Shut'em Down

[Goldeneye]

A track I fuxed with tonight with my boy. I cut the first verse, and we split the second. Hook and beat done by Zone Beats.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9084613


Links.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...506/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...570/index.html

[Goldeneye]

Up for feedback still.

[.Bullet.]

[soundclick]9084613[/soundclick]

Sounds dope. Nothing bad I can say about it. What effect you use on the first verse, a slight walkie talkie?

[Goldeneye]

Nah I'm using Cool Edit Pro 2.1, and what I did for the verses that I did (First, second half of second) is just record the track, then record it again with it. After doing some editing, I make one quieter than the main track. It's a basic trick used called a double if I'm not mistaken. Sometimes on a chorus it works best doing this three time (a triple) and then the two that aren't the main cut, you can make them a tad quieter, then fade one all the way left, and the other all the way right for better surround type sound.

Thanks for the feed though man.

[.Bullet.]

Yeuh no doubt. lol yeuh I know what that is, it's called "stacking". To me it sounds like there's some effect on it. Or just 2 completely different mics.

[Goldeneye]

Uppin one more time.

[BozKurt]

Dope famz

[Oranges]

I enjoyed the listen, yeah I can see that I really need to up my quality. I thought the beat was good, streetsweeper type stuff. I dont mind the autotune when it's done right like on the hook here. Your boy was just startin to get hotted up too when he dropped out halfway in the second verse.....Not that I minded your verse just his 'second verse' intro left me as a listener feeling a lil dry, after he started it off fairly well. Keep an eye out for my next drop prolly towards the end of this coming week.

[Goldeneye]

Thanks for the feed. Yeah I agree on him droppin out. We had a setup where I was doing the opening of the first and he was doing the second half, then it was a flip for the second verse, but he couldn't get back to finish, so I just did the whole first.

Yeah man I'll be on the lookout for your next track bro, keep up the work.

[LEWSHiS]

word. i dont really like the hook but your verse on first is tough. ya homie first on the second sounds good to ya'll voices work good togather. nice post holmes.

[Goldeneye]

Givin this one more up for the win

[SoLaRfIvE]

listenin

flow-was decent not too bad not amazing but its straight
lyrics-were mad predictable but that aint a bad thing for this type of track
presence-dope
delivery-dope

2nd verse
flow-i like how it switches throughout the verse a lil bit, id suggest goin harder wit the changes in ur flow
lyrics-same as above
presence-dope
delivery-dope

overall this is really marketable, that dont make it dope, but if your going for that then it fits what you were trying to do. good shit, i can mos def see this shit on the radio