LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
whats good..
ill prolly go 16.
shit chillin mayne..
thats wassup... tho 16
gl
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take this game advice
Last edited by $in City; September 16th, 2010 at 07:26 PM
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aight.. since its a champ match, i'm gonna break it down line by line ..
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
--kinda weak nameplay.. lil simplistic also
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
--missed the mark on this.. kinda bragadosho/not hard
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
--against the odds is used to death.. plus i disagree
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
--too simple, plus set-up was lame..rattle ?
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
--first one thats hit thus to me.. nice nameplay
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
--ehh, could have been done better.. i will give this an 'ok'
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
--a really played cliche actually...smh.
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
--i think the wording might've been off cuz you kinda said he'd win in this line..
1 cool one.. and one decent one.. expected a bit more tbh
on to the next
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
--ehh.. aight, coulda been better
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
--ok, cool lil flip on the lead/pencil idea
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
--nah, played
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
--ok
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
--ehh, aight i guess not too much though
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
--faggot. lol. that aside, this was dope.. line of the battle so far.
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
--ehh, not feeling this..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick.
If you could buy ONE game..for the xbox 360, and alls you could afford is that ONE game to entertain you for the whole month, what would it be?
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take some game advice
--lol, pretty dope.. nice way to end it..
you had 2 cool lines and about 2 aight ones..
hmm.. with all that being said, i think we got a new champ here.. who knows what others'll think.. but it was the sinbad vs. the surspenders & oblivion.. Sin took this..
v($in city
(i should be voting for Nick, if i wanted to pull a $in)
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
Thought this was cool.
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
Meh..
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
Cool.
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
Alright.
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
Eh, reaching.
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
Nah.
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
Good.
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
Cool closer.
Thought your verse was a bit better last week. Though this verse was pretty solid, had some cool lines and a nice hitter. Solid verse.
vs
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
Alright.
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
Lol. Ok.
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
Nah.
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
Lol, alright.
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
Ehh.
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
Meh.
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
Alright.
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take this game advice
Lmao. Nice closer.
That last bar was pretty funny. Lol. Cool verse here dude. Solid shit too.
This was nice battle. Nick's verse was solid and pretty consistent but really didn't have anything eye-catching. Some cool lines and a nice little hitter but nothing outstanding. $in had a nice verse with a few haymakers, some shit that made me laugh. Had an all around more entertaining verse imo. Pretty easy call. Good battle though.
V/ - $in City
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
Decent, simple but i liked it
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
self glory and seemed like you added free at the end just for a rhyme
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
lol liked this
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
ehhh
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
idk man cool concept not the best finish to it
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
Didn't feel it
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
Good
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
Decent
vs
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
Lol
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
my dude killa matrix used this concept back in 2007
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
Noo
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
Lol
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
Didn't feel this one
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
nawww
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
ehh
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take this game advice
Lol nice closer
close battle if you ask me nick i was feelin your opener and 3rd bar the most, and sin your opener and forth and closing bars i liked, i'm going with sin for one more bar i liked,
v// $in
TDL™
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
-ehh... weak imo
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
-ok more of a statement
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
-tight
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
-not liking this rlly
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
-aight
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
-nice
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
-cool
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
-cool ending...
Vs
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
-nice
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
-lol
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
-aight
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
-lol... digging this
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
-ehh.. nah
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
-lol... meh
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
-nice
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take this game advice
-lol.. dope
cool matchup, both came pretty hard imo... sin came with some fresher cepts thou and landed some better punches...
V/SC
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
vs.
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
*this was a great battle...Nick consistent but Sin City with the upset of funny shit
V/SC
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i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
kinda simple
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
ok
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
good
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
cool flip, bad rhyme lool
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
good
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
decent flip
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
dope
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
ok
vs.
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
ok
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
simple
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
nice
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
it's ok flip but untrue?
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
the skinny dip in the carpool punch is good but why u word it like this? it's it'd be gud to spit it like that cause it's simply worded.. but your lack of wording makes it sound less dope then it is.. ight
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
weak punch gud flip
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
lol
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take this game advice
don't really like this..
nice battle. sin had a couple nice lines and a bunch of bars with bad wording, just my opinion. nick had a couple nice lines and a bunch of mediocre flips.. close battle, v/nick
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nick
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
this could of been doper if re worded the end of this punch
u think u a vet? i got a newsflash n' message for free
however dope you used to be is still barely average to me
ok
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
ok
they say u got dickriders, bring 'em. i know u'll choke n' rattle..
we'll make a friendly bet that not a friend of urs will give u a vote in this battle
eh
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
ok
rust has killed u, u used to be decent now ur barely even quotable..
so u put mystery in ur style, cuz no one knows how u mysteriously got so horrible
ok
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
nice
sin wont keep up with the best, he cant handle the advanced clash..
you got that ricky hatton style, u'll never see past a champ match
meh closer
vs.
SIN
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
ok opener
im a couple cards short of a deck, $in'll panic ya mental
nick wouldnt grab the lead to reload....a mechanical pencil
lol
this kid'll give me the win cuz he's generous, let that be known
he'd give you the shirt off his back...but its the only one he owns
nice
u the worst bum ever kid, i'll kill u wit a flex..lame fuck
i've mastered the pen < u went there to get ya text game up
ok
came out gay, its obvious ya brain's scarred fool
u dickride ur dickriders, then go skinny dip in the carpool
this could of been worded more better
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
meh
you not felt, in this title match you down for the full count
this'll be such a changing of the guard, i'll have nick in a full mount
nice
i'll smash this kid into oblivion 4 ever, u aint never came nice
here u go u nerdy fuck ^
now i'll take the title, and you can take this game advice
ok closer
Overral:
This was a good battle nick had some nice hits. but this time i nick didnt come with his usual straight fire but this was a solid verse. sin came more origainal an with a harder punches in his verse i felt he was more consistant in this battle.
MVGT: sin
OKC
i see no opponent, so i cant even begin pity..
u'd think i robbed casinos the way im makin a fool outta sin city
- basic but decent nameplay
im the only headline of this battle homie, ur takin a back seat..
i thought i was goin against the odds, 'til i seen u cheated him last week
- alright
u got a retarded flow like u rappin wit a jaw fulla roofies
i aint gotta call sinbad, when he's worse than all of his movies
-cool
u aint worthy of this battle, and my rhyme'll be fact..
ur punches are a dime a dozen.. meaning 10 outta 12 lines'll be wack
- nice
vs
nicks the weakest champ, his strengths hard to respect
so i'll spot em, just so i can drop the bar on his neck
-ok
he'll try to catch u with ya pants down, damn! this offender needs help
voted for u last week,
cuz it was a wise way i could secure MY suspenders and BELT
- nice
v/: nick more consistent