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    Journey to Matrix Reborn

    JOURNEY TO MATRIX REBORN

    Kryptonite dwells here,
    between you and me for now,
    will she make a move.

    When angels cry I embark on a trip to find food for thought
    I'ma a trickster In true form, my original self can't be bought
    Losing myself in distorted reflections thinking war is poetic
    The piece I wrote between classes turned out to be pathetic
    Its a prelude to a grave, I've baptized minds in my ink
    The struggle to admire the way western minds think
    Shadows drown into the plot of twirling madness
    I'm writing a poem without words to slay my inner-sadness
    Been on quests to find balance but its truly hard to find
    I've been the patron that won't shut up in the theatre of the mind
    All I need is God to save me, the atheists are cold and unforgiving
    Put the children of this generation to sleep, then we'll start liivng
    An uncommon soul permeates my every written ode
    The breeze that brought us together went sweeping down the road
    I'll give you racism, prejudice and hate as shown on TV
    With no panoramic views you'll feel this writer's pain in 3D
    I've put water in a hourglas and watched time turn to quicksand
    Cried so many tears in the rain with bloodstains on my wristband
    Come with me into the matrix 3000 we'll decipher unwritten codes
    My straigh-jacket sings songs about being lost in rock n' roll

    The paperback angels will fall, becoming sinful and unwanted
    My silver-bullet will seek repentance from the mannequin republic

















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    no bed of roses-spokenbohemian

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    Re: Journey to Matrix Reborn

    The way u put a picture to this and all got me thinking it'd me some twisted cryptic write and I started exploring with my dissection kit ready. lol.
    Your flow is def poetic. You had good vocabulary in each sentence, I just felt like they dint blend into each other well enough for me to look at the whole thing as one connected poetic piece.
    Peace.

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    Re: Journey to Matrix Reborn

    The way u put a picture to this and all got me thinking it'd me some twisted cryptic write and I started exploring with my dissection kit ready. lol.
    Your flow is def poetic. You had good vocabulary in each sentence, I just felt like they dint blend into each other well enough for me to look at the whole thing as one connected poetic piece.
    Peace.

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