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This guy obviously thinks he's better then me, but he's not better at confronting
Murder Moose like I'm in canada, and I'm up for a spot of illegal hunting
Keep fronting, because my rhymes are more explosive then Nagasaki
And Rapbattle forum will be a whole lot better after removing the other half of Rocky
Watch as my rhymes leave people at the edge of their seats, slowly on the brink
Fuck a tribute to haiti, people will be leaving a tribute to you after I make you extinct
Your bars are weak, they take forever to reach a point and draw a battle to a crawl
Once I beat you, fuck the win I just want to mount this pussies head on my wall
Your faggot rhymes are lame, I'll smash this moose up and leave him housetrained and tame
You may be a gypsy from slovakia but you couldn't lift a curse ... benchpressing my name
Just for the record, I'm not a Gypsy, but whatever floats your boat bro. Here we go:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=422412
Just look at this half-ass rebel, it's lame,
He's scared to cuss so he masks himself with an apostrophe in front of his name,
Spilled his whole life story into his OM-his life, chances at romance,
But who'd want to read about some "Fucker's" life, nobody even gave it a glance,
Big player on NBA courts every night-it's not that, it's rap skills you lack,
By the way, the cheerleaders called, they want their pom-poms back,
Writing miserable lines and calling it "keystyled" with no preperation,
Shit's bad for a freestyle, but you take 3 weeks to write your creations,
But getting dumped by a girlfriend again, that must've sucked,
She must still like you though, she was yelling you name last time we fucked.
uuppp
Stop sleepinnnngggg
'Fuck
This guy obviously thinks he's better then me, but he's not better at confronting
Murder Moose like I'm in canada, and I'm up for a spot of illegal hunting
Lol, kinda funny.. Decent punch
Keep fronting, because my rhymes are more explosive then Nagasaki
And Rapbattle forum will be a whole lot better after removing the other half of Rocky
Noo... didn't like the set-up, and punch was blehh..
Watch as my rhymes leave people at the edge of their seats, slowly on the brink
Fuck a tribute to haiti, people will be leaving a tribute to you after I make you extinct
Mehh, dont like the self hype set-ups.. Wasn't feelin this at all..
Your bars are weak, they take forever to reach a point and draw a battle to a crawl
Once I beat you, fuck the win I just want to mount this pussies head on my wall
Alright punch.. You need to use more set-ups like THIS!
Your faggot rhymes are lame, I'll smash this moose up and leave him housetrained and tame
You may be a gypsy from slovakia but you couldn't lift a curse ... benchpressing my name
Decent closer, again.. solid set-up and punch followed through.
Your punches are nice, when you set em up properly, work on that, and we'll be sure to see more from you son..
Like ya flow, and shit, but you gotta be more consistent man..
vs
Just look at this half-ass rebel, it's lame,
He's scared to cuss so he masks himself with an apostrophe in front of his name,
Hahaha, I liked this opener..
Spilled his whole life story into his OM-his life, chances at romance,
But who'd want to read about some "Fucker's" life, nobody even gave it a glance,
Decent personal, worded kinda weak..
Big player on NBA courts every night-it's not that, it's rap skills you lack,
By the way, the cheerleaders called, they want their pom-poms back,
Mehh,
Writing miserable lines and calling it "keystyled" with no preperation,
Shit's bad for a freestyle, but you take 3 weeks to write your creations,
Alright personal, but punch again, was worded kinda weak..
But getting dumped by a girlfriend again, that must've sucked,
She must still like you though, she was yelling you name last time we fucked.
Lol, alright punch.. Not the greatest closer, but made me chuckle a little..
Moose, you flowed nice too, and showed some potential for a knock-out.. but ya verse lacked that real strong punch to put it under, ya know what I mean?
You had decent set-ups, and you didn't have as much self hype lines..
Honestly, I felt you showed more consistency than 'Fuck here, merely because he had one less punch that I felt really connected.
Yo, 'Fuck shoulda one this, honestly.. But he fucked his wording up, and his set ups weren't as hard as moose's..
You gotta have a well rounded verse to expect to win battles, not just a couple decent punches.
V/moose
Uppin
0-1 uppinnngggg
This guy obviously thinks he's better then me, but he's not better at confronting
Murder Moose like I'm in canada, and I'm up for a spot of illegal hunting
cool nameplay
Keep fronting, because my rhymes are more explosive then Nagasaki
And Rapbattle forum will be a whole lot better after removing the other half of Rocky
cool concept, but bad wording
Watch as my rhymes leave people at the edge of their seats, slowly on the brink
Fuck a tribute to haiti, people will be leaving a tribute to you after I make you extinct
cool
Your bars are weak, they take forever to reach a point and draw a battle to a crawl
Once I beat you, fuck the win I just want to mount this pussies head on my wall
lol cool
Your faggot rhymes are lame, I'll smash this moose up and leave him housetrained and tame
You may be a gypsy from slovakia but you couldn't lift a curse ... benchpressing my name
cool punch, BUT bad set up so punch = meh
vs
Just look at this half-ass rebel, it's lame,
He's scared to cuss so he masks himself with an apostrophe in front of his name,
weak opener
Spilled his whole life story into his OM-his life, chances at romance,
But who'd want to read about some "Fucker's" life, nobody even gave it a glance,
nice punch
Big player on NBA courts every night-it's not that, it's rap skills you lack,
By the way, the cheerleaders called, they want their pom-poms back,
weak
Writing miserable lines and calling it "keystyled" with no preperation,
Shit's bad for a freestyle, but you take 3 weeks to write your creations,
not feeling
But getting dumped by a girlfriend again, that must've sucked,
She must still like you though, she was yelling you name last time we fucked.
this is dissing yourself lol
F you had some nice concept the curse line could have been sick if you would of had a set-up relevant to the punch but you took the missdirect approach to it and it didnt pay off in my book, Moose you had alot of punches that were weak i felt the personal with the fuckers life and i feel like if you woulda kept up the nameplay and personals you coulda had this, but my vote goes to Fuck`
This guy obviously thinks he's better then me, but he's not better at confronting
Murder Moose like I'm in canada, and I'm up for a spot of illegal hunting
(ok, could have been beter)
Your bars are weak, they take forever to reach a point and draw a battle to a crawl
Once I beat you, fuck the win I just want to mount this pussies head on my wall
(i liked this)
vs
Just look at this half-ass rebel, it's lame,
He's scared to cuss so he masks himself with an apostrophe in front of his name,
(almost decent)
rest wasnt good man. need to get harder punches, and nameplays, wordplay ect..ya dig
vote: fuck
Just look at this half-ass rebel, it's lame,
He's scared to cuss so he masks himself with an apostrophe in front of his name,
But who'd want to read about some "Fucker's" life, nobody even gave it a glance,
Big player on NBA courts every night-it's not that, it's rap skills you lack,
By the way, the cheerleaders called, they want their pom-poms back,
vs
You may be a gypsy from slovakia but you couldn't lift a curse ... benchpressing my name
'Fuck you were kinda lame dude, i don't see how you got anywhere with that bro, i see your personals there, but your punches weren't heavy at all, no hard vocab, no horrorcor shit, just kinda .... blah flow, n rhymescheme... aiight, but you have childish rhymes dude...
Moose, you coulda came harder than that, i think i've seen better from you too... seein' what you had to battle though...imma give it to you cuz i see a flow n rhyme scheme with hittin' punches, they were lame tho bro... more creativity man.
Vote - moose
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