Push Back -- Stezieb (Gangsta Joint)

[Stezieb]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...553/index.html
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Week 4 -- Push Back -- Stezieb
Rapbattles.com Bring the Noise Tournament 2010
Song Topic: Exhausted Clout

Define: Clout

1.)It means crazy respect, u strike fear in the hearts of scrubs.

2.)To have strong influence and have the respect of peers. See swag.

3.)The ability to set trends

4.)The way one carries him/herself

UrbanDictionary.com

Turn this one way up...

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Lyrics

Hook
Got my back against the wall...it's like a nightmare...
Things are heated...there's about to be a fight here...
I earned respect...make sure you got that clear...
Time is up....what the fuck...I just got here...

Step in my realm...you'll just get knocked down...
You should ask around....if ya fucking new in town...
Cause I run shit...you better run quick...
Disrespect me again....you fucking punk bitch...
See I earned mine...flipped the hood grind...
Hustled every day and night...and withstood time..
Came from nothin....with nothin...but now it's my turn...
Pushin bass and killing beats to get my voice heard...
I got mad clout...you couldn't stand out...
Jockin trends that I set....infectin brains like mad cow...
Till I black out...or maybe pass out...
Make a move...and i'll have to knock your ass out...

Hook

What the fuck is this? You rollin with an entourage?
Ask around you'll find i'm cold as fucking haagen daz...
Kid quick you with him? ...Thought we was tight son...
Rode strapped and had your back on that night run...
Now you wanna to fight some?
That path..who put you on the right one?
You wouldn't have a life....if... I didnt provide one...
Think twice...you may have packed to much weed in them blunts
Ya'll need back the fuck up...... or show me some love...
I never burnt a bridge...that's why you respect the name..
Turn my homies against me...dude are you insane?
You say it's time for a change....like it's all just game...
I Couldn't see you in my shoes....if I was rockin some frames...

Hook

2..1..3 like Warren G....brotha damn what's next?
Pound for pound I'll take you fuckers...and I roll with a vest...
I'll cut you faster than ya name...when you calling collect..
And I ain't never been the type to show a faggot respect...
All alone...and that's something... i didn't expect...
Haven't checked but I'm sure that my face is a wreck...
Tastin' blood...but no clue as to where it's coming from...
Sirens blare... visions blurred...as you take off and run...
Try to get to my feet...but feeling weak...can barely stand...
Nearly lost my life...I just don't understand...
I'm a grown ass man...just trying to push some tracks...
Never thought I'd see the day when the hood would push back...

Hook

[.Bullet.]

Sounds alright, I don't like the adlibs, you don't need that many in your verse, same with the dubs, or just turn them down alot.

[Cven Blackout]

i agree with the adlibss...


the track overall is very polished..i liked it but you should do a more topical track, that says something

[callabo]

pretty good but yeah tha adlibs make is sound like someone in tha background is talking to you, not like it's you. but other than that i like it. i'm not really feeling tha hook but it aint bad. overall pretty dope

[pdareal]

ok checking..
beat is ok...
1st verse:good shit...nice flow and liked the flow...presence is impressive..nice delivery...you flowed as smooth as a fuck..shit very impessive..and nice vocals....keep it up
2nd versek for me..flow was good...tight verse..keep it up homie..try more on delivery...
3rd versek..nice one..flowed well...shit impressive.....presence ok...
hook was real dope...man i liked this shit..
you the same type of rapper i wanted to collab with..
check my sghit and reply a pm to me abt the collabo....
rtf here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...047/index.html

[Stezieb]

Thanks for all the feed thus far....this was my 2nd attempt at a hook by myself, EVER. I don't really like doing them, and I can't sing for shit but I'm trying to get it down and be well rounded, and it's required for the tournament anyway.

As for the Ad-libs/Doubles, this was my 1st real attempt at them, I thought I kind of went overboard, but fuck it, they were fun to do...I'll tone it down in the future. =)

I'm game for collabs, but realistically probably in a 2-3 weeks.

[pdareal]

yeah yeah...2-3 weeks..........

[Stezieb]

yeah yeah...2-3 weeks..........

Well realistically it depends on if this track can pull me through to the next round of the BTN Tournament or not....Then I kind of want to re-record, and properly mix my tracks from the 3 previous weeks so that they are not something that i"m not really proud of.

Then I have to re-record my vocals for a Collab track that Keebs, Cyrious and me have been working on for like a month. I accidently deleted all of my session and they are both done now.

So yes, and sorry, realistically it would be 2-3 weeks, maybe even 4 weeks. I work full time, and squeeze this in just when I can. Thanks for the feed though, hit me up on PM in a week to see where I'm at.

[jamesfig92]

Hmm This songs alright...The beat isent the best i wasent really feelin it,your quality is pretty good that impressed me, the lyrics really good but they were kind of random gangster stuff, you got a east coast vibe almost and nice delivery..hook was okay i wasent feelin it that much

overall you got a decent track man

[Cven Blackout]

feed back plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...642/index.html

[Stezieb]

uppin

[Damz]

Dubs need turned down, Ad libs way too many.
Flow is hot. Flow is hot.
Energy is nice . Nice track.
Peep "So Nice Ft. Dee"

[Stezieb]

Uppin for more feedback....please and thanks

[Iconn]

im not gonna beat a dead horse here with the libs etc...

careful saying shit like "imma grown ass man" on wax like that if you aint dudes will come through and murder ya with feed with quality and delivery of this nature. nah mean ? however....you do have skill bro and props for posting yer script...shows you have nothing to hide and i respect that. stay at it.

[Nahlidge]

This was nice. I think it has potential to be better. Like on these types of beats. With that type of hook. I think you need layers. Make it BIG. To get people hype. If you get what I`m sayin`. Verses were straight. Liked the switch up in flow from verse to verse. Kept the track movin`. But yea. I think build the hook up more and it`ll be official. I think you coulda sounded more comfortable on the last verse too.