Student of HipHop *snippet*

[Joe M]

I only got to record a short piece of this track so I thought I'd put it up until I get around to finishing it.

[SOUNDCLICK]9649121[/SOUNDCLICK]

I know it's really short, but please give me as much feed as possible. I reallly wanna get better with this shit.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...464/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...464/index.html

[FrankV]

beats nice..intros cool
drop in ok..lyrics seem lil loud
flow was cool, cool short drop
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...267/index.html

[Tha Q]

unusual flow...sounds a bit nervous and jittery to me...You def. have potential with it...But, it ain't hittin yet...work on breath control and just basically vibing to the beat.


short...


decent...keep elevating and dropping.




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[Rishi P]

aiigh peeping this homie....thought that was u on the intro at first lol but cool intro...hmm you don't sound too comfortable on the mic like you holding back...just relax memorize ur lyrics and just use the paper as a guide, then just let yousrelf flow....it'll def come with time tho man...def keep dropping tracks as much as u can only way to improve

RTF please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...471/index.html

[Joe M]

Thanks guys, hittin the links now.


uppin for more feed.....

[Joe M]

Any more?

[Dre Mack Musick]

ireland? really? thats a new one

high voltage beat huh - loved that song

needless to say im diggin the beat
i expected a heavy accent or some shit from u but there wasnt one
this is mad short fam
too short for any real feed, it was like 8 bars
u gotta drop somethin longer than that for some real feedback but

from what i can hear its not bad, seems like u could have somethin decent if you wrote a whole flow. one thing tho i hear no confidence, then again....make a longer song fam

return food 2 my thread

[Joe M]

aight thanks man. hittin you up now.

[LEWSHiS]

your mic presence isnt all that good homie,but your lyrics are their. i like the beat,and the intro. keep at it bro bro.you'll get down what you want it to sound like.