12 lines. Verse due 1 hour from check in.
12 lines. Verse due 1 hour from check in.
I'm a noob to RB, but you really shouldn't test me
Cuz like Kurt Cobain's brains, it's about to get messy
Don't stick around here, just drop a line then adore me
This dude's slow as fuck, like a 5.70 forty
I'm an android, robocop, i'm peter wella (weller) for the hell of this
He's busy blowin on man flutes, like that fella from genesis (peter gabriel)
Where you at man? I left you behind, some place where the Dakotas At
He takes Gay guys to steak n shake, just cuz he likes to takhomasak
Sorry, I meant fax-a-sack, but dawg what happens after that?
You get left white-faced and panting, like a ghost with an asthma attack
Gabriel, it's over, to your place at the gates is where I'll take you
This shit's been prolonged, I didn't even need twelve lines to break you
I bet admins wanna rip their eye sockets out n Rot in a Prison
or summon a demon that will leave them in a Chaotic Condition
every time they are notified that Jake stunner is Dropping a Written
you cry for feedback but no one will write back like a Soccer Position(right back)
by the looks of your name, your better off Finishing wit No Shows
How is your name stunner but none of your Finishers are Stone Cold
Your not worthy of being a battler so I'll leave you Gaspin in Sorrow
Ill turn Jake like Gyllenhaal................
by the looks of ya zodiac you wont make it by the day After Tomorrow
And i read some of your recent post and honestly this Cat is Whack
That piece you called "Unbreakable" looks like Scattered Glass
With those attempts in being poetic n sensitive I had to Laugh at That
The way I'm tearing you up, not even dr dre could predict the Aftermath
*right back is a defense postion in soccer if you are all wondering
so right/write...i think ya'll get that
the stunner is stone colds finisher*
I'm a noob to RB, but you really shouldn't test me
Cuz like Kurt Cobain's brains, it's about to get messy
an android, robocop, i'm peter wella (weller) for the hell of this
He's busy blowin on man flutes, like that fella from genesis (peter gabriel)
vs.
idk
gab's shit is all jumbled up i cant tell where the bars start and end and it dont really rhyme right
v - jake
AUDIO
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wow....thank god you don't have enough post
uppin
Jake
I'm an android, robocop, i'm peter wella (weller) for the hell of this
He's busy blowin on man flutes, like that fella from genesis (peter gabriel)
Where you at man? I left you behind, some place where the Dakotas At
He takes Gay guys to steak n shake, just cuz he likes to takhomasak
VS
Gabe-
time they are notified that Jake stunner is Dropping a Written
you cry for feedback but no one will write back like a Soccer Position(right back)
by the looks of your name, your better off Finishing wit No Shows
How is your name stunner but none of your Finishers are Stone Cold
jake didnt complete the twelve lines -
Vote- Gabe
uppin votez
Uppin... and Crooked, How do you figure I didn't do twelve lines?
Uppin for votes
I'm a noob to RB, but you really shouldn't test me
Cuz like Kurt Cobain's brains, it's about to get messy
liked the opening
Don't stick around here, just drop a line then adore me
This dude's slow as fuck, like a 5.70 forty
overall jake stunners bars have to connect and make sense more
I bet admins wanna rip their eye sockets out n Rot in a Prison
or summon a demon that will leave them in a Chaotic Condition
every time they are notified that Jake stunner is Dropping a Written
you cry for feedback but no one will write back like a Soccer Position(right back)
by the looks of your name, your better off Finishing wit No Shows
How is your name stunner but none of your Finishers are Stone Cold
Your not worthy of being a battler so I'll leave you Gaspin in Sorrow
Ill turn Jake like Gyllenhaal................
by the looks of ya zodiac you wont make it by the day After Tomorrow
And i read some of your recent post and honestly this Cat is Whack
That piece you called "Unbreakable" looks like Scattered Glass
With those attempts in being poetic n sensitive I had to Laugh at That
The way I'm tearing you up, not even dr dre could predict the Aftermath
really just tryin to hard not any sharp punches
v/jake
be sure to check out my battle A-S3t vs Eloosive
I would very much like votes. UP #4! 2-1/me
you dont pop gats ill come at you wit 2 45's like its quarter to 3
you can call me the reaper man lives get slaughtered by me
a real problem... bad to the bone but x-rays can't even see this
dont think i wont come knockin on ya door like a jahova witness
your a noob this is a waste of time for me to verse you
imma wizard with the rhymes my flow and punches curse you
so step your game up,u sellin ya self suckin cock
i rap around the clock, 12-12 homie buy a watch
So now you gotta put in time if you wanna get near me
But you can't hear me, cause you're an asshole like Dennis Leary
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