It's Nothing ; I'm Nothing

[4FORTY]

I believe that I can weave a masterpiece
stiffened through tears but honestly
my mind just seems to lack what we
have been in search of for years.
NOTHING.
now thats drastic especially when
hearing a person such as myself
speak causing you to repeat
"is that it?! is that really one of his
many distorted beliefs?!"
listen; I'm sorry, therefore allow
me to be restoring the sweet
image which was painted to keep
us all blind when risking and
taking so many chances
are we suppose to think
it's all FINE? Not at all; WHY?
BECAUSE it's NOTHING
like these balls of flame in thy hell
a place where i fell on my knees
only to notice my eyes swell
up with tears but that too is
nothing, such as myself.

When I keep that in mind it's
almost as if all the pain is withdrawn,
tho I thought of it as nothing until the day
it was gone.

[Cinizter]

I believe that I can weave a materpiece
stiffened through tears but honestly
my mind just seems to lack what we
have been in search of for years.
NOTHING.

lol....not that it matters much but you spelled masterpiece, "Materpiece".
yeah but about the piece. I think it was good I liked that it was kinda of this well-structured, well-written stoic piece. At least thats what i get from it.

I think you used a unique rhymescheme and you structured it in a way that made the rhymescheme even more fun to read and the topic was also onpoint.

nice stuff.

[4FORTY]

thanks again man , look out for more