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    Bitch

    My ex-girlfriend wanted me to crawl on my knees
    Grabbed the bitch and hit her and hung her on trees
    Could feel the cold windy breeze, she was a tease
    She left me for some stupid fuckin guy called Nick
    Everytime I have a feeling that I'm going to be sick
    Nick I'm going to kill that prick, he's got a small dick
    I choose this girl over my friends how stupid was that
    She was acting like a very stuck-up spoilt fucking brat
    She ran in front of me and her body went fucking splat
    I loved Gina so much she was my fucking my girl,my girl
    But what fucking happend she had to fuck my fucking world
    I wish I was living in a dream-world where our love twirled
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    Re: Bitch

    Now syllables are alright.. Flow was Ok.. But you seemed Agressive at some places..
    But now Its Decent..
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    Re: Bitch

    Thank you for your comment, really appreciate it. Yes thinking about her makes me angry I loved her she treat me like shit.
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    Re: Bitch

    411 nothing wrong with being aggresive..more showing of emotion which is good
    anyways man im studying and dont really wanah get distracted so i promise im be back with feed for this once i'm done

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    Re: Bitch

    Take your time Raw Talent
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