The Specialist v/s Vinzr

[the specialist]

Name Bar Limit...Due Asap...

Soon As You Check In With The Limit...We Can Get It In...

[b]I Have Spoken...

[Vinzr]

check. is 10 bars good with you ?

[the specialist]

10 It Is...Due Asap...

[the specialist]

Yo In La La Land Like Carmelo, You Scared To Blow
NRA Status, I'm ForArms Like They Attached To My Elbows
I'm The Victor, You All In The Lost/Loss Column
All Fucked Up Cause You Couldn't Find The Answer To This Problem
Lable Me A Basket Case, Spit In This Bastards Face
Cause All He To Is Talk Shit Like His Mouth And Ass Switched Place
You Made That Mistake, You Realize I'm Straight Like ExCons
And By Now, You Know Ya Verse Was Just That BullShit You Be On
No Saint, And I Neva Claim'd To Be One
Cause Ya Flesh To Me Is Raw Meat No Season
A Pile Of Feces Is What You Resemblin
And You Stay On It, Same Shit Different Word Ya Life's A Synonym
I'm Endin Him, Hand In Ya Papers
Get Smashed To Vapors Back Breaka, When I Send You On That Last Ride Like The Undertaker...



I Have Spoken...

[Vinzr]

I'll be living a fortunate famous life cause that's my nature
While you'll still be sitting alone with a pen and blank paper
You'll be a 40 year old virgin when I'm the world's richest person
So if you don't want that to happen you better get rehearsing
Title me kryptonite, because after my arrival you'll turn into a spirit
You could either choose that or you can be hanged by a gibbet
You're an idiotic psychopath who gets smashed in the face daily
Mainly because you call yourself a rapper with no lyrical savvy
I'll blast you off like a Blastoise in Houston
And you'll go to where you fit best, Saturn

[the specialist]

Voted On...
Young J v. Cunt Tree Boy
D.Ken v/s Elldawg

[Vinzr]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...503/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66/index2.html

[the specialist]

"Quality" Votes Needed...No NonSense...

[Vinzr]

uppin.

[Mr. Roberts]

Yo In La La Land Like Carmelo, You Scared To Blow
NRA Status, I'm ForArms Like They Attached To My Elbows
No punch, self hype/mutation hype/?=no
I'm The Victor, You All In The Lost/Loss Column
All Fucked Up Cause You Couldn't Find The Answer To This Problem
Statement/not direct= wack
Lable Me A Basket Case, Spit In This Bastards Face
Cause All He To Is Talk Shit Like His Mouth And Ass Switched Place
Best attempt at anything is right here
You Made That Mistake, You Realize I'm Straight Like ExCons
And By Now, You Know Ya Verse Was Just That BullShit You Be On
wack imo
No Saint, And I Neva Claim'd To Be One
Cause Ya Flesh To Me Is Raw Meat No Season
A Pile Of Feces Is What You Resemblin
And You Stay On It, Same Shit Different Word Ya Life's A Synonym
I'm Endin Him, Hand In Ya Papers
Get Smashed To Vapors Back Breaka, When I Send You On That Last Ride Like The Undertaker...
rest is garbage bad structure and wordplay- no sting



vs



I'll be living a fortunate famous life cause that's my nature
While you'll still be sitting alone with a pen and blank paper
statment= no
You'll be a 40 year old virgin when I'm the world's richest person
So if you don't want that to happen you better get rehearsing
best attemt so far but still bad
Title me kryptonite, because after my arrival you'll turn into a spirit
You could either choose that or you can be hanged by a gibbet
wtf is a gibbit and that shit dont even rhyme
You're an idiotic psychopath who gets smashed in the face daily
Mainly because you call yourself a rapper with no lyrical savvy
again dont make up words
I'll blast you off like a Blastoise in Houston
And you'll go to where you fit best, Saturn
no comment


imo weak battle overall not verry much punches or creativity. imo i was actually dissapointed that i picked this one to feed but no hate...
if i could vote i would poll neither... both were about the worst things i ever read so its a tie....

[the specialist]

...^^^ NonSense...Votes Needed That Actually Count...

[Shank Sinatra]

both had misses all over the place.no real direction with concepts our punches but specialist got my vote for my half assed attempts

[the specialist]

Vote...Thank You...

[oatmeal]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...655/index.html


Specialist:

Yo In La La Land Like Carmelo, You Scared To Blow
NRA Status, I'm ForArms Like They Attached To My Elbows

the wordplay is here, but it's not really attached to a punch

I'm The Victor, You All In The Lost/Loss Column
All Fucked Up Cause You Couldn't Find The Answer To This Problem

pretty basic

Lable Me A Basket Case, Spit In This Bastards Face
Cause All He To Is Talk Shit Like His Mouth And Ass Switched Place

not bad

You Made That Mistake, You Realize I'm Straight Like ExCons
And By Now, You Know Ya Verse Was Just That BullShit You Be On

basic again, need to flip something with the concept

No Saint, And I Neva Claim'd To Be One
Cause Ya Flesh To Me Is Raw Meat No Season

very basic

A Pile Of Feces Is What You Resemblin
And You Stay On It, Same Shit Different Word Ya Life's A Synonym

this was ok I guess

I'm Endin Him, Hand In Ya Papers
Get Smashed To Vapors Back Breaka, When I Send You On That Last Ride Like The Undertaker...

simple again

Vinzr:

I'll be living a fortunate famous life cause that's my nature
While you'll still be sitting alone with a pen and blank paper

you need to be more creative

You'll be a 40 year old virgin when I'm the world's richest person
So if you don't want that to happen you better get rehearsing

too simple

Title me kryptonite, because after my arrival you'll turn into a spirit
You could either choose that or you can be hanged by a gibbet

what?

You're an idiotic psychopath who gets smashed in the face daily
Mainly because you call yourself a rapper with no lyrical savvy

doesn't rhyme, and that's not even the biggest problem here

I'll blast you off like a Blastoise in Houston
And you'll go to where you fit best, Saturn

why does he fit best in Saturn? and Blastoise?

Vote: The Specialist, he had some wordplay in there, overall more creativity and better punches.

[iceyboy]

mane yu dwn vinzr