LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
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LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 16 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
check
lets drop early
sorry hush puppy, but you may not vote..
Last edited by Wise Ways; September 8th, 2010 at 06:42 PM
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
Kids still humble, been champ a minute but people chill
Cuz you know these hollow tips'll go to his head faster then that ego will
Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
good luck.
Last edited by Wise Ways; September 8th, 2010 at 06:33 PM Reason: lick it bz
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league
tuff battle here...will edit in my vote later...good shit to both though
W.W.
and now you dead, you lookin ready to invite the hearse
anybody vote for you, probly fuckin helped u write ya verse
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
Nick:
u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league
this battle was really tuff to vote on...i think yall both had some good lines, filler and some misses...wise i thought your nixon nameplay coulda been hella tighter if u thought a lil more about it...the skinny dip line was kinda weak especially for an opener...Nick you kinda kept mentioning about ur winning record against him and it was ok the first time cuz it was runny if it was really that recently, but then at the end you talkin bout the past battle n shit...both of yall had some good shit which i quoted but overall i think i gotta give my vote to nick...when youre facing the champ your verse has to be clearly better...but i think nicks was a lil bit better...good battle yall
v/nick
Last edited by $in City; September 9th, 2010 at 08:11 PM
Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
lol
Kids still humble, been champ a minute but people chill
Cuz you know these hollow tips'll go to his head faster then that ego will
nah
Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
bad wording, had a decent flip tho
Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
this doesn't have any creative flip, comes off more like a statement
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
good
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
good, but thinking outside the box lines get done to much, still a nice use tho
Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
wording is bad, wp was kinda creative, and the punch is funny.
Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
ok
vs.
u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
decent, bad wording in punch
you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
ok
u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
funny
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
nice lol
u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
cool flip. u do a lot with this kind of wording, it wouldn't hurt to be experimental. or would it?
its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
good personal
ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
i hate fucking saying "keep it 100" but it works here
u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league
nice flip
wise suffers a bit with wording. Nick started off a bit bland but the majority of his verse was well worded with some nice punches and personals. I think nick really pulled out the stops to defend the champs. not a bad verse at all tho wise.
v/ nick
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$14.99 full breakdown vote
Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
werd 1 of my favorite lines from ya verse
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
couldve been better but still effective
....vs
you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
honestly this battle was close as fuck real close...both were pretty even in everything...overall nice battle here but i felt like wise was more creative that karpis line was a good personal and it was pretty humorous overall again nice battle keep it up this goin be close gl v/ww
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
sickly close... here's why.
Quotes from Wise Ways
Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
potentials:
Bottom line is, I'm known as a stud by tons of whores
His frame suggests after his bottom line he's beggin the dealer to front him more
vs.
Quotes from Nick
u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
potentials:
u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
slightly played and bad wording.
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
saw something like this last week. only a difference of wording is here.
u cant hang with the best homie, i got wise lookin grim with fatigue
if u read off your Credentials, u'd be at the same level as him in the league
no connection.
so in punches: 3 (WW) vs 2 (N) and in potentials.. 1 (WW) vs. 3 (Nick).
This battle isn't about potentials, let me say that first off. But in numbers we see a striking 4 vs. 5. 3 good and one decent vs. 2 good and three decent. close.
Best bar drops on Nick w/ his 'keep it 100'
too close. I'll really upset myself to vote either way, so .. I'll decide by the fact that the closeness in numbers (4 vs. 5) can lend the decision to the person with a better directed set of punches.
Wise ways.
Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
vs.
u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
..these was a nice battle, nice punchline personal from you both, but i must say, Nick had the humor.. multies are a big factor here, must attack all categories for a close match. WW had some personals as well, so it made this battle tough, for me Nick had a better verse. I constantly kept lulz on his verse. Vote: Nick
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My vote. ^
Karp bites comedians; we know its true, shit flows nice too
Hence why ur here.. he couldn't find the RIGHT joke to use on a joke like you
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
^wording was kinda off, but this was still nice
vs.
you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
^dope
fuck. this battle came kinda close. both had some nice, hard hitting punches. So if i had to decide who won, it'd be best bar vs. best bar, and i think Nick slight took that one. The Nixon/Nick's on, watch wordplay was nice, but the wording kinda threw it off a little. n Nick's wave line hit harder to me. This was a pretty decent battle tho. v//Nick good shit guys.
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Kids still humble, been champ a minute but people chill
Cuz you know these hollow tips'll go to his head faster then that ego will
Dahmer used to kill petite queers in the midwest; word, honest shit
So consider yourself lucky it ain't the 80's anymore.. you'd be first on his list
So if y'all notice something decomposing, thats probably him
He'll be taking cover.. tarps, rope & whatever else I decide to wrap his body in
Nerd has alot to prove, i'm more creative so this verse I gotta do
Must be hard thinkin' outside the box when ur in it & 6ft of dirts ontop of you
vs
u dealin me my first loss? 5 straight wins, u wont stop the enjoyment
you couldnt touch a 5-0 record if u suddenly became a cop or informant
u growin up had to be hard, to say that shits rough is the truth..
i always believed in old wise men, and how they touched u in ur youth
u would neva merk an audio track, to say ur an emcee would be a good lie
so i aint worried about ur wave length, it shouldnt take long for u to wave good bye
ill put shit on blast cuz ur a bitch bro. he might be decent when he tries
but im known to keep it 100, which happens to be my winning percentage against wise
shiit i got 4 quoteables a piece man, very good battle. honestly though when i was reading wise's verse i felt like it flowed a bit more the wording just seemed more precise. nick i felt like you fumbled a bit in some places. strong solid battle though
v. ww
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Intimacy w/ a bitch? Nick hasn't had it w/ one in his life..
He does skinny dip though.. thats his move when he's confronted to fight
Got problems ppl have no idea how to help u with changin'
The depression Nixon, he'd need 4 of those watches to hide his self-mutilation
vs
you were never meant to champ somethin, dog its a bad sign
they sayin u elevated, but its only been two weeks since i beat u last time
when we battled last time, i wanted to sway but i put it on hold n' ceased
i dropped original, u dropped 5 different nameplays that were 5 years old a piece
its pretty much fact that im better, thats gotta be a real bummer faggot
my verses get me far, ur verses cant get u past round one in the summer classic
nicks quotes hit harder. bolded line was nasty. his misses werent so bad, less played shit. wave length was played but then so was wise's outside the box shit.
v/ nick.
LOL
4-5 in Nick's favor..
and at Inhuman.. the Nixon wordplay is meant to be Nick's in.. not on, lol.
Last edited by Wise Ways; September 10th, 2010 at 04:52 PM
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