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Thread: expressions .....feedback please

  1. #1
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    expressions .....feedback please

    check this out


    yo when i spill this shit, im dilligent, with this illin shit/
    killin it, building wit, my minds thought and the skill i spit/
    like "fugees" wit no "praz" im flowin sick with no flaws/
    drop ur jaws when u hear the treble from this rebel wit no cause/
    no need for applause, appreciation is no necessity/
    as long as i know im relentlessly spittin ill progresively/
    freestylins what can replenish me, from whats been stressin me/
    ability to speak real wit ease, is like a blessin see/
    cuz it helps to relieve the pains n restriants that only taints/
    ...the image i gotta portray to make gains, though pain stil remains/
    but i still regain, the undyin strain to maintain the strength i claim/
    the strength to "shoot" for goals, and make it the length i "aim"/
    never fill in the blank the same, cuz real emcees dont reciprocate/
    i just flip the hate, to rip the state, of mind im in and spit it straight/
    helps to relieve, the pressures received, from wearin my heart on my sleeve/
    hard to believe, but like EVE perceived "love IS blind" for me its harder to see/
    harder to be, the standard expectation for this hexed set nation/
    knowin i need an education, but cant activate my minds complex sensations/
    confused in all of lifes angles, school, women n home life just strangles/
    chokin, provokin my inner thoughts to get mangled n left dangled/
    cant understand it, how im handed, highs but then so many lows n'/
    i can't get back on track of lifes path... cuz i aint got one chosen/
    hopefully soon i can resume from the doom, n prove to bloom/
    but for now im choose my room, to reside n write to sooth the wounds/
    i relize theres people with worse troubles, problems that double/
    but i gotta write to mend this rubble, cant pretend its subtle/
    to the world this my end rebutal, i sit n wait for lifes next lessons/
    til the next session, this recitin of writin is my expression


    holla at ya kid

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  2. #2
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    responses please

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    Kid Wonder
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    FLAMES COMIN MINDS STUNIN
    WHEN U SEE ME START RUNIN


    CITY LIFE
    firestarterv1(main dog)
    camouflage(2nd to main)
    wscgthug(new dog)
    SkiddLess(sub mod)
    Anonymiz Jones(main dog)
    panamARed(sub mod)
    criminal intent(new dog)
    skittlezz(new dog)
    Kid_wonder(new dog)

    Femcee Divsion
    Fantasm_Femcee(main)
    Feminem(second)
    PeasedEase(repper)
    whtyegrl15(poetryonly)


    im on the rise!!! holla at ya kid

  3. #3
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    Tight , tight , tight , tight drop , , ,dawg that drop was extremely tight , ILL shit

  4. #4
    InFiNiTe_22
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    bad brotha, u in a crew cause u got skillz, think about join us B.R.E. ....dat was ILL

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