I made bad decisions when I was a kid.
I learned from mistakes I did.
God by my side could never go wrong.
because of God I'm strong.
everyone feel words coming from my heart.
nothing could tear it apart.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...p/im-ok-426131
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ursting-425114
Last edited by Diamondz; April 8th, 2010 at 05:39 PM
can I have feedback please?
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the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.
its gotta be 16 lines....
FUCK YOU KANVAS I WANTED TO DO IT FIRST!
I don't give a fuck. End of story.
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