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    apples

    I've ate one green apple
    every day for just shy of a decade
    & today I vomitted.

    year after year
    the apple was always there.
    the same mundain routine.

    poppy to a junkie
    sex to a perverse mind
    an apple to my kind.

    the bitter-sweet taste
    eventually lost the ladder
    becoming another bitter bitch.

    like clockwork
    it rose with the morning sun
    my apple.

    wouldn't want to get sick.
    my body in prestine condition,
    or so i had thought.

    today I've become ill
    sick of the same old shit.

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    Re: apples

    I love the metaphorical aspect of this. Trust me... I too have partaken of the same tree

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    Re: apples

    Quote Originally Posted by Lyrical Lazerus View Post
    I love the metaphorical aspect of this. Trust me... I too have partaken of the same tree
    Lol...I think this comment helped me get the poem better. I guess its like a lament of the same old same old that people sometimes experience in their daily lives. Listening to the same safe advice that you get from the same stiff authoritarians that run the world.....thats what I took from it.

    it was short, cynical and comical at the same time, I can dig that combination.
    thanks for the funny, angst-filled read.

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    Re: apples

    word, i guess alot of my writing is cynical and angst-filled, been struggling with drug addiction for some time now i guess its the main inspiration to my writings

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