Moose35 vs KutthroaT

[moose35]

10 lines, due midnight. Check in and good luck.

[KutthroaT]

Check Check

[KutthroaT]

Cant stay in the house moose goons hired to wait
I'll fire the eight and kill him on the fire escape
You liars is fake you prolly wearin wires n tape
Taking his b*tch out too gotta buy her a date (6/18/10)
Do I really need to creep through the alley way
Black toast, black locs, gunsmoke the cali way
Another f*ckin foney blowin homies you a male dike
F*CK this nigga moose he ain't the truth he the frail type
Catch this nigga slippin at a drive thru or a red light
Bullets hit the windshield leave his head by the tail pipe

[moose35]

Leave links bro, wouldn't want you to get DQ'ed.

Mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=430604
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=430641

Quick 10 for ya:

Battling me, expecting to be rewarded with 7th heaven for your strife,
Chill...we'll have to go 6 more times for you to experience your 7th afterlife,
You bleeding from the neck-that alias is the most honest thing you ever wrote,
It'll pass though-I've heard it takes experience to learn deep throat,
It's the hope that fags like you that keeps you jacking off steady,
But guys DO dream about you...
...and wake up screaming cause they just saw Freddy,
But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,
Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles

[Switch.]

Cant stay in the house moose goons hired to wait
I'll fire the eight and kill him on the fire escape
Nah..weak
You liars is fake you prolly wearin wires n tape
Taking his b*tch out too gotta buy her a date (6/18/10)
Not feeling
Do I really need to creep through the alley way
Black toast, black locs, gunsmoke the cali way
Irrelevant gun talk which u didnt even direct towards ya opponent
Another f*ckin foney blowin homies you a male dike
F*CK this nigga moose he ain't the truth he the frail type
weak again
Catch this nigga slippin at a drive thru or a red light
Bullets hit the windshield leave his head by the tail pipe
Gun talk is getting boring now and it didnt hit at all tbh

vs

Battling me, expecting to be rewarded with 7th heaven for your strife,
Chill...we'll have to go 6 more times for you to experience your 7th afterlife,
Meh
You bleeding from the neck-that alias is the most honest thing you ever wrote,
It'll pass though-I've heard it takes experience to learn deep throat,
meh..not feelin too much
It's the hope that fags like you that keeps you jacking off steady,
But guys DO dream about you...
...and wake up screaming cause they just saw Freddy,
Nah not too hard
But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,
lol-ish
Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles
lol ok-ish..could've worded it much better though


This battle was weak..Kutt had a lot of gun talk lines which were really irrelevant and had a basic flow overall, i think kutt is heavily influenced by youtube battle rappers such as conceited who would probably spit something like that in terms of gun talking lines. I advise kutt to step up, read other battles for experience and aim ya lines at ur opponent more rather than rhymin for the sake of it. Moose u went soft on this dude which is understandable..u had ok-ish lines towards the end which gave u the win anyway. No hate to either.

V/moose

[Tim]

nothing

Vs.

But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,
Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles

Yeah the gun talk is really not needed, and your punches really were off...Moose had the more solid well rounded verse

Vote...Moose

Please hit it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...457/index.html

[moose35]

thanks for voting so far, up

Tim I'll hit up that battle tommorow, can't think straight right now lol

[Amen]

nothing

vs

But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,
Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles

pretty one sided battle here, kut; you need t owork on everything, creativity, punches, delivery, concepts, jokes/disses...read around man, see what people bring to the table, moose you have the battling idea, im sure you barely tried here lookin at the verse you were facing, so i wont say much, i'll have to check you out tho in the future man...keep writing guys.

v/moose

[Trig]

Catch this nigga slippin at a drive thru or a red light
Bullets hit the windshield leave his head by the tail pipe

vs.

But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,

Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles

A mediocre gun line vs a mediocre gay joke and a decent humor, nah moose35 got this simply a lot less tame with the drop and better punches but my vote still don't count cos i aint hit 50 posts yet after a year... lol

[moose35]

ups

[FUPA]

best lines

I'll fire the eight and kill him on the fire escape
You liars is fake you prolly wearin wires n tape

very strong rhyming sequence right there

vs.


But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,

haha pretty funny, good punchline

verdict

i know that i'm new to rb but to me these verses seemed pretty weak. the only good punchline came from moose35 but KutthroaT had some good multi-rhyming lines. kutt's verse had a decent rhythm to it but nothing too impressive.

my vote is for: moose35 (except it doesn't count cuz i'm under 50 posts)

[moose35]

thanks for the votes....up

[Mr.Ginsu]

Catch this nigga slippin at a drive thru or a red light
Bullets hit the windshield leave his head by the tail pipe
(decent rhyme, only thing close to a jab you had)

vs

But all these double meanings are confusing to some,
So when I say "Spit clear shit!"...I don't mean your BF's cum,
(lol played concept but still funny)

Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles
(Best line of the battle)

Quite obviously a one sided battle, Moose's last two lines were better than Kut's whole verse. Kut ya gotta progress from the gun talk to some creative and personal punches. If talking hood shit won victories around here 90% of these dbags would be undefeated.. No hate, just throwin some feedback..

my vote /MOOSE

[moose35]

uppp

[Extortion]

nutting
vs

Your shit's old, reading it I fall asleep like Rip van Winkle,
First timer here!-punches so old you're the first rapper whose lines have wrinkles
not much to offer with ur verse moose

kutthroat had nothing ...and needs to read more vets work and follow wittyness to win.....dont bite tho...
moose come with a better delivery and wordplay

v/moose
plz rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...829/index.html