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  1. August 2nd, 2010, 12:49 AM #1
    Rishi P
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    Going Through Changes

    Had a buncha stuff to get off my chest and this Em beat fit my mood perfectly

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  2. August 2nd, 2010, 01:04 AM #2
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    it says error loading songfile
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  3. August 2nd, 2010, 09:15 AM #3
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    it should hopefully work now, i think i had the html code wrong....if not just check the usershare link and i'll fix it tonight when i get home from work....
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    i love this beat. em killed it
    come in good, lyrics were good
    flow was there along with delivery
    overall this was nice...keep droppin
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  5. August 2nd, 2010, 02:23 PM #5
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    werd thanks for the feed....can someone tell me if the soudclick player is working now....im' at work and it's blocked so i can't tell...
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  6. August 2nd, 2010, 05:05 PM #6
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    pretty dope bro...
    i like ur delivery its different...
    lyrics is pretty ill..
    sound like u got alotta pain in ur voice..
    "the more i age i cry cuz i just HATE my LIFE!!!"

    ...nice bro...
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  7. August 2nd, 2010, 05:41 PM #7
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    This is dope man, very heartfelt n pack'd with good emotion. Flow is interest'n, more poetic than a typical track, but I dig it. Your lyrics def got some strong lines n the overall content/message is nice. I got respect for this one, homie.

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  8. August 2nd, 2010, 11:09 PM #8
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    thanks for the feed fellas...keep leaving links i got u
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    quality isn't good... im not really felling this track.... i heard better from you... decent shit...
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  10. August 3rd, 2010, 06:55 AM #10
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    The beat made it sound better, but feels like you devastating Em' dunno why but blohh.
    Anywaays lyrics was nice, and the flow was eeeeehh.
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  11. August 3rd, 2010, 09:11 AM #11
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    devastating Em wtf does that mean lol

    thanks for the feed tho
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  12. August 3rd, 2010, 03:12 PM #12
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    upppppppppp
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    Love this beat. flow was pretty good. lyrics were aiight...you could have delved a little deeper i felt. you kept saying you were experiencing pain but you didnt say why or what you were going through so the listener has a harder time relating. some words didnt rhyme well with the others..kind of a stretch. delivery was okay, could be improved but wasnt bad. overall not a bad song but i wouldnt bump it regularly
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    Quality is pretty clear, but i'm hearin some disturbance in the back. Maybe it's the beat, not sure. Delivery is cool, at some points could be a lil more convincing. I'm feeling the flow, shits on point for the most part of it. Lyrics are straight, nice track overall though. I'm feelin it
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  15. August 4th, 2010, 11:37 AM #15
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    Re: Going Through Changes

    Beat: Its a industry beat so im a keep this blank
    Hook: sampled on a industry beat so im a keep that blank
    Flow: 8.0
    emotion: 7.5
    Mic Presence: 8.0
    Vocals: 7.5
    Lyrics: 7.5
    complexity in schemes: 6.0
    Quality: 7.0

    everything was cool except maybe its just like eminem's in concept also...If u switched it up a lil or something I would of been more engaged then to hear someone I dont know do the same thing eminem did...flow was straight, would of liked to see more advanced multies and syllable wordplay but I know that isnt everything...emotion for the most part was on point...Overall a decent remake mane...

    Ur Score Is 7.3

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