Nothing Is As It Seems - [k]onquerer And Spitfull

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[k]onquerer

Stuck runnin on this violent streak,
Actions so loud you can't silence me.
I dream of angels but live with demons,
Wings pure white, eyes reflecting Satan.
Beam me up and toss me out like trash,
Garbage collectors raidin through my golden stash.
My bodys stuck seizing up off the ground,
Eyes are black and ears can't hear a sound.
Dark shadows overtake and cover my body, it's guilt.
Every single plant and flower around me, just wilts.
Dear Mary is just tryin to keep me calm and collected,
But this pain and misery is making me feel neglected.
Tired of feeling rejected, just dream of being accepted.
Resurrected into a new person, but still gettin arrested.
This picture I'm painting is worth more than 1000 words,
At birth I was I injected with a rhythmic fatal curse.
And I can't stop spittin, in fact I vomit
Lyrically sick and brain swelling, can't stop it.
But I keep gripping the mic til some bitch has to rip it from me,
And that'll happen when pigs fly, but then again nothing is as it seems



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7558269
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7554674

[Will-EYE-Am]

haha nice once again [k]onquerer got the vocab. first couple lines were missin the flow.

never actually heard you throw down but cool. U guys viewed the title differently i thinkbut cool.

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haha nice once again [k]onquerer got the vocab. first couple lines were missin the flow.

never actually heard you throw down but cool. U guys viewed the title differently i thinkbut cool.

ye.

[Mr.Schizzy]

I like this piece, it seem very orginal to me
I like the flow to and seem to say constient
threw out, I would give the verse 1 a overall
6 out of 10 and the verse 2 a 7 out of 10.
But anyways it was good piece.

[[k]onquerer]

Uppin' for feed.

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For Some

[143]

The collab was a good one. some of it did repeat and took some of the umph from the drop. (got tired of "vomit") nice imagery going and the cohesiveness was there. Thought it could have gone a little moe in depth. It seems that yall was just scratching the surface with this and there was some more heat to bring. OVERALL 7/10...

Feed on my drop

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