Where im from (wordplay)

[SBooGy]

BEAT TRACKS PRO FIGHTR SO TIGHTR
STR8 FIRE NO LIGHTER CANT SEE ME,
GHOST WRITER MOST HYPER WHERE IM
FROM IN THE WINTER THEY GOT THEM
SUMMER HAMMERS FOUND MISSN NO
QUESTION AND U DONT WANNA ANSWER
BODIES FOUND IN MID PASTURE TIED
TO THE BED CAPTURED FROM WHAT U
SAID AFTER YOU GOT YA HEAD FRACTURED
NOW YOU DEAD CASPER YOU OFF THE GRID
PASTORS OVER A DEAD BASTARD ROUND
HERE NIGGAS SIN TO WIN LIFE BEGIN
THEN ENDS TIMBALANDS DRINKN GIN
AND WINE BUT NOBODYS EVA GENUINE U
CAN GRIN WIT THEM NEXT THING YOURE
IMPRISONED IN TRUST ME NIGGA DAT KINDA
LIFE DONT EVEN "SUIT" A BUSINESSMEN

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...126/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...119/index.html

[sir headless]

I had some big problems with reading this piece, also the flow fell off a few times. I think the piece would be better if you change some things (vocab). Just edit it..

FB http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...176/index.html

[SBooGy]

uppin...

[DarksideBoy]

I liked it but i was a lil all over the place i also had some problems reading it but it was a good piece

Fb. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...192/index.html

[SBooGy]

uppin...