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    Puppet Master

    Kids point, stare, laugh and then giggle
    I move when told, trapped and belittled
    treated with roughness, I had enough-it's
    true I entertain...but don't think I love it
    mostly shut away and only seen in public
    my life - I cant wait until I'm leaving from it
    I've hit hells floor but try to dream above it
    but still... all I will ever be's a puppet
    with strings attached, and carved from wood
    I can't blink or act; my master's far from good
    body's split and cracked, tell me why my lot,
    in life is only strife whether I try or not
    ..if I had flesh and tears I would cry and drop,
    to my knees screaming please end this life of wrought,
    misery and loneliness;wish I could hide my thoughts
    master bought a new me, locked me inside a box
    Days fly by, so why try, dooms my fate
    bereft of any light inside this tomb I wait


    I keep hearing voices, can't run or hide
    fearing the choices they have sprung with lies
    This can't be real, it must be from my mind
    their saying that their spirits from the other side
    ..promising me power sure as the sun will shine
    I've been a slave so long I've grown numb with time
    the voices are full of evil, raw and unrefined
    I see a flash of light, then hear “come it's time”
    everything vanishes, then spins in confusion
    is this real, or am I, trapped within an illusion
    darkness and sin's introduced in the room then
    the evil spirits begin transforming me into a human
    wood becomes flesh, blood, bone and hair
    alone no one's here but the spirits, I float in air
    no more woe, despair or strings holding me up
    powerful magics inside me, yet I feel broken up
    cold and crushed, yet glad to be out the box
    Freedom! I can move around and walk
    yet I think my soul is gone, drown and lost
    I hear voice in my head's, pounding thoughts
    they say.. “REVENGE! We have given you powers
    REVENGE! Your old master, repay that coward!”


    So I wait in his closet, black and cloaked
    heads swarming, can't breath, by madness choked
    I'm sure of what I must do and have no hopes,
    of suppressing this rage and it's savage hold,
    grown over the years of being trapped, unknown
    the front door opens, guess my masters home
    my hands wrapped on a knife, with a grasp of stone
    as he opens the door, my twisted laugh explodes!
    I leap out in furry, swing and slash his throat
    he gasps and then unleashes a blood bath and moat,
    of crimson red, eyes show dread - I bet this bastard forgot,
    my face - remember it as your blood splashes and drops
    I feel a rush... suddenly.. my madness has stopped
    the spirits have left, no more laughter or talk
    ..of murderous plots, next I collapse in a flop
    everything's dark, guess to be damned is my lot
    they've returned me to my body still trapped in the box






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    Re: Puppet Master

    lol pretty tight concept here.. sorta like pinnoccio or the actual movie of this piece's title... i liked the first and last stanzas over the middle.. this had great flow through out it aswell as some pretty dope multies to acompany it..very descriptive and you did a good job of showing the emotion that was accumulating through out... then it got to the climatic ending where the neglected puppet has its revenge lol.. pretty dope ending man... i just feel sad for the puppet now.. =( ... peep "Cupid's Curse"... thanks and nice drop man... keep em coming!

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    Re: Puppet Master

    thanks

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    Re: Puppet Master

    Nice vocab flowed nice and the structure was good the concept was pretty original as well good job man nice drop keep writeing

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    Re: Puppet Master

    cool.. uppin'

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    Re: Puppet Master

    Love me!!

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