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Last edited by The Archetype; March 14th, 2010 at 11:12 PM
Last edited by God 0f War; March 14th, 2010 at 11:08 PM
we both agreed to drop sat kenny
and if its cool with arche
rupture cant vote
Last edited by God 0f War; March 13th, 2010 at 11:04 PM
wordage
and whatever stipulation's fine
Last edited by The Archetype; March 13th, 2010 at 11:16 PM
Kenny's fed up w/ the shit. He said he's going to start booting the lame and those who no show
Looks like I get to start it off. This week he has me stomping out a homo
Terrible wording, shitty concepts and a completely fucked up structure
Only decent quotes you've ever made are the fake ones from Hush you used on Rupture
Claiming your verses are weak weekly cuz you rush. I hope you took your time
Cuz we all look at every one of your drops the same way Seyance looks at mine
The gap between us is immense. There's trash in everything you ever wrote
My aim's to win and elevate... he aims for concepts and votes
Usually I'd have punches about your girl but I doubt I'd make anyone a believer
How can I claim to have fucked Bunny when you've never seen her either
With the drama surrounding you every week I would swear your life is this
So God will always be the best, man... cuz he's too much of a loser to wife a bitch
Dude thinks he's dope as shit but you're nothing to stress G
Only people awaiting God of War drop dates are owners of PS3's
I set the standard w/ this text shit. You have no chance to see me Dunce
Bitch I set the Bar... you've just been ducking him for 3 months
Every week I read your battles and I have to admit it War
Your verses leave me feeling Awesome... cuz even his drop this week is better than yours
GoW's into incest. You won't get denial from this cousin kisser
He'll admit that anal's faux pas... then say oral is for his sister
...blah...
arche n his bestfriend LUND is in grindtime lol
nerves have this kid frozen in fear, when im throwin attacks
cuz the way my verses make arctic..........you could ski down the slope in his back
you claim ur better then god, but its not ur true beliefs
cuz the last time u faced divine intervention.....he ko'd u in the 1-2 league
and u dont get pussy, girls wont even show some ass
the only time u'll ever see a bitch arch..........is joining a yoga class
when it comes to LLL ur a have-not, and a never will be man
cuz you have not earned a title...........and i guarantee u never will be champ
ur a doctor not a gangster,u aint known for hurting these dudes
since the the only time u ever gave someone stitches..was the emergency room
ur matches is funny, i laugh everytime u up a post
i dont need to body ur verse..........for them to see ur lines is the butt of a joke
and u act gay on the forums, so theres no reason to feel flattered dude
cuz theres been so many newbies inside of arche..we should name FL after you
and u have to travel for GT, but i know ur down for the long stretch
since ur always going to london...............asking him for punchlines n concepts
you wont ever have a family dawg, ur girls a fuckin hoe
cuz when u gave that bitch a ring.............another man picked up the phone
n when it comes to music im a top threat, its why u aint dropped yet
cuz i will put your whole family in matching coffins..................box set
The gap between us is immense. There's trash in everything you ever wrote
My aim's to win and elevate... he aims for concepts and votes
I set the standard w/ this text shit. You have no chance to see me Dunce
Bitch I set the Bar... you've just been ducking him for 3 months
GoW's into incest. You won't get denial from this cousin kisser
He'll admit that anal's faux pas... then say oral is for his sister
Vs
nerves have this kid frozen in fear, when im throwin attacks
cuz the way my verses make arctic..........you could ski down the slope in his back
and u dont get pussy, girls wont even show some ass
the only time u'll ever see a bitch arch..........is joining a yoga class
you wont ever have a family dawg, ur girls a fuckin hoe
cuz when u gave that bitch a ring.............another man picked up the phone
Not as good as I expected from these two.. Arch the quotables I got from you were mostly average except the Aim bar, I liked that quite a bit... though it feels played..
GoW on the whole your bars were better... the bitch/ring/another man bar was really the LOTB for me... by a lot.
GoW had the consistency and the overall better verse here..
So V/GoW
Terrible wording, shitty concepts and a completely fucked up structure
Only decent quotes you've ever made are the fake ones from Hush you used on Rupture
The gap between us is immense. There's trash in everything you ever wrote
My aim's to win and elevate... he aims for concepts and votes
With the drama surrounding you every week I would swear your life is this
So God will always be the best, man... cuz he's too much of a loser to wife a bitch
GoW's into incest. You won't get denial from this cousin kisser
He'll admit that anal's faux pas... then say oral is for his sister
vs.
and u dont get pussy, girls wont even show some ass
the only time u'll ever see a bitch arch..........is joining a yoga class
ur matches is funny, i laugh everytime u up a post
i dont need to body ur verse..........for them to see ur lines is the butt of a joke
you wont ever have a family dawg, ur girls a fuckin hoe
cuz when u gave that bitch a ring.............another man picked up the phone
n when it comes to music im a top threat, its why u aint dropped yet
cuz i will put your whole family in matching coffins..................box set
This was pretty damn close but either way nothing great jumped out at me here. Consistency was good, but no real fire lines here. I think GoW had a little more swag with his approach but wording was fucked. Arch had some cool ideas but didn't do the best he could with them. It's close but i enjoyed god's a bit more at 2nd look.
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Kenny's fed up w/ the shit. He said he's going to start booting the lame and those who no show
Looks like I get to start it off. This week he has me stomping out a homo
too bland..
Terrible wording, shitty concepts and a completely fucked up structure
Only decent quotes you've ever made are the fake ones from Hush you used on Rupture
haha, so true
Claiming your verses are weak weekly cuz you rush. I hope you took your time
Cuz we all look at every one of your drops the same way Seyance looks at mine
ehhh
The gap between us is immense. There's trash in everything you ever wrote
My aim's to win and elevate... he aims for concepts and votes
played concept
Usually I'd have punches about your girl but I doubt I'd make anyone a believer
How can I claim to have fucked Bunny when you've never seen her either
LMAO
With the drama surrounding you every week I would swear your life is this
So God will always be the best, man... cuz he's too much of a loser to wife a bitch
dope, haven't seen this concept before
Dude thinks he's dope as shit but you're nothing to stress G
Only people awaiting God of War drop dates are owners of PS3's
pretty nice nameplay, wording was good
I set the standard w/ this text shit. You have no chance to see me Dunce
Bitch I set the Bar... you've just been ducking him for 3 months
played concept but decent personal
Every week I read your battles and I have to admit it War
Your verses leave me feeling Awesome... cuz even his drop this week is better than yours
nooooooooope
GoW's into incest. You won't get denial from this cousin kisser
He'll admit that anal's faux pas... then say oral is for his sister
LMFAOOOO, dope wordplay
Vs.
nerves have this kid frozen in fear, when im throwin attacks
cuz the way my verses make arctic..........you could ski down the slope in his back
your verses make him tick..? wierd wording/concept overall
you claim ur better then god, but its not ur true beliefs
cuz the last time u faced divine intervention.....he ko'd u in the 1-2 league
boring name drop, didn't work for me
and u dont get pussy, girls wont even show some ass
the only time u'll ever see a bitch arch..........is joining a yoga class
Uhhh, his names ARC-E-TYPE, how you gonna do an ARC play and a ARCH play? lmao. didn't work
when it comes to LLL ur a have-not, and a never will be man
cuz you have not earned a title...........and i guarantee u never will be champ
sort of hits, not bad
ur a doctor not a gangster,u aint known for hurting these dudes
since the the only time u ever gave someone stitches..was the emergency room
super played concept
ur matches is funny, i laugh everytime u up a post
i dont need to body ur verse..........for them to see ur lines is the butt of a joke
seen similar, wording was wierd
and u act gay on the forums, so theres no reason to feel flattered dude
cuz theres been so many newbies inside of arche..we should name FL after you
lol, nice
and u have to travel for GT, but i know ur down for the long stretch
since ur always going to london...............asking him for punchlines n concepts
another name drop that didn't hit...
you wont ever have a family dawg, ur girls a fuckin hoe
cuz when u gave that bitch a ring.............another man picked up the phone
pretty good
n when it comes to music im a top threat, its why u aint dropped yet
cuz i will put your whole family in matching coffins..................box set
weak concept, shouldn't of used this to close..
I dunno whats happening here, Arch killed it with creativity, all GoW had to me was some decentish violence punches, bad nameplays & bland name drops, Arch had some fresh/dope wordplay, most of his stuff was wording abit weak but when I read both verses it seems Arch hit alot harder on personal tips too.
v/ The ARChetype
wow. 3 votes in the champ match. 1 of which doesnt count.
gow wins 2-0.
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