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this my check
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3-0 = k.o.
first ta 5
10 lines
due twenty four after check
this my check
detailed votes please
3-0 = k.o.
first ta 5
Player? nah but i see you speaking of my works
battlefields of scattered meals, barreled blood for thirst
shot a couple shells now i'm stealing this snail's home
took Thor's hammer, drove a few nails home
hands to ya body do da elevator, no days off its sick labor
its a shame i am your religious savior's dictator
shit for competition there's quite enough in my line
so i deal with it, one courtesy flush at a time
a disastrous deck of cards, the tragedy's dealt
i got pussy's like you on lock producin chastity belts
---linkz ta come---
check, will drop sometime tomo
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waitin still where ya verse
You’re a poor ass faggot, what you got? A trashy mobile home?
Im’a get retarded on this nigga like I got an extra chromosome
I aint talking golf when I tell this dude he’s below par
I mean the quality of his bars n how wack they all are
I radiate swagger, Its obvious when Johnny’s arrived
Even if Komma oozed confidence, he’d still Kom up Chi*
I’ll bring the rain down on this nigga, just refer to me as Rainman*
Cuz I’m Cruising* thru this battle, while u still thinkin of a game plan
It's done. I won the battle n the war, time for you n God to get unified
Cuz I lowered ya selfesteem- makin KommaKazi wana commit suicide
Expo
hes from chicago
and tom cruise stars in the film rainman
but yeh sorry for the delay bro, life happens.
links to come asap.
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ups
Player? nah but i see you speaking of my works
battlefields of scattered meals, barreled blood for thirst
no punch
shot a couple shells now i'm stealing this snail's home
took Thor's hammer, drove a few nails home
nope
hands to ya body do da elevator, no days off its sick labor
its a shame i am your religious savior's dictator
jus a statement
shit for competition there's quite enough in my line
so i deal with it, one courtesy flush at a time
lol
a disastrous deck of cards, the tragedy's dealt
i got pussy's like you on lock producin chastity belts
lol
v
You’re a poor ass faggot, what you got? A trashy mobile home?
Im’a get retarded on this nigga like I got an extra chromosome
ehh coula worder better
I aint talking golf when I tell this dude he’s below par
I mean the quality of his bars n how wack they all are
ehh wording hurt it
I radiate swagger, Its obvious when Johnny’s arrived
Even if Komma oozed confidence, he’d still Kom up Chi*
ohk
I’ll bring the rain down on this nigga, just refer to me as Rainman*
Cuz I’m Cruising* thru this battle, while u still thinkin of a game plan
ehh
It's done. I won the battle n the war, time for you n God to get unified
Cuz I lowered ya selfesteem- makin KommaKazi wana commit suicide
nahh
this was close but the koma's last 2 bars won the battle. no hate to either jus keep battling and elevating. both need to work on wording but i felt like koma had the better wording although the chasity belt line could of been worded slightly better it was still mad funny.
v/Koma
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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Player? nah but i see you speaking of my works
battlefields of scattered meals, barreled blood for thirst
meh. No punch
shot a couple shells now i'm stealing this snail's home
took Thor's hammer, drove a few nails home
meh.
hands to ya body do da elevator, no days off its sick labor
its a shame i am your religious savior's dictator
bland
shit for competition there's quite enough in my line
so i deal with it, one courtesy flush at a time
lol
a disastrous deck of cards, the tragedy's dealt
i got pussy's like you on lock producin chastity belts
lol
vs
You’re a poor ass faggot, what you got? A trashy mobile home?
Im’a get retarded on this nigga like I got an extra chromosome
lmao
I aint talking golf when I tell this dude he’s below par
I mean the quality of his bars n how wack they all are
eh..
I radiate swagger, Its obvious when Johnny’s arrived
Even if Komma oozed confidence, he’d still Kom up Chi*
over my head
I’ll bring the rain down on this nigga, just refer to me as Rainman*
Cuz I’m Cruising* thru this battle, while u still thinkin of a game plan
decent punch. Word play was kinda off..But it WAS there.
It's done. I won the battle n the war, time for you n God to get unified
Cuz I lowered ya selfesteem- makin KommaKazi wana commit suicide
lol pretty good
V/ Johnny Player
More consistant I thought...Komma your stuff was kinda bland.
Komma u have 24 hours to get 1 link and johnny u have 24 hours to get 3 links or this will be a double dq
shit for competition there's quite enough in my line
so i deal with it, one courtesy flush at a time
a disastrous deck of cards, the tragedy's dealt
i got pussy's like you on lock producin chastity belts
vs
It's done. I won the battle n the war, time for you n God to get unified
Cuz I lowered ya selfesteem- makin KommaKazi wana commit suicide
this battle was meh...johnny if u had more bars like ur last one u would of took this easily both of u need work tho
v/kazi
shit for competition there's quite enough in my line
so i deal with it, one courtesy flush at a time
a disastrous deck of cards, the tragedy's dealt
i got pussy's like you on lock producin chastity belts
Vs
You’re a poor ass faggot, what you got? A trashy mobile home?
Im’a get retarded on this nigga like I got an extra chromosome
I’ll bring the rain down on this nigga, just refer to me as Rainman*
Cuz I’m Cruising* thru this battle, while u still thinkin of a game plan
Alright, Komma, your verse wasn't in any way shape or form directed at Johnny. That cost you big time man. It was vague and generic. Johnny had a couple punches that hit, and a couple that were close to hitting had he changed the wording a bit. Komma had 2 bars that hit, and none of the rest did much for me. As I said earlier, no name play from Komma to make it specific to his oppenent. Johnny on the other hand had a couple lines that specified WHO he was talking to or battling. I know what you were sayin with the Kom up Chi, cuz he's from Chi-town...but the setup was good enough. Work on the setup. Ok enough rambling...I choose Johnny Player as the victor.
Kom:
Not badPlayer? nah but i see you speaking of my works
battlefields of scattered meals, barreled blood for thirst
The shells concept was ok but the bar could have worded better, there was no real punchshot a couple shells now i'm stealing this snail's home
took Thor's hammer, drove a few nails home
Ok...hands to ya body do da elevator, no days off its sick labor
its a shame i am your religious savior's dictator
lolshit for competition there's quite enough in my line
so i deal with it, one courtesy flush at a time
Not bad!a disastrous deck of cards, the tragedy's dealt
i got pussy's like you on lock producin chastity belts
JP:
lolYou’re a poor ass faggot, what you got? A trashy mobile home?
Im’a get retarded on this nigga like I got an extra chromosome
Could have played off the first line betterI aint talking golf when I tell this dude he’s below par
I mean the quality of his bars n how wack they all are
Not badI radiate swagger, Its obvious when Johnny’s arrived
Even if Komma oozed confidence, he’d still Kom up Chi*
I can see where ya' going with it but you need to work on the wordplay. Idea wasn't bad thoughI’ll bring the rain down on this nigga, just refer to me as Rainman*
Cuz I’m Cruising* thru this battle, while u still thinkin of a game plan
Again - the wordplay could have been nicer to make more of an impact on the punchline, was ok otherwiseIt's done. I won the battle n the war, time for you n God to get unified
Cuz I lowered ya selfesteem- makin KommaKazi wana commit suicide
Johnny Player took this IMO. Punches, wordplay, humour & concepts were all stronger & more consistent.
Vote JP
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