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    rhyme mindset

    heavy ass mind set yall dont know my rhyme flex
    superior to others but thats just cause the time spent
    dedication fast inflamation,escallation coming soon to your nation
    and im coming so heavy you could say its an invasion
    this mindset formerly gave me the authority
    to tell myself that rappin was my life a priority
    and youve been corgelly, invited please dont be frightened
    but now im showing you that my rap kills like lightning

    my mind has like 30 rhymes at a time
    brains filled to the top wit em call me mr.einstine
    before you see i was tryna be kind
    but now ask if i can rap and youll see god with a sign
    it'll say yes there was no flaw in design
    now ill have to whoop your butt like optimus prime
    for having to ask, shooting out rhymes like a marksman top of his class
    bullet mark would fracture a rapper
    have him smash, just like glass
    mind cant stop so im spitting them fast,
    if this was a race turtle your ass would be coming up last!

    and this ability gives me the fertility
    to come back and make my rap into a trilogy
    any day i can and anyday i will,
    blow up like your brain with the stainless steele
    cause my mind gives me the advantage
    you cant uderstand it never will a rapper overcome my bandwidth
    reaching past the stars like i was from another planet

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    comment lol

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    i loved the multis in the first, the first was a nice one for multis, i thought it was the best section, the flow of the entire thing was nice, i know you dropped this one first, but i gave feedback to addictiton first, i thought this was way better than the addction, your flow was great, you had some great multis, your vocabulary was sweet, this is the kind of shit i like reading from you, this is the kind of shit that has me expecting a loss if you ever get around to writing a battle verse. your metaphors shined in the second verse though i do favor multis, which is why i focused on it

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    damn son u got skills 0_0

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    this entire drop was nice from first to last line, keep it up man

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    haha respects to you all

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    and nah ppl on the battle thing here cant pick up my structur apperantly lmao but soft i just need a webcam to record my shit lmao

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    i like the flow of this piece.good use of multi's 'n shit.ima read some more of your work man.keep it up.

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    The flow was what really impressed me, and your ability to rhyme not just at the end of a sentence, but make a whole line flow!

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    Quote Originally Posted by calgary View Post
    and nah ppl on the battle thing here cant pick up my structur apperantly lmao but soft i just need a webcam to record my shit lmao
    fuck that man u can rhyme better then half of them ur flow is nice
    from begining to end
    when others rap it sounds like there just rambling on about nothing an
    it doesnt even rhyme or even sound like a rap u got skills dont let anyone tell u diffrently dawg

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    haha respects hannibal

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    Re: rhyme mindset

    ty man lol

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