#Uno vs amadeus

[#Uno]

10 lines.

[#Uno]

My bars hit hard like social laws and theories,
A star enlarged, bizzare and smart, i soak up all that's near me,
I'll dart ya art, ya can't discard bi-polar thoughts and clearly..
his heart is scarred, disarm his charm, die slow ya whore, I'll dearly..
depart ya ass, depart ya past, I'll throw the corpse and leave thee,
Six feet low, dig deep hoe, i broke the chalk and neatly....
Sketched the mess i left for dead, then groped ya daughter briefly,
it'll be alright, it'll be okay, i told her short to see me,
I'm in her puss, I'm in her bush, i showed support to be thee..
guy she liked, i ride the dyke, i know..of course I'm freaky

[#Uno]

Now for your ten lines....i'll give you 2 hours that took me 20 minutes to write.

[schizmatic]

your a nobody, a loser, you're a fucking soaring flammer
the last time you were breaking news you tore up my morning paper
you just wrote a damn poem, give it a rest ya geek sleep
your verse was very emo like a misprint at sesame street
i dont even need 10 lines, those 4 just whored this dork
if i was u ide turn muslem cuz the girl you're fuckin is pork
suck my dick u herb, before i use you for basil
this kids so dumb he thought weed was purple hazel
thats it you just lost, now shut the fuck up
on a escalator full of guys this fag would get up

[Dr!p]

lol,amadeaus took this with actual punches,no hate uno,you just didnt attack your opponent.bot had good flow,am had good wordplay and uno had good multis.
v=amadeaus

[#Uno]

nice verse

syllables and structure i got you.

punches you got me.

[#Uno]

Well done amadeus, you officially rhymed the last 2 words of each line, like every other person in the world. Very original and creative (y) try align several long and short sounding vowels constantly for 10 lines you'd shit your little panties. It's impossible to incorporate punches when your rhyming is so intricate. Don't get smug cos your bff voted for you. You sir are grade a garbage. thanks

[schizmatic]

gdfsgdfshsfdhdfshshf

[Dr!p]

lol,what a little baby bitch,just cuz you suck balls at txt don't mean everybody is against you. I hate weak sauce ass noobs with smart ass mouths when they str8 suck dick through a straw and eat ass with a dairy queen spoon like this kunt uno.Go finger your pussy elsewhere bitch tits roflmfao!!!!!

[schizmatic]

shydfhgshhghdshghs

[newdude]

good battle from both the edge goes to aM BETTER PUNCHES aND THaTS WHaT LEaVES THE LaST IMPRESSION

VOTE= aM

[moose35]

Well done amadeus, you officially rhymed the last 2 words of each line, like every other person in the world. Very original and creative (y) try align several long and short sounding vowels constantly for 10 lines you'd shit your little panties. It's impossible to incorporate punches when your rhyming is so intricate. Don't get smug cos your bff voted for you. You sir are grade a garbage. thanks

Are you shitting me Uno? He threw punch after punch, and all you did was bullshit multis that made no sense. How is it "impossible to incorporate punches when rhyming is intricate"? You had better flow, but shit man, this is a battle. It's like a fistfight, where one guy just throws hooks and uppercuts and the other dude stands around doing kung-fu poses but not actually doing anything. Amadeus took this hands down.

v/Amadeus

and btw you're not allowed to comment on other people's votes, so stop doing that too

[Hanible]

v/am

[The Dude]

yeah i def gotta say that am took this. Uno didn't come with much, alot of it needed reworking, some i didn't really get like the second bar..


My bars hit hard like social laws and theories,
A star enlarged, bizzare and smart, i soak up all that's near me,
I'll dart ya art, ya can't discard bi-polar thoughts and clearly..
his heart is scarred, disarm his charm, die slow ya whore, I'll dearly..
^what..

vs


your a nobody, a loser, you're a fucking soaring flammer
the last time you were breaking news you tore up my morning paper
you just wrote a damn poem, give it a rest ya geek sleep
your verse was very emo like a misprint at sesame street
^not bad

v/amadeus

[#Uno]

Are you shitting me Uno? He threw punch after punch, and all you did was bullshit multis that made no sense. How is it "impossible to incorporate punches when rhyming is intricate"? You had better flow, but shit man, this is a battle. It's like a fistfight, where one guy just throws hooks and uppercuts and the other dude stands around doing kung-fu poses but not actually doing anything. Amadeus took this hands down.

v/Amadeus

and btw you're not allowed to comment on other people's votes, so stop doing that too

First, in fact only comment that resonates with me. I guess i pride myself on flow too much, but i disagree with the bolded.

I'll vote for ama if you can create a punchline that contains.

key
(ah) ah sound e.g star.
(o) long o sound e.g social
(i) long i sound e.g. bright
(or)(or) sound e.g law
(e)(e) double e e.g theory
(a) short a sound e.g and



duh "(ah)" duh "(ah)" duh "(ah)" duh "(ah)" "(i)" "(o)" "(or)(or)"(a)""(e)(e)"

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