‎4|20 vs Capnpass

[Capnpass]

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[4|20]

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[4|20]

First time in, take him higher than hippies and let him fall like a Rain Drop.
Spit shit sharper than Krueger blades fuck around get ya head cropped.
Im that type of dude to smile in ya face and hit ya hit a backside melee,
dont get happy && dont get gased, Cause thats a deadly combination once I put this flame to ya ass.
You scum to me, yea I know it sounds rude. Leave you in the obituary.
Me? Im jus todays breaking news.
I doubt I lose, I own you dude, Hard bars gareentee I can bag Double U
I checked out ya other battles and ya elementary rhymes didnt even begin to impress me.
Leftee, but I spit it righter than cheatsheets Wit a whip and a prayer you still couldnt beat me!!

[Capnpass]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...135/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...995/index.html

I figured he wouldn't show up, but instead hes "choking"//
I lit this kid like coals-in-a-closed-pit hes still smoking!//
Whenever your rhyme finds the line it goes in, warn-me-please//
This kid posts killer jibberish as if we were learning-chinese//
Imaginative serial at loose: missing one thing a word or his killer at lunch?//
It takes more than a murderer to take spoons fulls of milk of some "CAPNs"-Crunch//
Face it kid your left blank as your start up screen//
I ate through like a worm bot startin on a brand new "E-machine"//(walmart special)
Lets finish this with one less newbie, i guess there'll be plenty//
Whenever the coroner showes up and ask time of death "UHHH i guess its four twenty"//

[Capnpass]

uppin'

[Marnos]

4/20 you need to study up on some battles, i didnt see anything
quotable fro you and to be honest it seems like Cap got more
knowledge than you in that regard-

vs

i wasnt really feelin any of your lines Cap, maybe the chinese line
as a personal cos some of 420's spit seemed that way, and possibly
the closer, but its obvious your attempts at punches were better.


v/Cap

[Malice]

4/20: Didnt really have any intricate punches really was lackin, nothing really quotable for you, your best line was prob your closer, flow was pretty good until you start trying to stretch lines and what not, work on some wordplay, more personal punches

CapN:

I figured he wouldn't show up, but instead hes "choking"//
I lit this kid like coals-in-a-closed-pit hes still smoking!//
decent opener, personal
Whenever your rhyme finds the line it goes in, warn-me-please//
This kid posts killer jibberish as if we were learning-chinese//
multi, thats good, other than that average punch
Imaginative serial at loose: missing one thing a word or his killer at lunch?//
It takes more than a murderer to take spoons fulls of milk of some "CAPNs"-Crunch//
decent concept, but you stretched the line big time trying to deliver it
Face it kid your left blank as your start up screen//
I ate through like a worm bot startin on a brand new "E-machine"//(walmart special)
no
Lets finish this with one less newbie, i guess there'll be plenty//
Whenever the coroner showes up and ask time of death "UHHH i guess its four twenty"//
wording was a bit off but the concept was nice, ill like that you stepped outside the obvious weed punches and went a diff direction

Breakdown
i see some potential for some elevation into a pretty good battler from 420, but as for this battle he didnt really make any attempts in the wordplay department, once he starts incorperating that he could be real solid, CapN had some original ideas, some forced lines in a couple spots but he opened strong and finished pretty strong

V/CapN

[Will-EYE-Am]

4|20 your shit was super basic you rhymed and the puches werent hittin

capn had good flow and wordplay with better punches as well



Vote Caapn

[jay hype]

4/20
First time in, take him higher than hippies and let him fall like a Rain Drop.
Spit shit sharper than Krueger blades fuck around get ya head cropped.
nope ...no feelin ya opener
Im that type of dude to smile in ya face and hit ya hit a backside melee,
dont get happy && dont get gased, Cause thats a deadly combination once I put this flame to ya ass.
weak
You scum to me, yea I know it sounds rude. Leave you in the obituary.
Me? Im jus todays breaking news.
I doubt I lose, I own you dude, Hard bars gareentee I can bag Double U
na fam ya word'n is all off...but okay multi's if it was hott
I checked out ya other battles and ya elementary rhymes didnt even begin to impress me.
Leftee, but I spit it righter than cheatsheets Wit a whip and a prayer you still couldnt beat me!!
weak closer

capnpass
I figured he wouldn't show up, but instead hes "choking"//
I lit this kid like coals-in-a-closed-pit hes still smoking!//
ok opener nothing special
Whenever your rhyme finds the line it goes in, warn-me-please//
This kid posts killer jibberish as if we were learning-chinese//
lmao ...feelin that
Imaginative serial at loose: missing one thing a word or his killer at lunch?//
It takes more than a murderer to take spoons fulls of milk of some "CAPNs"-Crunch//
..???
Face it kid your left blank as your start up screen//
I ate through like a worm bot startin on a brand new "E-machine"//(walmart special)
Na
Lets finish this with one less newbie, i guess there'll be plenty//
Whenever the coroner showes up and ask time of death "UHHH i guess its four twenty"//
weak closer

Vote= Capnpass

[Novade]

Whenever your rhyme finds the line it goes in, warn-me-please//
This kid posts killer jibberish as if we were learning-chinese

vs

nothing

Vote=capn
better verse...still weak, but was better then 20's...both need to elevate and learn to direct punches harder, if not the battle will just be boring and get slept on, as shown....elevate both