My new rap

[MC Ghosty]

(Intro)
Fuck off and fuck you fucking hate me
Hating on me because I'm fucking white

So what I'm white your face needs to get hit right
You need to go back to school, you are not bright
Because I'm white doesn't mean I'm fucking polite
Because I'm white people can fucking see me tonight
Well I'll go madder than Brittany Spears hitting the a car
Don't give a fuck if you think I have taken it a step too far
Will knock you to the pavement, and make you eat the tar
Will come at you slashing with a knife, leave you with a scar
Then I will put you in your casket, then I will fucking burn it
You have a chance to live, all you need do is fucking submit
I'm fucking much better than you, why don't you just admit
Just quit while before you lose, well you spit all I saw was shit
I will fucking make you disappear, just like Madeleine Mccann
Because I fucking listen to eminem, doesn't mean I'm a Stan
I will drop nuclear bombs, just like what happened to Japan
I'll kidnap you and gut you and leave your body in my van

[suddle.]

I appreciate your racism.

Well played sir, well played.

[Novac]

"Extreme Elevation: Need help getting better? Come here and ask it."

"Open Mic Text: Drop a written. Get critiqued by other members."


Please, learn to read or go away. It's really not that hard to post something in the correct forum. If you have a question, by all means. But if you just want critique go to forum that fucking literally says "Get critiqued by other members.".

Seriously though, did you expect to just come and copy+paste a wall of text into the first forum you thought *might* be the right one and expect constructive feedback?

Love,
-Novac<3


P.s. Lose the whole "angry white rapper" persona. It's so played. And it was never cool.

[Raw Talent]

stan..