Hands Held High [A Scytsophrenia Collaboration]

[Cody Nash]

Hands Held High
By: Scytsophrenia/T.A.P.





It's been a while my child, since ive seen you at mass
so...
confess the sins youve compiled since i seen you last...

Dear father,
I'm bothered by denial and a flash
of this monster that slaughtered my child and laughed.
Watched my boy get dragged as miles would pass,
through his bile and grass…
while I sat in trial behind glass.
My wife screamed my name, like a dream… I lay,
holding the seams of her faith… she'd bleed in vain.
Her head resting peacefully in my hand,
dead and feeling strange,
and the face on this man,
that had slain both my lion and lamb..
reflected my own, so here I stand.

here you stand, a discrace to the race God created
in his most sacred of places...
.........................your mistakes desicrate it
why confess and say it... do you detest the hatred...
that you created with this change to your status
a husband and dad gone mad, its outrageous...
damned...
you should be dragged to the realm of the sadists
for slaying your 2 favourites... your soul must be tainted
from the black shroud you painted, taking those lives...
the evil inside you thrives, it survives...
....................i don't suppose you know why?

You'd be surprised, for there's more blood scare,
I've taken the lives of any who was there.
Separated their eyes and cut out their lungs, where
I sucked out the air from inside just for flare.
And I dared authority to bring me down,
any minority that could sling some rounds.
The world is boring me, so without a sound,
I wished 'Good morning G' and here I am now!
I've raped and murdered... escaped Hell's reach,
but my faith's eternal and I can't help but weap.
Father I beg of you, please help me!

you can only begin to absolve the sin within...
and resolve the things unhinged...
...when you face up to the devastation it brings
the broken strings, the relations left mouring...
consorting with the devil is more than appauling
renounce his calling on God's floor in...
this church before him... for all the hurt
convert your blood thirst so we can cleanse the earth...
from this curse...
..............make amense, you ended men lives
God's will is eye for an eye, you defied so must die

Begrudged by the death of my only begotten son, I...
can't help but wonder why you lost in one try??
how you'd gone and dumped life that I created -- for what?
'uncontrollable urges'... or being a sadist of love,
make no mistake of her trust that she carried for you,
you forget, I see all... and where you burried 'em, too..
I'm uncaring of proof.. it's the least of my worries..
that's a forensic requirement I've replaced with my fury,
so save it, I'm jury.. I know the case top to bottom,
I know you took your son, ripped his face off and shot 'em.
now just whipe that rotten little smirk off, you troll...
there isn't one on your face, 'cause it's burnt on your soul...
time to lose all control... here's a burn I hope you felt,
passage to heaven denied.. "Fuck you, go to hell."

Worse comes to worse... you have that raw desire,
you use passion as action... see, you got the fire,
and on a trip to heaven?? you still crossed the wire,
so with hands held high... the hand of God is higher.





peace..







itallics - Dev
normal - Dagel
quote/end - Cry

[Soule]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...363/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...529/index.html

[The Nav Man™]

Dev-Your wording and vocabulary is really dope.
I think your second verse is better than the first....
But both were written really well. My favorite parts from you....
this church before him... for all the hurt
convert your blood thirst so we can cleanse the earth...
from this curse...
here you stand, a discrace to the race God created
in his most sacred of places...
.........................your mistakes desicrate it

Dagel-Your writing in this piece had a nice vibe to it.
The first verse flowed real nice and your second had some dope imagery.
My favorite parts from you....
Dear father,
I'm bothered by denial and a flash
of this monster that slaughtered my child and laughed.
Separated their eyes and cut out their lungs, where
I sucked out the air from inside just for flare.

Cry-Your wording was really tight man...
I think I liked your part the best..
Shit flowed well and had a couple really sick parts.
make no mistake of her trust that she carried for you,
you forget, I see all... and where you burried 'em, too..
now just whipe that rotten little smirk off, you troll...
there isn't one on your face, 'cause it's burnt on your soul...

This was a really nice collab from Scyts/TAP.
Everyone vibed together nicely.....
and Dagel and Dev going back and forth was sick as hell too.
One of the dopest OMs i've read in a while.
Hope to see some more collabs out of T.A.P
Look forward to it.
Awesome read guys, mad props.
This'll be gettin nominated soon.

[Soule]

Bump, leave links. we'll rtf.

[Verbal Hologram]

I think this piece was very good ya'll. I think you guys really nailed it and it came together well. Theses were my favorite lines

Watched my boy get dragged as miles would pass,
through his bile and grass…
while I sat in trial behind glass.

My wife screamed my name, like a dream… I lay,
holding the seams of her faith… she'd bleed in vain.

that had slain both my lion and lamb..
reflected my own, so here I stand.

here you stand, a discrace to the race God created
in his most sacred of places...
.........................your mistakes desicrate it

a husband and dad gone mad, its outrageous...
damned...
you should be dragged to the realm of the sadists

You'd be surprised, for there's more blood scare,
I've taken the lives of any who was there.

you can only begin to absolve the sin within...
and resolve the things unhinged...
...when you face up to the devastation it brings

the broken strings, the relations left mouring...
consorting with the devil is more than appauling

Begrudged by the death of my only begotten son, I...
can't help but wonder why you lost in one try??

make no mistake of her trust that she carried for you,
you forget, I see all... and where you burried 'em, too..

so save it, I'm jury.. I know the case top to bottom,
I know you took your son, ripped his face off and shot 'em.

now just whipe that rotten little smirk off, you troll...
there isn't one on your face, 'cause it's burnt on your soul...

and on a trip to heaven?? you still crossed the wire,
so with hands held high... the hand of God is higher.

I think all of you came with some real nice lines in this piece. Cry I really liked your part fam, it fit in well....and some really stood out. Of course Dagel and Dev you guys bought your top caliber shit here to. Nice drop, nice n' consistent

peace

[Soule]

Appreciate it.

[Rosetti Frost]

I liked this very much...

1st off the story has a kind of religious thing going on which you all stuck with. I feel that there is alot of dope imagery going on here. You all really stuck to the theme of the piece, and you all executed it very well. All pieces flowed very good also. There was nothing choppy about it this. Dagel and Dev went with the short bar thing, and Cry did the longer bars, but the point is you all did your piece well.

so to sum it up...it was really dope shit...I'm surprised that you guys did not get more feed...anyways...really dope read...keep putting out ish like this...

[Soule]

Thanks bro, really appreciate it.

[L-Tidus]

Now we begin to see what creativitely good drops are made of. First of, I was really attractived to the quote done by cry. The vocab was sick and amazing. Dagel and Dev complimented each other pretty well because Dev set the tone for the piece. The opener was pretty good and have a confession-like feel to it. (A real feel)...

Dagel really surprised me because this is the 1st time that I read a drop from him. You complemented the piece very well.


Very good collabo guys

[Soule]

Appreciate it.

[Cody Nash]

bit more feed?

[King Nasty Emcee]

This was nasty. Simple flow provided great imagery and the story line worked well also. The way you guys pieced it together was sick.. I don't know how you did it lol but it was awesome. Favourite line was your closer "so with hands held high the hand of god is higher".. nice work.. thinking of nominating this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...var=&p=7780144

[Soule]

Thanks.

[Endeva.]

damn... didn't even realise this was up, i'd almost forgotten about it lol