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    Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)



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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    check

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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    sorry hush puppy, but you may not vote..
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
    He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
    Kids still humble, been champ a minute but people chill
    Cuz you know these hollow tips'll go to his head faster then that ego will
    Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
    Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
    Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
    So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
    Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
    The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
    Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
    His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more


    good luck.
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
    you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
    you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
    they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
    u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
    i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
    u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
    so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
    its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
    my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
    ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
    but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
    u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
    if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league

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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    tuff battle here...will edit in my vote later...good shit to both though



    W.W.

    and now you dead, you lookin ready to invite the hearse
    anybody vote for you, probly fuckin helped u write ya verse

    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in

    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you

    Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
    His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more



    Nick:

    u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
    you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant

    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece

    its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
    my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic

    u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
    if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league


    this battle was really tuff to vote on...i think yall both had some good lines, filler and some misses...wise i thought your nixon nameplay coulda been hella tighter if u thought a lil more about it...the skinny dip line was kinda weak especially for an opener...Nick you kinda kept mentioning about ur winning record against him and it was ok the first time cuz it was runny if it was really that recently, but then at the end you talkin bout the past battle n shit...both of yall had some good shit which i quoted but overall i think i gotta give my vote to nick...when youre facing the champ your verse has to be clearly better...but i think nicks was a lil bit better...good battle yall

    v/nick
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
    He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
    lol
    Kids still humble, been champ a minute but people chill
    Cuz you know these hollow tips'll go to his head faster then that ego will
    nah
    Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
    Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
    bad wording, had a decent flip tho
    Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
    So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
    this doesn't have any creative flip, comes off more like a statement
    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
    good
    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
    good, but thinking outside the box lines get done to much, still a nice use tho
    Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
    The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
    wording is bad, wp was kinda creative, and the punch is funny.
    Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
    His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
    ok

    vs.

    u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
    you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
    decent, bad wording in punch
    you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
    they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
    ok
    u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
    i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
    funny
    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
    nice lol
    u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
    so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
    cool flip. u do a lot with this kind of wording, it wouldn't hurt to be experimental. or would it?
    its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
    my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
    good personal
    ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
    but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
    i hate fucking saying "keep it 100" but it works here
    u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
    if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league
    nice flip

    wise suffers a bit with wording. Nick started off a bit bland but the majority of his verse was well worded with some nice punches and personals. I think nick really pulled out the stops to defend the champs. not a bad verse at all tho wise.

    v/ nick
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
    He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
    Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
    Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
    werd 1 of my favorite lines from ya verse
    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
    Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
    His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
    couldve been better but still effective


    ....vs

    you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
    they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
    u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
    i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
    its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
    my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
    ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
    but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise


    honestly this battle was close as fuck real close...both were pretty even in everything...overall nice battle here but i felt like wise was more creative that karpis line was a good personal and it was pretty humorous overall again nice battle keep it up this goin be close gl v/ww
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    sickly close... here's why.

    Quotes from Wise Ways
    Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
    He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you

    potentials:
    Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
    His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more

    vs.

    Quotes from Nick
    u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
    so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
    ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
    but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise

    potentials:
    u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
    you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
    slightly played and bad wording.
    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
    saw something like this last week. only a difference of wording is here.
    u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
    if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league
    no connection.

    so in punches: 3 (WW) vs 2 (N) and in potentials.. 1 (WW) vs. 3 (Nick).

    This battle isn't about potentials, let me say that first off. But in numbers we see a striking 4 vs. 5. 3 good and one decent vs. 2 good and three decent. close.

    Best bar drops on Nick w/ his 'keep it 100'

    too close. I'll really upset myself to vote either way, so .. I'll decide by the fact that the closeness in numbers (4 vs. 5) can lend the decision to the person with a better directed set of punches.

    Wise ways.

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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
    Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
    Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
    So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you

    vs.

    u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
    you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
    you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
    they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
    u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
    i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
    u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
    so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye


    ..these was a nice battle, nice punchline personal from you both, but i must say, Nick had the humor.. multies are a big factor here, must attack all categories for a close match. WW had some personals as well, so it made this battle tough, for me Nick had a better verse. I constantly kept lulz on his verse. Vote: Nick
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

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    My vote. ^

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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
    Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
    Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
    The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
    ^wording was kinda off, but this was still nice

    vs.

    you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
    they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
    u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
    so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
    ^dope


    fuck. this battle came kinda close. both had some nice, hard hitting punches. So if i had to decide who won, it'd be best bar vs. best bar, and i think Nick slight took that one. The Nixon/Nick's on, watch wordplay was nice, but the wording kinda threw it off a little. n Nick's wave line hit harder to me. This was a pretty decent battle tho. v//Nick good shit guys.

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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Kids still humble, been champ a minute but people chill
    Cuz you know these hollow tips'll go to his head faster then that ego will
    Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
    So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
    So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
    He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
    Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
    Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you



    vs



    u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
    you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
    u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
    i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
    u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
    so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
    ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
    but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise



    shiit i got 4 quoteables a piece man, very good battle. honestly though when i was reading wise's verse i felt like it flowed a bit more the wording just seemed more precise. nick i felt like you fumbled a bit in some places. strong solid battle though


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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
    He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
    Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
    The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation

    vs



    you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
    they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time

    when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
    i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
    its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
    my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic


    nicks quotes hit harder. bolded line was nasty. his misses werent so bad, less played shit. wave length was played but then so was wise's outside the box shit.


    v/ nick.
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    Re: Week 6: Nick vs Wise ways(CHAMP MATCH)

    4-5 in Nick's favor..

    and at Inhuman.. the Nixon wordplay is meant to be Nick's in.. not on, lol.
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