the build up(cerebral taoism)

[_Lyrics]

the isolation of the self is from which point there is no return
the whole of the self is from which point there is no beginning
from the moment we've arrived at this moment
there has only been but the isolation of the self
absolutely nothing, but the absolute
you try to find yourself, and succumb to the waste of wait
but the truth will reveal that yourself can only find you
governmental laws were meant to be broken
stuck, if we all mold into the shape before us...
It deprives the nothingness of its natural freedom
because what we are told not to do, we will
out of curiosity, which is the nature of the way.
the layout submersing perception is forever changing
and the misunderstanding will be misunderstood
when details are derived from pictorial symbolism.
a dream is the soul, a projection of our subconscious
based on the memories of what is taken from reality
the reality being the pure manifestation of gaia(the living earth)
the manifestation of gaia is only a link in the chain
of many manifestations(planets) that remain unimagined(unborn)
what is unimagined in your thoughts will only surface
during a uniformed unity with peace and willpower
when shown the way..

individualistic belief.

欣赏和内在焦点芽

[Android]

This was pretty decent, some clever lines in there. I believe the writing at the end is Chinese? I know it says appreciation and focus. No clue as to the rest. lol Anyway, I thought the first 2 lines were a little repetitive with the word 'self' - also on the 4th line. Thought for the most part this was decent though, I thought you got stronger towards the end. I liked the 'gaia chain' line and a few others but in my opinion you should try not to use the same words so close to each other. Overall this was pretty cool though. Nice job, stay active. You also need 2 links of feed back still.