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Last edited by Slowhands; April 18th, 2010 at 03:51 PM
Last edited by The Archetype; April 19th, 2010 at 01:15 PM
I went 16...
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
5%ers to NBA. Even with the change we see you're lame
Slow couldn't fit either so he recruited people that could live up to the name
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
The movie Jarhead mirrors his life but instead of issuing a brand
Slow tried to get his platoon to get tattoos... that'd match his tramp stamp
So don't claim you're fucking dimes. We both know you don't man
Cuz if a bitch gives him the digits... it's just the middle ones on both hands
Slow's bitch is fat as shit. No tricks when I say that she's a whale
They say the camera adds 10 pounds... her pic alone adds that to the scale
Whether you're serving the country or not I have no reason to be impartial
Arch will leave Slow swimming with the fishes... /noBrandonMarshall
Fuck a battle. I'll beat his ass. Watch this fag fold under pressure
Fist'll have his facial structure collapsing like Haitian architecture
...blah...
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
this guys a riot yall, hows this little girl gonna manage to spar w/ slow
when a bone to pic ...turned into him posing in his daughters clothes
this your second shot at slow, what makes u think you'll touch the belt
you'll never be that lucky, BITCH! ...even if i said "go fuck yourself"
n who let you mod? this fags spreadin FL to the league with gayness
we wanted to boycott <-- arch wanted it as his sleeping arrangements
niggas at his peak of lameness, give rap a rest n stick with your medic job
cause closest you'll ever come to ill,
...is when asked "does this look infected Doc?"
always been less than hot, being champs too much for the kid to manage
i only let you in Nets Best Artisits ..the way your known to hit a canvass
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
your hopeless kid, text your done on audio i think its Grind Time ...to quit
(insert dope closer) ......because i didn't feelk the need to write the shit
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
nice.
5%ers to NBA. Even with the change we see you're lame
Slow couldn't fit either so he recruited people that could live up to the name
not bad.
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
lol. dope.
The movie Jarhead mirrors his life but instead of issuing a brand
Slow tried to get his platoon to get tattoos... that'd match his tramp stamp
not feeling it.
So don't claim you're fucking dimes. We both know you don't man
Cuz if a bitch gives him the digits... it's just the middle ones on both hands
decent attempt.
Slow's bitch is fat as shit. No tricks when I say that she's a whale
They say the camera adds 10 pounds... her pic alone adds that to the scale
decent.
Whether you're serving the country or not I have no reason to be impartial
Arch will leave Slow swimming with the fishes... /noBrandonMarshall
weak.
Fuck a battle. I'll beat his ass. Watch this fag fold under pressure
Fist'll have his facial structure collapsing like Haitian architecture
eh, iffy closer.
your verse started off strongly then fell off towards the end. seems like you ran outta steam.
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
eh, decent opener.
this guys a riot yall, hows this little girl gonna manage to spar w/ slow
when a bone to pic ...turned into him posing in his daughters clothes
haha. not bad.
this your second shot at slow, what makes u think you'll touch the belt
you'll never be that lucky, BITCH! ...even if i said "go fuck yourself"
eh, decent.
n who let you mod? this fags spreadin FL to the league with gayness
we wanted to boycott <-- arch wanted it as his sleeping arrangements
iffy.
niggas at his peak of lameness, give rap a rest n stick with your medic job
cause closest you'll ever come to ill,
...is when asked "does this look infected Doc?"
not bad.
always been less than hot, being champs too much for the kid to manage
i only let you in Nets Best Artisits ..the way your known to hit a canvass
weak.
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
decent.
your hopeless kid, text your done on audio i think its Grind Time ...to quit
(insert dope closer) ......because i didn't feelk the need to write the shit
weak closer.
eh, average verse. i wasn't really wow'd by anything though i found a few punches to be pretty cool.
Vote - Arch. I don't think any of Slow's punches were stronger than Arch's first three bars.
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Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
5%ers to NBA. Even with the change we see you're lame
Slow couldn't fit either so he recruited people that could live up to the name
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell
...vs
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
this guys a riot yall, hows this little girl gonna manage to spar w/ slow
when a bone to pic ...turned into him posing in his daughters clothes
wouldve been a lot better if u had a better setup
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
overall aight battle here.....arch u started off strong i like ya opener nice shit and u followed up wit sum pretty good lines but then u started fading off towards the end...and are u fuckin serious arch ur gonna close it wit a haiti line....slow u had a aight verse too but i felt like u could've worded some of those lines better..ya closer fits perfect wit arch since u dint really need 1 afta he closed his wit a haiti line lol.....arch I'm talkin shit cuz u know ur a lot doper than that...anyway close batte slow would've took this if he had 1 more hard bar but arch started of a lot stronger and his wordin was type better...v/arch
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
So don't claim you're fucking dimes. We both know you don't man
Cuz if a bitch gives him the digits... it's just the middle ones on both hands
Slow's bitch is fat as shit. No tricks when I say that she's a whale
They say the camera adds 10 pounds... her pic alone adds that to the scale
Whether you're serving the country or not I have no reason to be impartial
Arch will leave Slow swimming with the fishes... /noBrandonMarshall
Fuck a battle. I'll beat his ass. Watch this fag fold under pressure
Fist'll have his facial structure collapsing like Haitian architecture
vs.
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
n who let you mod? this fags spreadin FL to the league with gayness
we wanted to boycott <-- arch wanted it as his sleeping arrangements
always been less than hot, being champs too much for the kid to manage
i only let you in Nets Best Artisits ..the way your known to hit a canvass
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
^ line of the battle
damn.. this battle was pretty dope. alotta witty punches.. close as fuck. but i think arche edged it out by just a lil bit.
vote - arche
Arche
Arch Strongest Lines:
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
Dope opener!
5%ers to NBA. Even with the change we see you're lame
Slow couldn't fit either so he recruited people that could live up to the name
feeling this
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
this was sick
Slow's bitch is fat as shit. No tricks when I say that she's a whale
They say the camera adds 10 pounds... her pic alone adds that to the scale
ok
Slows Strongest Bars:
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
LOL
n who let you mod? this fags spreadin FL to the league with gayness
we wanted to boycott <-- arch wanted it as his sleeping arrangements
ok
always been less than hot, being champs too much for the kid to manage
i only let you in Nets Best Artisits ..the way your known to hit a canvass
nice
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
ok could of been a stronger sting tho
This was a close battle imo also till that line from arch killed it i think it was his dont ask dont tell line... love that shit. i felt arch was a lil more creative an more solid with his. dope ass battle
Vote Arch...
OKC
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
vs
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
weak battle
v/arch
Not Impressed
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
5%ers to NBA. Even with the change we see you're lame
Slow couldn't fit either so he recruited people that could live up to the name
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
The movie Jarhead mirrors his life but instead of issuing a brand
Slow tried to get his platoon to get tattoos... that'd match his tramp stamp
So don't claim you're fucking dimes. We both know you don't man
Cuz if a bitch gives him the digits... it's just the middle ones on both hands
Slow's bitch is fat as shit. No tricks when I say that she's a whale
They say the camera adds 10 pounds... her pic alone adds that to the scale
Whether you're serving the country or not I have no reason to be impartial
Arch will leave Slow swimming with the fishes... /noBrandonMarshall
vs
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
this guys a riot yall, hows this little girl gonna manage to spar w/ slow
when a bone to pic ...turned into him posing in his daughters clothes
this your second shot at slow, what makes u think you'll touch the belt
you'll never be that lucky, BITCH! ...even if i said "go fuck yourself"
n who let you mod? this fags spreadin FL to the league with gayness
we wanted to boycott <-- arch wanted it as his sleeping arrangements
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
Great title match. both had great flips and personals all throughout the battle. Ones hit harder and was funnier than the others. no hate; this battle was mad ill
v/ arch
Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
vs
always been less than hot, being champs too much for the kid to manage
i only let you in Nets Best Artisits ..the way your known to hit a canvass
blah battle...REALLY didnt feel slows verse...poor wording hurt him here...
vote - Arch
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Everyone knows that you're beneath me. We think you're wack, it's true
Shit... niggas have noticed that i fell off... and still landed in a match with you
lol, decent
5%ers to NBA. Even with the change we see you're lame
Slow couldn't fit either so he recruited people that could live up to the name
ehh okayyy-ish
And we've all seen your battle with Hush. I doubt that army shit will go well
Cuz a picture speaks a thousand words... and yours violates "Don't ask, Don't tell"
Lol... funny
The movie Jarhead mirrors his life but instead of issuing a brand
Slow tried to get his platoon to get tattoos... that'd match his tramp stamp
eh, okay
So don't claim you're fucking dimes. We both know you don't man
Cuz if a bitch gives him the digits... it's just the middle ones on both hands
decent, I've seen digit flips tho
Slow's bitch is fat as shit. No tricks when I say that she's a whale
They say the camera adds 10 pounds... her pic alone adds that to the scale
decent-ish
Whether you're serving the country or not I have no reason to be impartial
Arch will leave Slow swimming with the fishes... /noBrandonMarshall
ehh okayyy
Fuck a battle. I'll beat his ass. Watch this fag fold under pressure
Fist'll have his facial structure collapsing like Haitian architecture
not feelin it...
vs
ya net career has tanked, now i'm gonna bring it to a grinding hault
arch couldnt serve a body shot....if his fuckin setups were limes n salt
hmm.. okay
this guys a riot yall, hows this little girl gonna manage to spar w/ slow
when a bone to pic ...turned into him posing in his daughters clothes
okayyy
this your second shot at slow, what makes u think you'll touch the belt
you'll never be that lucky, BITCH! ...even if i said "go fuck yourself"
nahh
n who let you mod? this fags spreadin FL to the league with gayness
we wanted to boycott <-- arch wanted it as his sleeping arrangements
Lol, okay
niggas at his peak of lameness, give rap a rest n stick with your medic job
cause closest you'll ever come to ill,
...is when asked "does this look infected Doc?"
nope... not feelin it
always been less than hot, being champs too much for the kid to manage
i only let you in Nets Best Artisits ..the way your known to hit a canvass
okay
aint got shit on hands kid, n all the changes you made is just homo bitch
arch The Type ...to drop that shit off his name and still nobody noticed it
aiight-ish
your hopeless kid, text your done on audio i think its Grind Time ...to quit
(insert dope closer) ......because i didn't feelk the need to write the shit
nope..
ehhh.. for me Slow's verse felt lazy.. lacked good concepts.. wording was there.. I just disliked most of the concepts.. where as arch had a few LOL's and some stingers... wasn't into this champ match sorry guys...
vote archetype
Arch wins
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