Week 8: Orc vs Bags CONT. MATCH

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 13

Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.

verses due thursday 11:59 est

Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines

[Orc]

holla

[bags...]

20?

[Orc]

just do 16 yo

[bags...]

Alright that's straight ill edit this w my drop

[Orc]

ext

[bags...]

He's been bytin his whole life steadily earning his false wins
in the archives bumpin jaws themesong and all u can see is circling shark fins
So attacking his Irish heritage is the only thing that should be next
so when u see bags with a potato its only to muffle the slugs ill bury in his neck
This whole thread wreaks of cheap lager and butterscotch schnapps
No wonder their most relevant ethnic leader is on the lucky charms box
Ur lame fckin verses should come with life insurance policies
So when voters die of boredom they can care for there wife & children properly
Lets do this 16s nuthin to me well ur huffin from fatigue
So don't make a ffus, less its orc vs j doe and they both fuckin leave
When I was disgussing concepts wit j in the league chat room...
I mentioned an orchestrate line, but gave up cuz no one believes that's true
But lets breathe on that and check his rivals repping netcees
He's so sick! Yet he's dodgin metasin like he has suicidal tendencies
So fuck his life the champ match is mine just stop it forget ur shot
Ill leave burd shit splattered on the curb like any common city block

Alright srry for dropping late but I fig the ext was good till tonite

And maf can u feed again since I only had 3 bars up ?

Aight peace

[Orc]

lets compare, shall we?
last wk i beat sintro, then peepd if u cud bring the ruckus kid
u won a battle with conscience? wowww, i do that everytime i fuck an ugly chick
peep it im flexin. cuz honestly, this geek aint a test when
his title dream is such a dying shot, it helpd scientists improve lethal injections
&champ matches are for dope heads. damnit, u loser
so, lets face it - u couldnt get with the program if u married ya computer
now ima pop ten e. snort sumthin, & go crazzzzy dude..
shittt. ima do a dance all over ya face 'til even ya head gets rave reviews
i'll smash ya face in aswell til it basically swells..
then ima leave bags on his head. to the point u'd think dudes suffocating himself
nowww hold up a sec. don't come at me fast geek..
dude says bags nameplays are playd, yet his OWN verse was fulla them last wk
netcees knew ya were wack, just a stupid newbie
u got ran outta The Town so fast Ben Afleck had to rewrite his newest movie
the homeless faggt'll leave rb, take this window & shut da cunt down
..ironically, even if you DO click Home, it'll just read 'error, no results found'

[Mafioso.]

last wk i beat sintro, then peepd if u cud bring the ruckus kid
u won a battle with conscience? wowww, i do that everytime i fuck an ugly chick
peep it im flexin. cuz honestly, this geek aint a test when
his title dream is such a dying shot, it helpd scientists improve lethal injections
i'll smash ya face in aswell til it basically swells..
then ima leave bags on his head. to the point u'd think dudes suffocating himself



...vs nthing

lol baags wtf??????/ by ya reviews in da mag i thought ud drop sumthing dope i feel that u aint have time tho..anywya orc took this hands down his concepts, delivery and punches were better snd stung more v/orc

[bags...]

Wtf?

Please no one else vote on this I said I'm gonna drop 16

No one else vote till I drop thx

Edit I dropped votes now plz...

[$in City]

Bags: dont drop a partial verse again...its just not a good look

Lets do this 16s nuthin to me well ur huffin from fatigue
So don't make a ffus, less its orc vs j doe and they both fuckin leave

liked this

So fuck his life the champ match is mine just stop it forget ur shot
Ill leave burd shit splattered on the curb like any common city block

kinda liked this


Orc:

last wk i beat sintro, then peepd if u cud bring the ruckus kid
u won a battle with conscience? wowww, i do that everytime i fuck an ugly chick

funny shit...good start..

now ima pop ten e. snort sumthin, & go crazzzzy dude..
shittt. ima do a dance all over ya face 'til even ya head gets rave reviews

this was tight...

i'll smash ya face in aswell til it basically swells..
then ima leave bags on his head. to the point u'd think dudes suffocating himself

obvious bags wordplay but done well enough...

i think orc got this kinda easy...seems like bags just wasnt ready to battle this week i guess...i seen better from him...solid verse from orc

v/orc

[Cred]

He's been bytin his whole life steadily earning his false wins
in the archives bumpin jaws themesong and all u can see is circling shark fins
Ehh, naw.
So attacking his Irish heritage is the only thing that should be next
so when u see bags with a potato its only to muffle the slugs ill bury in his neck
Reaching. Wording issue.
This whole thread wreaks of cheap lager and butterscotch schnapps
No wonder their most relevant ethnic leader is on the lucky charms box
Decent.
Ur lame fckin verses should come with life insurance policies
So when voters die of boredom they can care for there wife & children properly
This had potential.
Lets do this 16s nuthin to me well ur huffin from fatigue
So don't make a ffus, less its orc vs j doe and they both fuckin leave
Lol. Okay.
When I was disgussing concepts wit j in the league chat room...
I mentioned an orchestrate line, but gave up cuz no one believes that's true
Alright.
But lets breathe on that and check his rivals repping netcees
He's so sick! Yet he's dodgin metasin like he has suicidal tendencies
Decent.
So fuck his life the champ match is mine just stop it forget ur shot
Ill leave burd shit splattered on the curb like any common city block
Ehh, nah.

vs

last wk i beat sintro, then peepd if u cud bring the ruckus kid
u won a battle with conscience? wowww, i do that everytime i fuck an ugly chick
Alright opener.
peep it im flexin. cuz honestly, this geek aint a test when
his title dream is such a dying shot, it helpd scientists improve lethal injections
Lol. This was dope.
&champ matches are for dope heads. damnit, u loser
so, lets face it - u couldnt get with the program if u married ya computer
Alright, cool flip on this concept.
now ima pop ten e. snort sumthin, & go crazzzzy dude..
shittt. ima do a dance all over ya face 'til even ya head gets rave reviews
Decent.
i'll smash ya face in aswell til it basically swells..
then ima leave bags on his head. to the point u'd think dudes suffocating himself
Niceee.
nowww hold up a sec. don't come at me fast geek..
dude says bags nameplays are playd, yet his OWN verse was fulla them last wk
Ok.
netcees knew ya were wack, just a stupid newbie
u got ran outta The Town so fast Ben Afleck had to rewrite his newest movie
Ehh, nah.
the homeless faggt'll leave rb, take this window & shut da cunt down
..ironically, even if you DO click Home, it'll just read 'error, no results found'
Naw, didn't like this.

___________________________

Alright, this was prolly the best battle I've voted on so far. ( Haven't voted on the champ match yet though) Bags came with some nice shots. Some wording issues but all in all had a cool verse. That ffus punch was nice from bags. Orc had some fire in his verse though imo. The bags line and lethal injection punches were nice. Both had some cool verses, this was an enjoyable read here from both. Nice match, but I got Orc taking this with more consistency in his verse. Good shit y'all.

V/ - Orc

[Clockwise.]

this battle doesnt really need a break down.. bags was all over the place with shit wording n lame concepts. Orc took this with ez.. the ugly chick N lethal injection lines were dope.. the bags on his head line was illy.

v/orc for ovb reasons.

[Alyse Miller]

bags best lines:
Lets do this 16s nuthin to me well ur huffin from fatigue
So don't make a ffus, less its orc vs j doe and they both fuckin leave
Lol. Okay.
When I was disgussing concepts wit j in the league chat room...
I mentioned an orchestrate line, but gave up cuz no one believes that's true

But lets breathe on that and check his rivals repping netcees
He's so sick! Yet he's dodgin metasin like he has suicidal tendencies


vs


orcs best lines:

peep it im flexin. cuz honestly, this geek aint a test when
his title dream is such a dying shot, it helpd scientists improve lethal injections

i'll smash ya face in aswell til it basically swells..
then ima leave bags on his head. to the point u'd think dudes suffocating himself

nowww hold up a sec. don't come at me fast geek..
dude says bags nameplays are playd, yet his OWN verse was fulla them last wk


This was a decent match but i got orc taking this with overral better verse and harder hits an was also more consitant throught out his verse bags came ok but it wasnt the bags i came to know his verses seemed rushed cuz i know bags cae come pretty dope so i dont know what happened but orc had the more stronger hits here


vote orc

[Wise Ways]

He's been bytin his whole life steadily earning his false wins
in the archives bumpin jaws themesong and all u can see is circling shark fins
Ur lame fckin verses should come with life insurance policies
So when voters die of boredom they can care for there wife & children properly
When I was disgussing concepts wit j in the league chat room...
I mentioned an orchestrate line, but gave up cuz no one believes that's true
But lets breathe on that and check his rivals repping netcees
He's so sick! Yet he's dodgin metasin like he has suicidal tendencies

vs.

last wk i beat sintro, then peepd if u cud bring the ruckus kid
u won a battle with conscience? wowww, i do that everytime i fuck an ugly chick
peep it im flexin. cuz honestly, this geek aint a test when
this title dream is such a dying shot, it helpd scientists improve lethal injections
now ima pop ten e. snort sumthin, & go crazzzzy dude..
shittt. ima do a dance all over ya face 'til even ya head gets rave reviews

`` this was a close battle imo, i got bags taking it for a tad more wittiness this time.. nice show fellas.