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Eye to Eye Kontact
Straight Skillz
Drop 10 lines
Got two hours
Yea check in first
ahaha...ummmm check
Here's the drop, non deniable this premy needs proof
Out of the womb he gets blasted with skillz thru the roof
Im over ya head bro, similar to that of barbors with clippers
burnin thru ya sensitive skin, leavin straight edges red as clifford
You cant doubt me or ignore the fact ya moms still out scouting
Tryna prove im ya pops without dna re routing, you're lousy
All pearls bitch,simple put you're about to get clammed shut
dude's all bowels
Without a dollar bill to wipe his shitty crud
When i leave, ill treat you to a tip for ya dry lines and cold words
Or
maybe ghostwrite for you,ill be Swazey and you'll play Goldberg
10 ...im out
FUCK WHAT YOU THINK! :vanja:
Creational Damage
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| Text Emcee | Question. | OG LOC | Mr. Mojo Risin | YDK |
Adept The Euphuist|Eye to Eye Kontact
You weak fuck.. I win.
Chump no one wants to be around a text flunk, so go home punk
ya bars a pile of junk...
...but what one think of as trash is another man's home and bunk
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He like to get wasted and starts fights... an i like to punch-drunks
so him battling me's right up our alley KO
Chump no one wants to be around a text flunk, so go home punk
ya bars a pile of junk...
...but what one think of as trash is another man's home and bunk
.
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He like to get wasted and starts fights... an i like to punch-drunks
so him battlin me's beneficial to both, get to KO two things at once
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All wack fucks should be banned, but your an exception to that rule
u give us the fuel to practice our ridicules like this shit's high school
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You win... APRIL FOOLS! n yea that shit late, but so are ya punches
^ could swing...
n i still have time to roll a blunt, smoke, n get somen fah the munches
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I beat u till u blue like that avatar character while u cryin momma boy
punches move ya body like a android, head deployed n body destroyed
KO
Vote please.. I'll vote back.
bump
eye to eye contact
Here's the drop, non deniable this premy needs proof
Out of the womb he gets blasted with skillz thru the roof
could have came with a better opener but deent
Im over ya head bro, similar to that of barbors with clippers
burnin thru ya sensitive skin, leavin straight edges red as clifford
over ya head barber line was hot prolly ya best punchline
You cant doubt me or ignore the fact ya moms still out scouting
Tryna prove im ya pops without dna re routing, you're lousy
again nothing special but decent concetp
All pearls bitch,simple put you're about to get clammed shut
dude's all bowels
Without a dollar bill to wipe his shitty crud
the pearls and clammed shut reference wit bowels was nice pretty decent meta
When i leave, ill treat you to a tip for ya dry lines and cold words
Or
maybe ghostwrite for you,ill be Swazey and you'll play Goldberg
[B][I]decent concept but not really a knockout closer or anything but still hit ok
straigh skills
Chump no one wants to be around a text flunk, so go home punk
ya bars a pile of junk...
...but what one think of as trash is another man's home and bunk
.pretty weak opener def could have put sumthin better together
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He like to get wasted and starts fights... an i like to punch-drunks
so him battlin me's beneficial to both, get to KO two things at once
.nothing special here either, decent punchdrunk ref but not to complex
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All wack fucks should be banned, but your an exception to that rule
u give us the fuel to practice our ridicules like this shit's high school
.this was ok but not using really any personals or multis
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You win... APRIL FOOLS! n yea that shit late, but so are ya punches
^ could swing...
n i still have time to roll a blunt, smoke, n get somen fah the munches
.
.
I beat u till u blue like that avatar character while u cryin momma boy
punches move ya body like a android, head deployed n body destroyed
ok closery decent multi at end but nothing that hot
neither came really that hard. def could have been a much better battle.
id have to say ima give it to eye to eye. his a a lil more structure and and creativity. better opener and closer and had a lil more multis and metas.
both could have put in personals know none used really
winner eye to eye
can't poll vote but i can put in my two cent
eye to eye you have alot better skills than that i can already tell, you were weak for most of it, but you pulled off the winnin' punches:
burnin thru ya sensitive skin, leavin straight edges red as clifford
When i leave, ill treat you to a tip for ya dry lines and cold words
Or
maybe ghostwrite for you,ill be Swazey and you'll play Goldberg
Those killed it, but the rest of your verse needed more work.
Straight skillz Keep on it, theres potential, you tried to rhyme to much..
the word is god.... Eye to Eye Knotact = Victor
Like an armless man in a rowboat
You couldn't handle the paddling
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bump, and the polls people ....use them
FUCK WHAT YOU THINK! :vanja:
Creational Damage
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| Text Emcee | Question. | OG LOC | Mr. Mojo Risin | YDK |
Adept The Euphuist|Eye to Eye Kontact
uppin
FUCK WHAT YOU THINK! :vanja:
Creational Damage
Verbal Hologram | Calvin Kold | KnowP | DJKingDavid
| Text Emcee | Question. | OG LOC | Mr. Mojo Risin | YDK |
Adept The Euphuist|Eye to Eye Kontact
I'd call this a tie, neither battler really did enough for me to call a winner... couple nice punches here and there but overall nothing specia stood out for me.
tie.
ok you guys both have potential, here's the thing with eye kontact, if you had better structure the win would be yours.
and Siq man that was better structure but it seems to me you need elevation in multi's.
so honestly I'd say its even steven, sorry.
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