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    Re: I Try

    damn brandon, came back on his Ric Flair shit.

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    whooo..track is sick man...all around...monopoly car line had me dyin...there is some real shit in here too man...dope track
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    Re: I Try

    feelin the beat off the bat

    flow is nice...

    but, I'm going to gripe about your delivery...it's one note...I will forget what you sound like as soon as the song stops...You gotta stand out...cuz, voice wise, you sound like any random generic rapper...

    With that said, you're obviously talented with your rhyming and flow...lyrics are well-written.

    Much potential...much talent...I say work on the voice--i.e., sounding more musical and/or unique in your inflections.





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    good delivery.. flow.. all on point.. some cool lyrics.. I like the hook.. that echo you put on it worked.. sumbled on a chance.. lucky to fall was a pretty good word play.. I'm feelin' the content in your verse.. I like emcees with something to say.. solid track.. thanks for hitten' mine up

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    this is nice. best track i've heard on this site. good stuff!

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    Re: I Try

    playin...

    chicks gotta cool voice...you sound hungry as fuck on this...is that my speakers tho thats like poppin ? I kinda hear somthin, anyway..you got some dope bars in here man..anything is possible yes, yes it is.. lol...Im diggin what you did with the hook too...gives it nice transition too..whole shit is on some "yall are gonna fuckin hear me regardless of what happens" shit..a lot of emotion in this and some real shit for real artists comin up thru these times man...respect for the track, shits smooth, def deserves the aotw..cheers homie.
     

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    is the hook a sample? is nice. quality is very good.. beat is nice.. good composition.. i notice u dont use dubs.. i guess thats a personal choice.. but i think this song woulda been better with them.. hook is okay.. i think u shoulda used an effect on it.. i felt this was a 7.5/10

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    Re: I Try

    thanks guys...I'll peep links later
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    Beat is fire and you brought a nice hype good job and nice quality.
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    Re: I Try

    You went in on this track fucker. Sound good on the beat. Delivery was "in your face so listen bitch!" type steez. Diggin` the sound you got. You pull it off. Specially for not hearin` a track from you in a while.

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    Re: I Try

    yeah you killed that shit, the mixing was meh like xm said but the verses were real as fuck. the best thing about this song is the emotion you conveyed through it. i could feel every word. the hook was cool, something light really. the beat is dope as hell. you definitely deserved song fo the week for this my nigga.

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    Re: I Try

    this is pretty hot, feelin' the beat... your intro I wasn't feelin', felt limp... but you come in dope on the verse... your delivery has gotten doper, flow is still on point... lyrics hot too... nice work...


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    Re: I Try

    holla y'all, appreciate it.
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    Mood Music! the audio heads on this site are good. props for this drop.

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    Re: I Try

    Listening...



    Love the energy you come in with... real burst of it. First verse was alright, the second verse was what really got me. That monopoly line's or those kinds of lines that become immortalized in hip hop much to the likes of "Fuck You, Pay Me"... n' other famous ones. 3rd verse was a little of a down-wind from the 2nd verse... but, un-like the first verse and 2nd the flow gets much more versatile...


    Overall, I really liked this... the beat was pretty alright, seemed like a quick in/out deal... track-wise, at least that's how I felt about it but never the less it was vibe worthy. Steady pace wins the race as the say.


    Keep it up.



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