Closed this myself...
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Closed this myself...
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=427228
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=427321
Last edited by Paraciite; August 17th, 2010 at 09:14 AM
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You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...
wheres the rhymes this?
What do you mean?
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You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...
UP, ffs...
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I didn't really understand this, or see the rhymes in this...
I don't give a fuck. End of story.
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Ok.
Kirsten Stewart.
Hurling puke and...
Versus Newton.
Turgid humans.
Foxy Megan.
Proxy error.
Boxer heaven.
Lion King.
Science bring.
Vidal pics.
High on it.
Diamond. DIA - MEND.
Kleenex.
Beach sex.
Penis. PEE - NES.
Screaming.
Cheating.
Sold hand gun. SOL - HAN - GUN.
golden bland cunts. GOLDen - BLANd - CUNTS
Johansson. JO - HAN - sSON.
No man can. NO - MAN - CUN.
Omen's pun. OH - MEN'S - PUN.
Offence, hun. OH - FENCE - HUN.
Showing love. SHO - IN - LUV.
Really? You can't see it? Maybe it's got to do with pronunciation. I might have to change this a lil' bit. If you look at it, carefully...I name a lot of female celebrities...and in the details...I put a lot in to describe a lot of sexual features and relationship fibs and arguements etc. etc. TBH, I like all of these people...I'm a fan. Love 'em all I just over exaggerated. What I was saying was...I was showing appreciation of them, that's why I included them in this.
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You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...
Don't waste your time with them if they can't read lyrically correlating...words within a verse.
That some insane shit (from them).
Impart wisdom
In part wishing
The wit-starved listen
& dim sparks glisten.
Aha, thanks man...I wish we could have more on this website that can understand. I see a lot of weak shit on this website that gets commented on all the time...Puts me down, abit. I write for myself...and to impress...I get a lot of private messages saying..."You're 15?!", "How long have you been rapping for?"...etc. I'm proud of that. I'ma keep writing 'til I get it right...But I want feedback to know for sure. Trust me...No one around where I live know jack about Hip Hop...Can't talk to anyone about it, without getting the piss taken out of.
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You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...
Lmao, you sound like a younger me in some respects, and I only mean that cuz I'm older than you chronologically.
I will feed this later/tomorrow son.
Impart wisdom
In part wishing
The wit-starved listen
& dim sparks glisten.
Nice, you have to read it twice to understand it but overall its a cool drop. Nothing you read everyday. Keep it up, but u have to work on your ryhmes they fell of a few times
Cool cool...Which parts don't you understand?
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You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...
'No one around where I live know jack about Hip Hop'?!?! I think you forgot about someone sonny jim :P. ahaha anywayz nice drop man though I think you already sent me this to read last time.. vocab and rhyme schemes are above par as usual with you, you use words to rhyme that would be the last words I would think of. Fresh stuff man. The meaning was jokez although I don't know half of the names you mention, but some crazy stuff in there man :P. Don't stop keepin it ILL and ABOVE standards man. Peace.. and love. :P.
Check my OMs..
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btw I agree with sir headless, some of the rhymes are too forced and you really need to twist the pronounciation to get them. Overall though mostly nice stuff.
Check my OMs..
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Yeah yeah, cool man...Thanks, lol. Yeah, when I said 'no one knows about Hip Hop, where I live'...I meant that literally. Except you. But you don't live that near to me. Watch I might audio this on some beat...and we'll see what you think...Maybe some alterations needed. But, thanks for the heads up. Peace 'n' love, man.
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You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...
and i get a lot saying...Originally Posted by Paraciite
"Your 13 and write like that?!" (even though i turned 14 a couple days ago)...
and yeah, i feel you on that one, no one around here listens to true hip hop..its all that fuckin T-Pain, Plies, Lil Wayne, Akon garbage that they call Rap...it's fuckin ridiculous, i used to live in Queens but not anymore. it sucks.
I don't give a fuck. End of story.
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