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    Bearmanpig

    I’m Saving women, chasing villains throwing waste and piss at,
    Children, victimising Barbie dolls - I miss tasting knick-knacks,
    This is naughty Fleming with a left-hand basis to give that,
    Frenzy for bent chicks, let’s play - there ain’t a road to cross,
    Stuffing a bowl of tomato combo, just me and Goldilocks,
    Told me, the bears won’t be back ‘til dawn is clocked,
    I’m coughing smog through an offering bong, talking squat,
    I'm flooring props, scorching on little bear’s fold up cot,
    Saw Voldemort, hold that thought - Potter’s with Dumbledore,
    Summoning whores, beyond his humble luck - he rung his door,
    Out of luck, stuffed his jaw - Guts, gore - junk is torn,
    Pots rubbed his tucked stick-on, chunking bore,
    Like Porky pig, but it ain’t all folks - now, drain all hopes,
    The market’s a sailing boat, in a paddle pool - rename your co.
    ‘Cause Guess what? I’m Bearmanpig - Hear that? Forget Meerkat wit,
    Just queers, I’ll be the mascot - alas Top, like Gear’s man - Stig.

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    ahaha really interesting piece. Rhyme schemes are solid but sometimes they don't quite work.. or that might be just the way I sound them in my head. good structure though and the meaning is just crazy :P. ILL peice overall man very entertaining :P.
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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Aiyyo viewers, say something? Lol.

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Their 2 scared 2 talk 2 u after they read what u wrote right there.. :P
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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Looks like it, aha.

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    nice man, structure is readable and concepts was crazy, honestly man i thought you would be hella-hard to ressurect for the fact you don't see the words "I come in peace" to much in the frontlines. lol
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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Lol, thanks man. Yeah, I kinda killed the tension...Saying that. Lol. Cool, peace.

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Upping...

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    Re: Bearmanpig

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    Re: Bearmanpig

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Shit was all over the place. Some ill lines, really creative, however the flow to me was off in some parts, and again in other areas shit simply did not make since

    Overall not bad but gotta wrk on flow a tad bit more cause the originality is there

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    Aight man...I agree, gotta make some changes...But, that will come over time...If I find a beat to flow with, Lol. Right now, I just put down I wanted to. Peace.

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    Re: Bearmanpig

    free up :P can you feed one of my rap?? (A)

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