Sun Kissed Waves

[Lyrikal Diety]

Sun Kissed Waves

Thy moon-less eclipse confides in beauty
within thy lakes and streams of purity.
Damp brush strokes smoothen thy skies,
Yet thou’s richest delight belongs in thou’s eyes;
Possessing prosperity upon hope’s demise.

Art thou fictitious, belonging to a story?
Thou inspiration etches an artist’s glory.
For long hour I shall hasten thy night
to belong in your warmth and sight,
as these long lingers wilt be a times fight.

If thou nourished one drop of ill-joyed thoughts,
Hands reach upon to aid till my heart rots.
For thou is of bright and virtuous reason,
and to cast thou sadness is not but treason.
And I shall be, lest thy slips through the season.

So this is an old poem I rediscovered in my notebook.

[Lyrikal Diety]

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...261/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...100/index.html

[Chuck Diesel]

nice piece i enjoyed this, though i could have done without the old english is it?? dunno if thats the correct terminology for thilst and thys but whatever. regardless the imagery in this is what stood out to me most. not a bad piece at all man. keep it up

[Lyrikal Diety]

Lol. Yeah like i said. Rediscovered it. It was a challenge, I think? Writing in shakespearen tongue.. Or something like that.
Thanks for the feed though.

Uppin'

[Cinizter]

Thy moon-less eclipse confides in beauty
within thy lakes and streams of purity.
Damp brush strokes smoothen thy skies,
Yet thou’s richest delight belongs in thou’s eyes;
Possessing prosperity upon hope’s demise.

Liked those lines....could've done without the thou's and the thy's but it was still well-written. The topic is really tranquil and the verse sets a serene tone that really rolls off the tongue well.

nice piece. Maybe the next piece we see from you could be something you wrote more recently.