10 Lines
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10 Lines
Friday
Beyond Adequate
16 lines is what im going.
cool
Beyond Adequate
Originally Posted by 4renSICK
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having witty raps? never his way - i truely believe someone ghostwrite's 4 him all day
fact is im busting down your bars so much, ......he'll have no service to get his text from tay
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i dare u to claim ur good...ill split ur tu-lips like i was ripping a flower up
truth is auto would have trouble spitten fire,....... with a mario power up
hes just a faggot slut - hes quick to ride nuts soon as he gets a dick wiff
i'll jam a broom up this puppets ass so far, automatic will turn into a stick shift
run your mouth and ill make ya body park itself like driving a lex
as for u no.1? he'll never assume that position, like fat people during sex
he nothing to brag about - car cables to ur dreams couldnt jump start ur fame
problem is your presents is forgetable, even novade forgot part of your name
Your never mentioned as dope, the whole site knows this kids soft
i'll burn ur crew n make TR ash, since thats what the roster consist of
we know GOW helps w/ your lines, fact is he rewords all of ur verses
he has to pick up so match trash, ud think he had community service
your a noob homie, and im a vet so we'll never be in the same class
I left for a minute and was idle, while thats what he just sees me as
my punches tend to hit like earthquakes, so ur ego is what ill be bruisin
so if you feel an aftershock, it's cuz you cant believe that ur losing
you see i'm the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
4ren mixes up with so many herbs, you'd think he was living organic
Beyond Adequate
you see i'm NOT the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...128/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...376/index.html
Beyond Adequate
having witty raps? never his way - i truely believe someone ghostwrite's 4 him all day
fact is im busting down your bars so much, ......he'll have no service to get his text from tay
hes just a faggot slut - hes quick to ride nuts soon as he gets a dick wiff
i'll jam a broom up this puppets ass so far, automatic will turn into a stick shift
he nothing to brag about - car cables to ur dreams couldnt jump start ur fame
problem is your presents is forgetable, even novade forgot part of your name
vs
you see i'm the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
4ren mixes up with so many herbs, you'd think he was living organic
Auto, the GOW bar woulda hit but the wording damaged the punch. i like the organic bar, but the other punches came off too basic. 4ren had some serious creative bars in his verse and he gets the win for harder punches.
v/ 4ren
having witty raps? never his way - i truely believe someone ghostwrite's 4 him all day
fact is im busting down your bars so much, ......he'll have no service to get his text from tay
hes just a faggot slut - hes quick to ride nuts soon as he gets a dick wiff
i'll jam a broom up this puppets ass so far, automatic will turn into a stick shift
he nothing to brag about - car cables to ur dreams couldnt jump start ur fame
problem is your presents is forgetable, even novade forgot part of your name
vs
you see i'm the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
4ren mixes up with so many herbs, you'd think he was living organic
Honestly 4, won this in every aspect..came harder..more consistent and punched the fuck outta auto.. but there's a lot of room to elevate for both ya'll word....good battle.
V/4renSick
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wow copy and paste more..break down votes ffs, this is a crew battle.....
having witty raps? never his way - i truely believe someone ghostwrite's 4 him all day
fact is im busting down your bars so much, ......he'll have no service to get his text from tay
hes just a faggot slut - hes quick to ride nuts soon as he gets a dick wiff
i'll jam a broom up this puppets ass so far, automatic will turn into a stick shift
he nothing to brag about - car cables to ur dreams couldnt jump start ur fame
problem is your presents is forgetable, even novade forgot part of your name
vs
you see i'm the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
4ren mixes up with so many herbs, you'd think he was living organic
4 got this easy..it was kind a close..but 4 edged with some ill bars...
vote; 4
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having witty raps? never his way - i truely believe someone ghostwrite's 4 him all day
fact is im busting down your bars so much, ......he'll have no service to get his text from tay
Eh it seemed really simple, didnt seem like alot of effort put into it, ghostwrite,bars etc real basic punches everyone uses.
i dare u to claim ur good...ill split ur tu-lips like i was ripping a flower up
truth is auto would have trouble spitten fire,....... with a mario power up
first thing i thought of was joe budden's line "They ain't super or luigi or Mario, ain't found that power
plus they couldn't spit fire if they found that flower" so that line was eh for me.
hes just a faggot slut - hes quick to ride nuts soon as he gets a dick wiff
i'll jam a broom up this puppets ass so far, automatic will turn into a stick shift
Nice line , enjoyed it
run your mouth and ill make ya body park itself like driving a lex
as for u no.1? he'll never assume that position, like fat people during sex
Eh nothing to good or bad, decent line
he nothing to brag about - car cables to ur dreams couldnt jump start ur fame
problem is your presents is forgetable, even novade forgot part of your name
once again nothing to good or bad, decent line
Overall you had some good ideas in your verse, with a name like automatic id expect more play off hsi name , nothing bad jus nothing good either stood out to me.
Your never mentioned as dope, the whole site knows this kids soft
i'll burn ur crew n make TR ash, since thats what the roster consist of
eh decent line, nothing too spicatcular
we know GOW helps w/ your lines, fact is he rewords all of ur verses
he has to pick up so match trash, ud think he had community service
lol real simple, nothing too good, but it did get a laugh out of me
your a noob homie, and im a vet so we'll never be in the same class
I left for a minute and was idle, while thats what he just sees me as
ehh not feeling it really, didint seem worded right , or it was a big stretch
my punches tend to hit like earthquakes, so ur ego is what ill be bruisin
so if you feel an aftershock, it's cuz you cant believe that ur losing
ehhh same as a above
you see i'm the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
4ren mixes up with so many herbs, you'd think he was living organic
Lol really liked this line, best line out your verse, nice closer
Overall i think you too had some good concepts , just the wording on some of your lines didint seem right or were a big leap. but overall same decent
when it comes down to it for me its:
hes just a faggot slut - hes quick to ride nuts soon as he gets a dick wiff
i'll jam a broom up this puppets ass so far, automatic will turn into a stick shift
vs
you see i'm the type of opponent ur used to, so you better go and panic
4ren mixes up with so many herbs, you'd think he was living organic
V Auto , for the organic line something i havent heard before more creative.
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