Moose35 Vs. YungDosia

[moose35]

bump. Drop a link, I'll RTF with an honest vote

[SonUDaily]

Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
based on the fact its true what he said this was a decent personal
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
lol
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
lmfao
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
nah
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
nah

you fell off at the end WTF happen??

vs


No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
nah
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
ok at most but still a played concept
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
played concept again but punch was aight
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
ok
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
decent

let me brake this down real quick
YD had alot of played concept but delivery was decent the most creative punch you had was your ending and even that wasnt the best or that good imo
moose you had a good start with personals, the fact is that first bar only reason its even decent its because its true other then that it would of been weak but you had a couple of hits that made me laugh but fell off horrible at the end

so its either played concept won or personal hits won

pretty tough one but

vote: moose for the more enjoyable read and better hits

[Novade]

Both agree'd i can vote so....


Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
-okay opener

The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
-decent

You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
-naww

But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
-played rly

Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
-not feeling



vs


No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
-lol

So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
-lmfao nice

This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
-nice

I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
-mehh....

You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
-lol decent close


Vote=Yd,
Better verse, moose yur elevating fast bro..keep it up...

[YungDosia]

Uppin.

[YungDosia]

Uppin5

[Innocentific UK]

Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,

Eh? Wasn't feeling this, man.

The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??

This could have been worded differently for better effect.

You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?

Owch, that hurt.

But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!

Played shit

Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!

Alright closer

vs

No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle

Alright opener.

So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed

Not feeling this, man.

This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches

Played.

I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body

No.

You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically

Good closer.

Vote would have to be Moose for me by an inch, maybe if Yung had something else other then that Gutter line he would have taken it.

Keep elevating.

[moose35]

uppers

[YungDosia]

Uppin6

[moose35]

motherupper

[G!MMiK]

well im on my ps3 so i cant quote but i'll vote anyway lol

moose i liked your verse the potential line was the best punch in the entire battle imo and ur alot better than wen u first got here flow was good u were consistent with the punches although i wuldve liked to see multies it was still a pretty solid verse

yung how u gonna always sleep on everyone whos not a vet man lol still your verse wasnt as consistent as ive seen u write u had some old played punches and u thought hed jus sit back and take an ass whooping ur flow was good u had like 2 or 3 good punches imo u had a very good closer buh it couldnt make up for the rest of the verse

v/moose
for a more consistent peace with more punches landed

[Switch.]

Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
Okay starter
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
Personal but not hard
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
Meh, alright
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
rhyme scheme was off and punch was corny/played
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster
Weak closer

vs

No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
Ok-ish starter
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
Pretty good hit
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
played dude, flip was ok at best
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
Meh
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
Nice closer

In all honesty this was a one sided battle. Moose had some personal lines but they didnt hit hard added to some weak and played lines. YD your drop was decent and consistent overall, the lotb was between your 2nd bar and ya closer tbh. Not a bad battle in general though but YD took it pretty easily.

v/YungDosia


*im not polling im just dropping feedback*

[YungDosia]

Thanks for the honest feed^

Upppin last vote peoples!

[The Archetype]

You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?

vs

No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically

a lot of average shit here... moose had a bunch of statements... like there were no twists or anything... YD had punches, but a few were terribly done... but he had 1 more decent punch and his misses were @ least punches...

vote YD