10 lines, due by tomorrow midnight.
both check in before dropping, this is mine.
goodluck.
10 lines, due by tomorrow midnight.
both check in before dropping, this is mine.
goodluck.
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
same to you man. Check.
FYI: He battled Alyse (a girl). Anybody who doesn't get the personals, don't vote please. And if you agree Yung, I don't want LetmeAdam or JAE.KA voting on this either.
Links: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...696/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...670/index.html
Witty phrase...
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
Murder.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...545/index.html
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
eh
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
lol
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
nice
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
ok
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
not feeling
vs
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
ok
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
ok again
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
played
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
no way
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
LMAO awesome
i don't know this was a good battle...moose your best line was the dude wit potential line...
i guess by a cunt hair i would have to give it YD because i liked his closer...again good battle...i liked both verses
Uppin.
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
Eh. Could've been better
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
set up was good but then punch wasn't great
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
nice. beautiful set up
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
not bad
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
nice setup/punch
vs
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
nice
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
not bad
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
nice punch
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
eh
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
ok closer
My vote would go to Moose. He was more consistent and he had some better punches. Close battle though.
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
lol aiight... nice personal bruh
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
LMAO! good personal...
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
HAHAHA Lol
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
ehhh.... pushin it with the avatar man, those jokes are played bruh
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
HAHAHAHAHA LOL!! GOOD 'EN
AIIGHT MAN, I'd have to give it like a 7.5/10 moose, i liked ya verse dude.
vs
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
Lmao awsome opener
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
lol nice one dude
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
LMAO
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
Nice.. nice...
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
HAHAHAHAH LMMFAO.
The problem is tho YUNG D is that you had clear enough time to think about your punches.... ehh..... i'm the guy that hops on the keyboard, and throws out his shit, not takin' fuckin' precious time writing mine better than his.
you dropped yours ....6 hours after his... i know... i know.... you had something to do... it always happen,s but i'm sorry dude, given the fact of all the punches thrown here, off the top his head, i'mma give it to moose... He went first for A, he had more n better personals for B n C he posted 6 hours before you man...
Nice battle yall, had to break this one down too... Yung work on ya personals dude... a lil more effort and you probably woulda taken it man.
Vote - Moose
vote DQ'd due to complete ignorance...
-Arch
Last edited by The Archetype; May 18th, 2010 at 11:51 PM
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Lmao your giving him the vote cuz he dropped off the top of the head? wtf kid, the battle was set up yesterday and he dropped today lol, i drop when i feel like it i can key a verse whenever i want.
uppin.
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
moose
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
-played as fuck
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
-no punch
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
-decent
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
-meh
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
-still no real punch more general..use a metaphor or something!
YD
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
-nice
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
-concept was good, wording killed it.
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
-decent semi played
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
-i see the concept...but it sucked or was delivered bad.
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
-decent
vote dosia
Had a battle verse, as the other guy had more direct personals with no real wit to them or laugh factor..
moose
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
-like the turning his sayings against him, but it was kinda weak
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
-Ok, kinda just a ha though... weak
You came here as a rising star, people hailed you as something special,
Yet after a year, how does it feel to still be called a "dude with potential"?
-Haha
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
-Ok, but kinda lost my rythym here
without the rhyme...liked the last line
Hood dude-some of your drops, I thought you were joking, being a prankster,
Cause buddy...The M.O.B is the closest you'll ever get to being a gangster!
-Haha
8/10
vs
YD
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
-Haha
So this fagget boy switched to sucking cock for the apparent reason
Now moose is known for giving slick head.........and no hair is needed
-Haha
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
-....ehh
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
-Nope
You couldn't knock out a noob on this site, how ya hits hurtin me?
When the last upper cut u ever made.....was on ya wrist vertically
-Haha
7/10
Not a weak battle, but it felt that you guys were thowing shit out, kinda. YD, you have good punches, but your too focused on the freestylist. Moose, i felt your verse more, but by not much. Come harder. V/Moose
Even if you were free on Sin/Jesus Christ wouldn't take you in/you equals Too Wack/Man, Im really Sorry Bout that/:RBman:
Yung, failure in the LLL that comes to FL to get his conscience clear,
You claim it's as whack as ever, and yet you still drop battles here,
( this was decent )
But you've been a tough lock to open...and I finally found the key,
And that cat in your avatar<---as close as you'll get to any pussy!
The ones do you win are against cats with less wins than the age of your daughter,
And when that gets too tough...you go pick a girl to slaughter??
(first lines were a decent attempt at a personal. 2nd was worded shitty but a okish personal)
vs
No bitch ever gave it up to u, they'd hurt u and leave ya ass rattled
Cuz dude couldn't get someone to 'Fuck.........even in his last battle
(decent personal )
This kid YD fresh as hell, but one clean shot and ill leave son in crutches
Cuz Im so fly i'll probobly never land<------like everyone of your punches
(self hype but decent flip into a punch)
I'll take this nigga out, dump him in the sewer if he test the shoty
Blow his brains out, and leave his mind n the gutter with the rest of his body
(ok )
...this was close but vote: Yung
uppin.
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
he still went first six hours before you 'kid' grow up n learn to take critisism
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