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    Language Poem

    Language Poem




    I want to rape your body of work
    I want to play Russian roulette
    I want to rush in like a fool
    I want to fool my betters
    Crimson letters dipped in syrup
    Under his breath he said, I'll fuck her
    So what, don't care. I have no libido
    I have no how whatchamacallit
    I’m a downer, loser, misfit
    This kid is alone
    Alone in his head
    Where it rains
    A chip off the old block
    They say I need help
    I say I need a backstage pass
    I need someone to harass
    Over rainbows
    Under rooftops
    Around corners
    Good guys finished first today
    Its opposite day
    Its novelty in May
    Don’t fuck with this 80’s baby
    By-product of I don’t give a fuck ideology
    I’m an idiot, I’m an American’t
    I walk your street corners at night hungry
    And you wonder why I’m a terrorist
    Liberate me
    Sedate me
    Open my already open wounds
    Close this chapter
    Hand me my adapter
    I'm the fixer
    The man with the golden chalice
    Drink my blood
    Drink my soul
    It’s milk as an energy drink
















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    Re: Language Poem

    up?.

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    Re: Language Poem

    cool read, had a real dark feel to it which i appreciated.

    Good guys finished first today
    Its opposite day
    Its novelty in May
    Don’t fuck with this 80’s baby
    By-product of I don’t give a fuck ideology
    I’m an idiot, I’m an American’t
    I walk your street corners at night hungry
    And you wonder why I’m a terrorist

    was really feeling that little segment. overall good piece filled with alot of emotion in contrast with not so much imagery. which gave me the impression it was really coming from the heart. liked this man keep writin

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