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  1. August 6th, 2010, 05:58 AM #1
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    My Own Path

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  2. August 9th, 2010, 01:14 AM #2
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    Re: My Own Path

    Like the beat I downloaded this one too.

    Flow was pretty smooth man. Lyrics were pretty cool too. Delivery was kind of laid back, could have used a little more energy maybe. But this was pretty straight.

    Pretty sick man keep it up.



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  3. August 11th, 2010, 12:45 AM #3
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    Re: My Own Path

    Thanks for the feed..
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  4. August 11th, 2010, 10:39 AM #4
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    Re: My Own Path

    I also have this beat. Never done anything to it though. What really lacks is your emotion in your spittin. it sounds like you're reading your lyrics. Flow is nice rhyme scheme is aight, a lil basic. the second half of the song picked up and got better, you started rhyming diff and your emotion was coming thorugh proper.

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  5. August 11th, 2010, 05:53 PM #5
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    Re: My Own Path

    i agree with bune on how you need passion in your bars you got the rhyme skeme down dude you could be good and also you need production behind you i like how you rap though put wrk in dude you could do this !!!!
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