LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
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LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
Last edited by $in City; September 26th, 2010 at 05:07 PM
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gluck
tim asked for an extension & its cool with me so i'll just drop whenever i see his verse up
the LLL will invest nothing into you sin, let me point out a fault
we have no interest in your lines, cause they make no sense at all
what happens in vegas Sin? We know you pulling hoes is funny
if a bush is willing to fuck you SC, its cause you paid some money
a faggot of an LLL champion, some of the shit he does is sick
the type of head to put on the mantle, hes done sucking the dick
you’re a bitch relax and chill, you only get one chance at this world
you can say im an uptight pussy too, cause im fucking your girl
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
Im coming to win, people think you’re the hardest in the league
will if you got concrete text, then im walking over you with ease
Fuck the played shit, im’a go old testament and get a biblical win
I'm catholic, so no matter how fresh he comes, I’ll beat original $in
Last edited by Tim; September 24th, 2010 at 05:49 AM
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
youll never be a baller dude, stop tryin to fake the dreamOriginally Posted by Tim
i seen basketball diaries,
and your entry: "life sucks i never make the team"
you aint competition kid, this is nothin to $in
i'll use a "defeat" line,
cuz mine are restin on you with a comfortable win
i'll straight up diss u, i aint wit subliminal mind fucks
ya styles so suspect, its part of a criminal line up
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
this guys racin towards his death, im smashin tim
how you gon run wit the best?
when u cant even keep up wit the kardashians
chicks think Tim's a nice guy, & still diss the prick
he never likes to kiss and tell, cuz well he's never kissed a bitch!
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
the LLL will invest nothing into you sin, let me point out a fault
we have no interest in your lines, cause they make no sense at all
*the rhyming @ the end is bad but okay punch
what happens in vegas Sin? We know you pulling hoes is funny
if a bush is willing to fuck you SC, its cause you paid some money
okay
a faggot of an LLL champion, some of the shit he does is sick
the type of head to put on the mantle, hes done sucking the dick
okay, had a bland ending
you’re a bitch relax and chill, you only get one chance at this world
you can say im an uptight pussy too, cause im fucking your girl
lol
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
lol
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
lmao tough
Im coming to win, people think you’re the hardest in the league
will if you got concrete text, then im walking over you with ease
smooth shit.
Fuck the played shit, im’a go old testament and get a biblical win
I'm catholic, so no matter how fresh he comes, I’ll beat original $in
good finish
vs.
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
haha
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tim
I played basketball in high school 3point king trying to win at any cost
youll never be a baller dude, stop tryin to fake the dream
i seen basketball diaries,
and your entry: "life sucks i never make the team"
Lol
you aint competition kid, this is nothin to $in
i'll use a "defeat" line,
cuz mine are restin on you with a comfortable win
okay
i'll straight up diss u, i aint wit subliminal mind fucks
ya styles so suspect, its part of a criminal line up
lol
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
okay
this guys racin towards his death, im smashin tim
how you gon run wit the best?
when u cant even keep up wit the kardashians
this is decent
chicks think Tim's a nice guy, & still diss the prick
he never likes to kiss and tell, cuz well he's never kissed a bitch!
okay
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
good finisher
*This battle was decent...i felt it was very close as well so i bolded the lines that were nice or made me laugh my ass off.
this shit is 3 to 3, fucking close so I will recap...Tim
you’re a bitch relax and chill, you only get one chance at this world
you can say im an uptight pussy too, cause im fucking your girl
lol
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
lol
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
lol
*Mid-way through ya verse you went on a tangent; your opener to the first verse above was smooth but I was not feelin ya concepts all that way..."the mantle punch" ending a little differently would have edged the whole entire battle...and I think pulled you over...
vs.
Sin-City
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
haha
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tim
I played basketball in high school 3point king trying to win at any cost
youll never be a baller dude, stop tryin to fake the dream
i seen basketball diaries,
and your entry: "life sucks i never make the team"
Lol
i'll straight up diss u, i aint wit subliminal mind fucks
ya styles so suspect, its part of a criminal line up
lol
*this shit was smooth as fuck...I think you came well except when I got down lower it seemed you let off some...from beginning you were merkin it and I felt towards the end things did not say as witty..."the Kardashian" punch was okay but it didnt make me laugh at all or nothing so I could not quote it...
Seein yall verses imma have to go with the ones that had me buggin' hard as shit...
Sin-City
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
haha
vs.
Tim
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
lol
*For creativity & lmao-ness out of these two verse I got to say:
V/ Sin keeps the belt
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a faggot of an LLL champion, some of the shit he does is sick
the type of head to put on the mantle, hes done sucking the dick
you’re a bitch relax and chill, you only get one chance at this world
you can say im an uptight pussy too, cause im fucking your girl
Im coming to win, people think you’re the hardest in the league
will if you got concrete text, then im walking over you with ease
....vs
youll never be a baller dude, stop tryin to fake the dream
i seen basketball diaries,
and your entry: "life sucks i never make the team"
you aint competition kid, this is nothin to $in
i'll use a "defeat" line,
cuz mine are restin on you with a comfortable win
i'll straight up diss u, i aint wit subliminal mind fucks
ya styles so suspect, its part of a criminal line up
chicks think Tim's a nice guy, & still diss the prick
he never likes to kiss and tell, cuz well he's never kissed a bitch!
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
lol aight honestly this was a nice lil battle time dropped better than i expected u had some nice concepts but i feel like ur still strugglin to word ad deliver them better...anyway gud shit u almost had this...sin this was prolly one of da verses I've3 seen from u this season u had da shortbar style and ya punches seem more effective...I liked da humor u had in this verse as well overall nice verse...v/sin
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
Tim
the LLL will invest nothing into you sin, let me point out a fault
we have no interest in your lines, cause they make no sense at all
Meh
what happens in vegas Sin? We know you pulling hoes is funny
if a bush is willing to fuck you SC, its cause you paid some money
ok
a faggot of an LLL champion, some of the shit he does is sick
the type of head to put on the mantle, hes done sucking the dick
ok
you’re a bitch relax and chill, you only get one chance at this world
you can say im an uptight pussy too, cause im fucking your girl
meh
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
lol
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
played
Im coming to win, people think you’re the hardest in the league
will if you got concrete text, then im walking over you with ease
ok
Fuck the played shit, im’a go old testament and get a biblical win
I'm catholic, so no matter how fresh he comes, I’ll beat original $in
Fuckin Dopesauce!!
vs
$in City
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
Rofl
youll never be a baller dude, stop tryin to fake the dream
i seen basketball diaries,
and your entry: "life sucks i never make the team"
ha ha
you aint competition kid, this is nothin to $in
i'll use a "defeat" line,
cuz mine are restin on you with a comfortable win
weak
i'll straight up diss u, i aint wit subliminal mind fucks
ya styles so suspect, its part of a criminal line up
lol
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
ok
this guys racin towards his death, im smashin tim
how you gon run wit the best?
when u cant even keep up wit the kardashians
nah
chicks think Tim's a nice guy, & still diss the prick
he never likes to kiss and tell, cuz well he's never kissed a bitch!
meh
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
LOL
Overrall this was a good match but i felt tim didnt come as hard as he usually does but his las line was fire sin was alot more consistant in his verse with more hard hits i got $in with more consistant punches
v/$in
OKC
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
Im coming to win, people think you’re the hardest in the league
will if you got concrete text, then im walking over you with ease
vs.
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
this guys racin towards his death, im smashin tim
how you gon run wit the best?
when u cant even keep up wit the kardashians
i dont know, i see it a lil different than alot of the previous voters. i guess that means i have to give an even more thorough explanation lol.
tim started of super slow. he didnt have much in his verse i was feelin up 'til the middle of his verse. the whole 2nd half of his verse was witty as fuck tho, and the wit was executed correctly so they all effectively hit. he had a string of 3 punches that i quoted where i felt he was really on a roll. the closer was alright as well, but i felt i couldnt quote it because sin has been around awhile and he's seen almost every nameplay possible.
sin, u dropped better over on netcees this week. i wasnt feelin ur first couple punches.. n' nothin really stood out until the suspect/line up punch.. but i felt it was just decent, so i didnt quote that. i quoted the wet t n' keepin up with the kardashians flips cuz those were dope imo. i felt you could of done alot better in wording the 'kiss n' tell' concept, cuz that could of easily be worded to effectively hit as quote.
overall, i thought tim was more creative n' had more punches that i was feeling.
i was expecting more tho, i aint gonna front.
but yall had some good punches in there..
vote - tim
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
v
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
v/sin for more lulz..tims wording was fucked up and made for a real jerky,forced read.
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
vs.
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
this guys racin towards his death, im smashin tim
how you gon run wit the best?
when u cant even keep up wit the kardashians
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
`` i think if tim were to come fresher he might've given sin more of a fight but i got sin taking this due to being slightly more witty imo.
v(Sin City
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
sorry for the short breakdown, mad tired, just trying to get my votes out before they close
gotta give this to tim
reasons being:
this came down to personal preference for me, basically came down to wit vs diss. and for me im more about the wit of a punch, the creativity of punches is what i appreciate the most, as well as i felt the structure from tim was a tad more polished
v. TIm
"Ready? go! sat where the old cardboard city folk
swap tales with heads like every other penny throw"
Tim
the LLL will invest nothing into you sin, let me point out a fault
we have no interest in your lines, cause they make no sense at all
basic wordplay kinda played
what happens in vegas Sin? We know you pulling hoes is funny
if a bush is willing to fuck you SC, its cause you paid some money
Nice
a faggot of an LLL champion, some of the shit he does is sick
the type of head to put on the mantle, hes done sucking the dick
descent
you’re a bitch relax and chill, you only get one chance at this world
you can say im an uptight pussy too, cause im fucking your girl
seen this concept before
I see your ranked #1, Gow claims your Head n shoulders above us all
Well sorry a had lil problem hanging the rest of your body on the wall
LOL, good wording
what is it with everyone on your dick, cant they see that your wack
with concepts so straightforward, no wonder your gay from the back
Good
Im coming to win, people think you’re the hardest in the league
will if you got concrete text, then im walking over you with ease
LOL
Fuck the played shit, im’a go old testament and get a biblical win
I'm catholic, so no matter how fresh he comes, I’ll beat original $in
Good
__________________
SC
my first title defense, seems more like some wack test
cuz Tim aint in a class wit $in & Nick, his got handicap access
Good
youll never be a baller dude, stop tryin to fake the dream
i seen basketball diaries,
and your entry: "life sucks i never make the team"
LOL
you aint competition kid, this is nothin to $in
i'll use a "defeat" line,
cuz mine are restin on you with a comfortable win
LOL, this is the most creative use of a defeat line I seen
i'll straight up diss u, i aint wit subliminal mind fucks
ya styles so suspect, its part of a criminal line up
LOL
im a ladies man & a thug, so i stay strapped for conquest
i'll wet T shirt, then bag a bitch at one of them contests
descent
this guys racin towards his death, im smashin tim
how you gon run wit the best?
when u cant even keep up wit the kardashians
Good wordplay
chicks think Tim's a nice guy, & still diss the prick
he never likes to kiss and tell, cuz well he's never kissed a bitch!
descent
he reinforces my bad habits, he's always got me swearing
faggot's tryin to strip me of my belt, pants & everything else im wearing
descent
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this was a good championship match. I felt Tim had some hard hitters, but Sin City have more quotables.
Vote - Sin City
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