolly think i slur in text.
--conceptually this wasn't done right
Fuck it tho, abuse ya style. Yours has a dick to be sucked when faggots enter
Dudes callin' you sick in text are only wishin' ur weak ass would just get better.
--played for days
Josh, you made a confused move to wear make up and call twin,
coz any bitch who openly says it's okay to let Josh In is only Josh, In.
--nah
I'll toss him.. drop ya gritty mess, then go drink your concepts away you farce fool
I told him to give up the bar stools..instead he made shitty concepts a starred tool
--this was aight..
Yo who's harmed u ? s'obvious how directness is a game ya've lost,
So u'll play the foul.. blamin' the league and everyone else for your lame ass loss.
--cool

``in result, there were misses from both.. although i felt josh came a bit harder.. this was actually close.. i got josh taking it..

v(Josh S.

[Dekken]

how you s'posed to be gud? You should be fighting for ya spot
cause your hidden content votes have a lot in common with ur drops
I rob opponents of their dignity. my stamina is certainly displayed
If you ever robbed me it's in the same context of arch earlier today

Vs

uck it tho, abuse ya style. Yours has a dick to be sucked when faggots enter
Dudes callin' you sick in text are only wishin' ur weak ass would just get better.
Josh, you made a confused move to wear make up and call twin,
coz any bitch who openly says it's okay to let Josh In is only Josh, In

my vote goes to con-science, both had flow and punchs but i was feelin this verse more as a battle insted of a diss.

V/Con-Science

[Alyse Miller]

josh

Treat this like a race you'd lose, least I'm giving you that chance
and when ya girl is all over me just consider that the victory lap dance
Dope
drop before the mag is up, hit a blunt order a feast
Bag beat this fag to a fat lip, I'm just here to make it morbid obese
Lol


vs.


con

Nothin

These was the hardest lines i see. Overral pretty solid verse here you was alot more consistant then con. Con your punches were badly worded your concepts was ok but your wording killed it some of your lines are stretched. but overral it wasnt strong enough to win here.


vote : josh

[NRH]

lol you're fucking retarded.

kadis don't vote on my battles.

wack assssssss league voting. glad to sign out.

[Prince S.Tana]

Text takes beautiful english smarts, so u've implied to the class that your worth is..
...simply to be well-versed in your personal art of writing the wackest verses.

vs.

Treat this like a race you'd lose, least I'm giving you that chance
and when ya girl is all over me just consider that the victory lap dance
drop before the mag is up, hit a blunt order a feast
Bag beat this fag to a fat lip, I'm just here to make it morbid obese

this looked like a tie at first, but the obese line gave Josh the win.

Vote: Josh S.

[JDoe]

Josh S
I'ma prove it, these voters don't respect & it's a nuisance
My sub-conscience is telling me that Gow Should fucking do it.
ok
how you s'posed to be gud? You should be fighting for ya spot
cause your hidden content votes have a lot in common with ur drops
lol
I rob opponents of their dignity. my stamina is certainly displayed
If you ever robbed me it's in the same context of arch earlier today
decent
Treat this like a race you'd lose, least I'm giving you that chance
and when ya girl is all over me just consider that the victory lap dance
ok
drop before the mag is up, hit a blunt order a feast
Bag beat this fag to a fat lip, I'm just here to make it morbid obese
lmao
Ya rhymes are just whack fucker, plz go catch some aids
or stay here & suffer from a case of.. Heavy shit to better impact ya face
decent closer

vs.


Con-Sci
Text takes beautiful english smarts, so u've implied to the class that your worth is..
...simply to be well-versed in your personal art of writing the wackest verses.
lol
but you'll get credit.. for being a sickly bitch coz I didn't mean you could work the best,
When your WeakLiness is apparent conceptually, you just prolly think i slur in text.
ok i get the concept, not harsh though
Fuck it tho, abuse ya style. Yours has a dick to be sucked when faggots enter
Dudes callin' you sick in text are only wishin' ur weak ass would just get better.
ok but rhyme off
Josh, you made a confused move to wear make up and call twin,
coz any bitch who openly says it's okay to let Josh In is only Josh, In.
haha
I'll toss him.. drop ya gritty mess, then go drink your concepts away you farce fool
I told him to give up the bar stools..instead he made shitty concepts a starred tool
ha'
Yo who's harmed u ? s'obvious how directness is a game ya've lost,
So u'll play the foul.. blamin' the league and everyone else for your lame ass loss.
ok




Con: You have good concepts and i think if you minimize the size of it others will see it as well...rappin through ya shit from start to finish flowed evenly and some of ya shit had me laughing

Josh S.: you did well in ya verse and had some nice things but as far personals you lacked the harshness in them...I thought you did well though too

*Nah man Yo Con won this shit tho, i think yall need to go through his verse again and run back a grindtime or some shit, he had some funny as shit in there
I will even bold his punches
its 3 to 2 verses Josh

V/Con

[$in City]

Josh

Treat this like a race you'd lose, least I'm giving you that chance
and when ya girl is all over me just consider that the victory lap dance

drop before the mag is up, hit a blunt order a feast
Bag beat this fag to a fat lip, I'm just here to make it morbid obese


con

Text takes beautiful english smarts, so u've implied to the class that your worth is..
...simply to be well-versed in your personal art of writing the wackest verses.


con i think youre verse had a hella good flow but josh's disses were more stronger...josh had a slightly more consistent verse...

v/josh

[Malice]

sorry for the short expo but im mad tired and have to get these votes in before they close

gotta go with josh s. on this one

reasons being:
structure(felt Con had some stretched lines, the flow was fine just felt like it was a bit run on at times)
harsher punches

decent verse from both, keep it up

v. Josh s.